Title: Start Your Engines

Looking forward to see what happens next and I'd prefer her with John.

Reviewer: tragicheaven Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21 2012 06:38 am

Title: Collision Course

the cop!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2012 12:31 am

Title: Collision Course

Mikhail please.

Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 10:19 pm

Title: Start Your Engines

Mikhail... say no more

Reviewer: Kris Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 10:03 pm

Title: Start Your Engines

 

Reviewer: without a dout: Mikhail, Mikhail, Mikhail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 09:39 pm

Title: Start Your Engines

 

Reviewer: carmen: without a doubt Misha, misha, misha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 09:34 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'm likeing the story, and I think she should have to struggle, because both men want her.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 08:06 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'd prefer her with John. She needs to grow and move on with her life, all she's ever known is the family. The guys have watched over her all her life and will continue to do so regardless of what she does or who she is with. She needs more friends and/or a relationship outside of the family. If you're going to do this based on votes, I guess John doesn't stand a chance then, bad boy wins. I'm sorry I still see this as so wrong him and her sleeping together, when the brothers helped raised this young woman.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 05:56 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'm starting to like John! Buttt oh geez. I think she should have a good time with John at the BBQ. Maybe the brothers start following her to keep an eye on her and discover shes at the bbq with another guy? Then maybe they see hes a cop and get pissed. Tell her she can't see him. Of course she's mad they're telling her what to do so she defies them and creates tension between she and her "brother"? OR.. she decides to keep talking to john only to get info about what the police know about her family? Then later down the line she develops feelings for him? That may give you more options for the story if you take that route.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 04:59 pm

Title: Collision Course

I love Tati and Mikhail together. They're too cute.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 03:39 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'm pleased to finally see Ana and John interact ! It'll be interesting if she could help him fix his Mustang and even more peak his interest this way. I want them to get into a relashionship. But I root for Misha too, so I wouldn't mind a love triangle !

Anyway, thanx a lot for the russian translations,

your faithful reader !

 

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 03:23 pm

Title: Collision Course

I prefer the bad boy for her.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 02:14 pm

Title: Lamborghini vs Squad Car

I loved it mami! I really only get on here to read your story. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: Ameire Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2012 04:00 am

Title: Lamborghini vs Squad Car

finally...!! i've been waiting for an update and gaaah, you have posted pics on Nico & Misha - you choose some sexy beasts! the twins look so damn good, lol! personally i'm all for Misha. i think he and Taty are sizzzzling together and just know once John catches Taty's attention there are going to be explosives going off everywhere, lol!!

thanks for the update - update soon, pleeeaase!!

Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2012 09:39 am

Title: Lamborghini vs Squad Car

This chapter is excellent! I love the story so far. Great characters!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 06:59 pm

Title: Lamborghini vs Squad Car

Where is John's pic? I'm sorry I do not like her being with the twin, not then and not in the future. It seems wrong on so many levels, after having them be her big brother figures and her being raised along side them.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 03:46 am

Title: Lamborghini vs Squad Car

I'm excited for the next chapter already! The twins are super sexy btw!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 02:59 am

Title: Lamborghini vs Squad Car

Ana has a death wish, the next time that those three feel that something is off they need to heed that feeling.  Those men are hot, please don't kill John.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2012 01:59 am

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

When she she going to update this????

Reviewer: BRI Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2012 04:18 am

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

Oh yeah, I definitely like it. And I REALLY like Mikhail. There's just something about that man. And if he's not the love interest, I'm putting a bid in for him to get his own story. Yeah, I like him that much. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 02:49 am

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

I like this. I'm going to have to make sure I come back just to read this. How often do you update?

Reviewer: babygirlsaint Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 02:10 am

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

That cop is goint Tat to get at the family, that ain't cool!!  More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 12:51 am

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

really enjoyed it. next update please

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 06:36 pm

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

love it love it ....want more of it

i want ana to be with misha and not the cop

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 04:10 pm

Title: Foot On the Gas.....

His neighbor, is the princess. He will have to keep himself hidden from her at the race if he is to stay undercover.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 01:26 pm



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