I really find it wholly unfair how Darell took it upon himself to dictate their relationship. They might've had a real chance if not for his interference.
And now 4 years later Darell's happy but what about them
Date: March 17 2015 02:27 pm
It took me a couple days to read this story and all I can think is its been 18 chapters and Emrey and Logan are still not together. Why? I can't tell you how disappointed I felt when i read chapter 18 and it said 4 years later. Seriously it's like torture with these characters, their wasting so much friggen time and letting outside influence ruin something that can be a genuine true love. I'm so pissed that Darrell her flipping twin would be so selfish and ruin his sister's happiness. He's a bad brother and even worse friend, who puts conditions on a friendship like that? So just because he was miserable everyone else had to be too, what a jackass. I'm really into this story but I feel like it's a disservice that we the readers are not getting or going to see these perfect people for each other in a relationship. It makes me sad &'pouty and all I can hope is that you update soon with some better progress of Emery and Logan being together. Please I'm DYING here!!!
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed
[Report This]Date: November 24 2014 11:52 am
UPDATE PLEASE!!!! :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 08:10 pm
Missing this, hope to see u soon :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 03:59 am
Her brother is a jerk
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: September 15 2013 03:08 am
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 09:18 pm
I love this story..have been following it since it was first put up. I have a little criticism though. When Emery was using 'make it nasty' and she had all this confidence, even though it was fake, I liked it. The way she acted, I mean. I get that that was high school and I wish she was confident in herself.It's not high school anymore. She has grown up, gone to college and travelled the world. I'd like to see her handle her own against logan. The way he spoke to her was so rude even after what she was going through. It seems that he always has the upper hand and she's always on the receiving end. I wish she was stronger, more confident and like a young woman. Yes, she still has a crush on him and so does he but she should have more control over their interactions. I wish it was a more even playing field. 4 years later, clean slate right?. Those are my thoughts. As I said, I love,love this story.
Reviewer: greencrescent Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 08:05 pm
I spent my whole sick day reading this story and I love it!!! Can't wait to see what going to happened next!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 02:08 am
So glad that Logan and Em's story is still continuing
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 09:45 pm
There is no growth between Emery or Logan individually or together. Without that, it would be like you repeating the first half of the story with an older, not wiser or a more mature Emery.
Reviewer: Jacey Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 03:15 pm
I'm glad you are back!!! I love Logan and Emery and I can't wait for them to finally get together :-)
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 05:52 am
Emery, you had a crush on Logan but now it's love and he loves you too. I really want Darnell to be honest and tell you that he warned Logan against pursing his attraction. Darnell is the reason that you gave that ho Dixon a shot even though you still had feelings for Logan. So good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:41 pm
So glad your back. Great update can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:15 pm
Darnell is tripping, you asked Logan to break your sisters heart. That makes you an asshole in my book Darnell. I feel so bad Emery and Logan how could hurt her like that? I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2013 11:10 pm
OMG! She just broke down, I'm at a loss for words. But happy she wants to act like a mom now :)
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: May 25 2013 09:34 am
Oh my...this is very tearful moment.....finally mother wants to be a mom...I love it....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2013 03:53 pm
Well am hoping things get better for you and your family soon. Am extremely happy that yu updated cause I love this story. I totally love emery and Logan together.I think the mom should talk to emery and sk her about her relationship with Logan before she puts in her two cents. From her point of view you would think that Logan is a dog dat wants to get in Emery's pants but evenhtough he wants to, he's been nothing but a gentleman to her. Plus how the hell yu gonna move to be with your son when he goes to college when your daughter needs you more?? smh lol!!! Anyways hope yu update soon :)
Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2013 02:15 am
I'm truly happy to see this update. Eden is finally coming out of her dumbass coma and we find out her side of parts of the past. It only took the threat of losing her child. And what a surprise that she wrote 'Make It Nasty'. I think Emmy really likes Logan for the right reasons but it's gotten lost in all the mess.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2013 06:29 pm
Madea says "Hallelujer"
Thank lawd... she woke up and smelt the coffee damn it Eden. It took your ass so long geez!
At least she realizes it now instead of never. I'm finally happy she's being a mother to both her children.
Great update. It's about damn time for Eden.
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2013 05:12 pm
Wow, Eden does care about her children. She wrote the book that got Logan's attention that I never saw coming. So Logan is in love with Emery but Emery has no idea how she really feels. Emery is nothing like her mother so find out how you really feel about Logan by dating and being his girl. Darrell needs to take a paternity test because it's strange that neither of them remembers that night. I don't believe Cassidy it's all too strange with the whole Logan thing. This situation stinks and Caddish is the skunk. Eden you fool, you find out first if the baby is his then you go from there.
I do hope that your family finds housing soon, dice people in one room is painful!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2013 02:14 pm
CONGRATS on getting into school! You'll love it, I'm sure ;-)
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 08:01 pm
Oh, so now she realizes she didn't ever have a crush on Logan? Yeah, right! That's why she was losing it when she had to go over there ROTFLMFAO loves it!
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2013 05:56 pm
Yeah, oh!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2013 11:01 pm
I love the story, but the only twist I don't like is that she's pregnant. He's probably going to give up college because of her and go back to rapping which he doesn't want to do. Smh...
Reviewer: QueenJay Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 24 2013 03:38 pm