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Title: P is for Persitance

Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Why is that woman here? William is a sickening individual, I hope he either dies or goes to jail and gets a beating only prison could give him. I love AJ and Esther together. How he's slowly pulling her out of her shell. And showing her how to live life outside of what was shoved in her head. I love how you created a beautifully flawed female protagonist. She's not perfect and has her problems, but is still a likable and lovable character. Great chapter!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 01:30 am
Title: Q is for Questions

Maybe I'm being harsh but I don't feel sorry for Ester. She should have been honest with him and grow some backbone. She is being weak and pathetic. I get that she was abused, but she needs to start standing up for herself and stop letting people walk all over her. Aj has every right to be hurt and even angry. If Ester is not willing to open up, be honest and let him help her, he won't be able to. So I don't blame him for leaving. I'm loosing patience with Ester.She starting to irritate me. And maybe its just me, but I feel like the story is dragging a little bit because I don't sense any progress in Ester. But maybe that's just me.

 Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 12:22 am
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

He saw straight through her mom but he fell for her trap anyways why did he walk out on her before she got her wits so she could tell him the truth. I hope he comes back before it's to late

 Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 08:37 pm
Title: Q is for Questions

I wish Esther grew a backbone and spoke up to AJ about her horrible family... He has done so much for her y cant she pick up the courage to talk with him..at least leave him a note explaining her condition...

 Reviewer: jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 06:53 pm
Title: Q is for Questions

I love this story and so glad you are back! Please update again very soon. 

 Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 04:46 pm
Title: Q is for Questions

Ugh I'm losing patience with Esther. She's so annoying. Tell  AJ what's going on already. 

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 04:43 pm
Title: Q is for Questions

Don't let those pieces of craps break this poor woman down again. She needs AJ

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 04:06 pm
Title: Q is for Questions

The story is dragging, if she was strong enough to run, why is she falling apart? Shouldn't her adrenaline be kicking in? It's really pitiful, and her weakness is starting to irritate me. Aren't FBI agents great at what they do? How is it that AJ hasn't a clue even with the background check he did? 

 Reviewer: Lee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 01:38 pm
Title: Q is for Questions

Wow! Genevieve  is evil and needs to die!! In fact so does William!   Esther  snap out of it, you need to quit your job  and move  again.  AJ was so hurt, I really for him. AJ forgive her  can't  you sense that she was running  from her demons?  Her demons come in the forms of her family, her human incubator is the head demon in charge undet Satan!  Please AJ has to rescue Esthe!  Good stuff!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 12:43 pm
Title: P is for Persitance

How did the mother get into the house, is the million dollar question.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2014 02:07 pm
Title: P is for Persitance

Love this story... Please plzzz update ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

 Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 02:12 pm
Title: P is for Persitance

UGH!!!! I so hope you come back and finish this. I really want the lot of them to go down, the mother, husband and his mother too. I can't stand weak man who hit women. William needs to meet a woman or a real man that will teach him a lesson or put him 6 feet under. 

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 01:46 am
Title: P is for Persitance

Glad to see this story back! So her mother...can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 27 2014 04:53 pm
Title: P is for Persitance

Oh my gosh, you've finally updated! :D I'm so glad! And I love the cliffhanger. I hope you really update soon, I want to see how the next chapter turns out. I've been waiting for so long...

 Reviewer: Shy-Koha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 08:39 am
Title: P is for Persitance

omgggg her mother found herr 

 Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 12:13 pm
Title: N is for Narcissism

That William sounds like a real nut job, and snake in the grass. I sure hope AJ can hadle his! 😳

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 02:22 am
Title: P is for Persitance

Well I'm happy to see you back to finish the story. I'm laughing to myself right now because just last night I was going through my favourites and saw that I still had this story listed and today you updated. I'm so happy to see a new chapter. I wish your chapters were a bit longer but I love how you title each chapter.

I wonder what the mother is up to and how AJ's gonna handle what's about to come. I think Ester is going to go back to her husband and she has to. She has to go back to him again to possibly realize that she doesn't need to rely on the pills but that she deserves not to be abused. I think when she leaves AJ and has to call him to rescue her or possibly when he shows here again that a man doesn't love you if he hits you but that she can be loved without violence then she's be ready to leave her family behind. But for right now I see her going back. She has not fought back enough to appreciate the feedom that she wants and deserve.

I do hope you will keep writing and complete this story. It had been a pleasure to read before and I enjoyed this update. Thank you.

 Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 06:55 am
Title: P is for Persitance

I glad you updated. I had forget this story, but so glad it back. I hope AJ protect her, because she really need it.  She need someone to protect her until she get stronger. If I had a mother and husband like her, some one would be dead and it would not be me. lol. Update soon.

 Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 06:55 am
Title: P is for Persitance

Her mother? oh dear god that bitch found her errrrrrrrrrrrrr. I hope aj kick her ass and that whole family too. That poor little boy getting treated like crap smh. I hope he finds better home. Thanks for the update. Best birthday gift. ever

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 04:16 am
Title: P is for Persitance

Hell nah lol

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 07:24 pm
Title: P is for Persitance

That crazy woman showed up, oh no Esther is going to fall even further apart.  Thank you for coming back with an update please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 02:48 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

I need an update so bad! Pleeeeease!

 Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2013 08:54 pm
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 08:10 pm
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

OMG Could you update this story please, please, please!!!!

:-)

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2013 12:30 am
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

 

When r u going to update this story.  I am looking forward to

the next chapter... :-)

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2013 04:11 am


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