Please update. I really miss this story. The anticipation is just killing me....
Btw how can AJ just leave like that? I hope he gets back 2 her before St. Claire does. Poor Esther she doesn't deserve this.Reviewer: tt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 01:31 am
I'm so upset at AJ! He did all this pushing, all this reassuring that he was down for her no matter what her past would consistent of...yet at the first sign of trouble he runs? How is that fair to Esther? You knew she had walls up for a reason. She let you in and you just proved her right, that you would abandon her. Give her a chance to clear the air before you wash your hands of the situation. You're supposed to be an FBI agent and yet you can't put the very obvious pieces together. Who on earth is afraid of their own mother? you know she's secretive, vindictive, and calculating, is it a far stretch to think perhaps everything that has come out of her mouth isn't to be believed? Also you know Esther has been abused, is kind, loving, and gentle...the exact opposite of her mother. She's innocent, and wants the very simple things in life; also the very opposite of her high profile family. As an FBI agent I really have to question your training right now. Despite the fact that you haven't read her file you should know something is wrong with her family and obviously she's staying away from them for a reason. If you're only going to cause her more grief, if she's going to end up with those evil twisted people again....I just forgive you..no matter how sexy you are. lolReviewer: LittleRedRidingHood Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 07:25 pm
AJ's eye color changed to blue from a moss green??
Other than that its a good read,
Date: January 06 2015 02:25 am
Yes, I loved this chapter!! Its been so long since you updated that I had to start this story over from the beginning but I didn't regret it. I've really missed this story and your surprise update was spectacular!! Please updated soon again 😊Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2015 07:53 pm
Update soon....I'm addictedReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05 2015 05:29 am
so so so so so so so so happy that you're back. And of course you didn't disappointa86;a039;Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 11:10 am
I just happen to see this update and decided to read your story. It is just awesome! I can understand Esther's slow progress because she has been severly traumatized. She is the sensitive one in the bunch and with no parents to protect her left her vulnerable to other predators.
Now with AJ, other than memorizing tags/cars he is truly slow for a FBI agent. He should've read that background report ages ago: when he found out she cuts, after confronting the PI, knowing a car was following her. I tried to chalk it up to him being busy, but reading that report wouldn't have taken 30 mins and he could have faked it when/if she had confided in him.
AJ walking out has crushed an already broken Esther. I guess now she will be at the opening with William after all. If she is pregnant with AJ baby...maybe she will snap out of it when Williams assaults her again and fight back.
I was so into your story I kept looking for 'next' :-).
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 05:38 am
I love this story. It is hard to describe the job I feel everytime you post a chapter. That being said, I have to say that I am honestly worried about how the remainding letters are going to play out. I guess in this chapter, I was wishing for more questions and answers, meaning, this is good opportunity for Ester to open up to AJ and for AJ to ask questions that would put Ester in the frame of mind to making some firm decisions about her future. So for this chapter, that's my most disappointing expectation. What I loved that you did, the mother...brilliant that AJ was able to see her and pick up on her body language. 'Questions'...this chapter should have been three times as long with some amazing clarification but I'm looking foward to you finishing this story with an amazing ending. Happy New Year! and hope to see a new chapter soon.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 03:34 am
I hope we don't have to wait another year for another chapter!Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 01:45 am
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Why is that woman here? William is a sickening individual, I hope he either dies or goes to jail and gets a beating only prison could give him. I love AJ and Esther together. How he's slowly pulling her out of her shell. And showing her how to live life outside of what was shoved in her head. I love how you created a beautifully flawed female protagonist. She's not perfect and has her problems, but is still a likable and lovable character. Great chapter!Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 01:30 am