Title: Chapter 3

A few grammatical errors here and there but overall, I really like what I've read. Would love to read more.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 07 2013 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 3

I hate when I read a story where someone finds love then gets a death sentence!!  I love Cameron and Lenny!!  Can we get a miracle?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 07:30 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I like this story so far. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 01:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was really interesting though the first chapter probably needs a little revision and a bit more detail  there's a couple of paragraphs that are a bit too similar and a back story might help 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 08:14 am



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