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Title: H is for Hurricane

I think the next chapter should be up, that's what I'm thinking! LOL! I did notice Esther loosening up and I hope she continues! I can't wait for AJ to show her what real love is!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 08:44 pm
Title: H is for Hurricane

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 08:15 pm
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

I like the story but I'm having a hard time with some of AJ actions. In a way Ester is exchanging one dominanting person  in her life for another. And it is so not cool the way AJ undressed her. Not appropriate a man she doesn't know taking her cloths off while she is sleep. Not good.

 Reviewer: KrisS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 07:54 pm
Title: D is for Determination

luv it!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 07:28 am
Title: G is for Gnashed

ohmygosh this was sooo emotional...I could just make up a picture of the domestic abuse Esther was facing...her ex-husband is so cruel, degrading her womanhood when already she was finding it hard to cope with her infertility...the mental and emotional damage done to this woman seems beyond repair...very well written as always...

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 11:18 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

William is a pitiful excuse for a man

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 05:35 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

U have really good material, but why are all ur chapters short. Even your "long" chapters r basically a regular length. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 02:16 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

My goodness, how much more pain must she endure.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 12:27 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

No wonder she has issues, an abusive mother and husband!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 06:47 am
Title: G is for Gnashed

William is a COWARD, and needs to come up MISSING... I can't believe her so-called mom wants her to go back to this DEMON.

I'm so glad tha AJ is there and I do hope that Esther lets him the the SHOULDER that she needs... and it would be poetic jsutice if Esther got pregnant the first time she and AJ hit the sheets. LOL

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 05:52 am
Title: G is for Gnashed

I'm so glad that Esther escaped from her abusing husband. She badly needs AJ's tender loving care to make her whole again.

Looking forward to your next update. (BTW, it was rather amusing to see Esther, the proper lady, having the guts to call AJ stubborn, nosy and annoying in the last chapter, lol!)

 Reviewer: JustMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 05:04 am
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

OMG I feel so bad for Ester. the way Willam was treating her like its her fault that she is can't have children was horrible. What an ass whole.!

 Reviewer: dope. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 03:17 am
Title: G is for Gnashed

William was an ahole and should be shot on site.  Esther was people pleasure and being told that she was infertile broke her spirit and her mind.  I feel so bad for her but A. J. is going to right some wrongs for her whether or not she wants him to or not.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 09:45 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

You are a good writer but your chapters are not long enough.  With such short chapters you may not get reviews in a timely matter because your readers will wait until you have written several chapter to read your story.

 Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 09:37 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

Oh yeah mommy dearest he just knock her around a little, my a@$. You would put you child in that position to not look bad to the public for shame.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 08:09 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

Great insight!! I hoped it was longer, kind of a sad note to end it, but it shows where she's coming from and I can appreciate that. I'm sorry she had to go through such a rough marriage. Hopefully her life is more bearable since she's met an awesome guy...

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 06:48 pm
Title: G is for Gnashed

That was hard to read, he must be dealt with. Shame on mom for trying to bring her back to this monster. She could not give him a baby, so he beat her almost to death looks like. He must die a slow death, at the hands of AJ or even Esther. No amount of money will get him out of anything if he comes to get Esther this time. So glad she met AJ, she needs someone sane on her side.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 06:16 pm
Title: F is for Family

I hope that Esther climb out of that shell she is in and stand up for herself.  How cold her mother is to want her daughter to go back to an abusive ass.  I'm glad Rosario can stand on her on.  I bet Avery is going through some of the same as Esther because their mother have already shown them they certainly can't come to her.  Where is there dad when these things happen?  Is he also a snub to?

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 12:40 am
Title: F is for Family

I really despise mommy dearest.  I didn't realize that Esther was still married to her monster husband and now her mommie wants her back with the monster just because of what was written in  a gossip paper.  Shameful behavior,  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 11:23 am
Title: E is for Eager

I see he is determined to muscle his way into her life.  Isn't he treating her the same way that her family did by bullying her into doing something she really doesn't want to be doing? Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 11:13 am
Title: D is for Determination

I think that AJ is in way over his head.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 11:11 am
Title: C is for Compromise

Is AJ crazy? Why would he blackmail this poor woman into having dinner with him. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 11:07 am
Title: F is for Family

hate genevieve and esthers family and her so called husband except for rosario..feel so sorry for esther...hope AJ protects her...wish esther would start to trust AJ and let him help her...i want a story on Rosario next...she sounds so exciting and thrilling...avery is extremely boring and lacks character she is like a puppet...

 Reviewer: shani Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 09:35 pm
Title: F is for Family

A.J is great!! Esther needs to realize this soon before her mother tries to get her claws into her!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 07:36 pm
Title: F is for Family

Esther is broken because of the woman that birthed her. gah, what a bitch who never should've had one child. She's f'd them all up. Some more than others.

I'd like to see what you can do with Avery next. She seems the one most under her bio-unit's control. Esther and Rosario both left, even though Mommie Dearest is causing havoc in their lives, at least they've gone. Avery is probably seething with unexpressed anger. And that so-called "man" she married screams all kind of drama.

I'm loving A. J. I didn't realize that Esther was still married. A. J. will not like that.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 08 2012 05:36 pm


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