A few grammatical errors here and there but overall, I really like what I've read. Would love to read more.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2013 01:39 am
I hate when I read a story where someone finds love then gets a death sentence!! I love Cameron and Lenny!! Can we get a miracle?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2012 07:30 pm
I like this story so far. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2012 01:56 pm
That was really interesting though the first chapter probably needs a little revision and a bit more detail there's a couple of paragraphs that are a bit too similar and a back story might help
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2012 08:14 am