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Title: D is for Determination

That was a masterpiece of a chapter. Wow. I won't make too many comments, as I'll be busy looking for and reading the rest of your work.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2013 01:35 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

This story is just amazing, loving the choice of cast. Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2013 01:20 am
Title: O is for Obstacles

William is one sick bastard. I feel bad for Skyn. She has no idea what's ahead for her. Esther better hope William doesn't get his hands on her again.

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Date: April 16 2013 05:57 am
Title: O is for Obstacles

William deserves to die a horrible death with a quickness.  Thanks for the update even if it took to long and was too short!!  smile...  Esther you can count on AJ let him into to your life and your heart.  AJ is good people!!  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2013 12:38 am
Title: O is for Obstacles

I hope aj is able to keep her safe from her crazy family and that nutcase of a husband. He one sicko and hope he dies real soon and her mohter wow she a bitch all the way. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 09:11 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

The tension is building to the point of no retrurn  William seems pretty sure of himself and that he always gets what he wants. Ester is nothing but property to him, a trophy wife and toy that he puts on display.  I am afraid he has met he match considering AJ.  There is no way that Aj would let her go back to that life if he knew evrything about her and what her husband and mother pue her through.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 08:16 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

Finally! I've missed this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

 Reviewer: mekaky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 07:45 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

love it

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Date: April 15 2013 06:58 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

I the story.

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Date: April 15 2013 05:07 pm
Title: L is for Leftovers

love it

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Date: April 15 2013 05:03 pm
Title: K is for Kisses

love it, AJ is wonderful caring person...

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 04:30 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

Finally!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

yes. I can't wait for the next chapter. 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 01:46 pm
Title: O is for Obstacles

i really like this story! glad to see you are back!

 Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 08:24 am
Title: O is for Obstacles

St Claire has no idea what he is getting ready to come up against with AJ. He is a sick man!

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Date: April 15 2013 07:19 am
Title: The PTA Members(Characters)

please update soon!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2013 10:43 pm
Title: N is for Narcissism

Oh my gosh! This is crazy! I love it!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 05:45 pm
Title: N is for Narcissism

Without a doubt, there is evil in this world. William is a selfish pig and i hope he gets what he deserves a case of karma. No one is above the law, especially the elite. They will get what's coming to them.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 07:27 pm
Title: M is for Medical History

IT looks like the truth is slowly burning it's way through.

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Date: December 26 2012 07:22 pm
Title: N is for Narcissism

Thanks so much for an update! This was one of the first stories I read on this site and it's always in the back of my mind, anyway I'm glad to see you're back :)

William sure is a piece of work, isn't he? Can't even express how deeply I hate him and he's really disgusting if he thinks he's going to get his hands on Rosario too. It's not bad enough that he practically broke Ester, it seems like he's salivating for the one he truly wanted still. I hope he's eventually going to get his in the end. Looking forward to seeing more Ester and AJ interactions in the next chapter. 

As to your updates, I'm okay with whatever makes you more comfortable. Everyone gets busy so whichever way you choose will be fine by me.

 Reviewer: gentlehaikus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 02:24 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

Loving the story, more each chapter. Please do not let them get to close to her.

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Date: December 22 2012 10:52 pm
Title: N is for Narcissism

nice chapter....bt waaay too short..miss aj and esther....,can u make the chapters a bit longer plzz..and update sooner...that would be great....

 Reviewer: lizzie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 11:40 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

What the hell kind of mother is she? She is willing to allow her daughter to be abused. just to save face. The doctor needs to go to jail and never practice gain in life. Well let the fun begin, they can come after Esther, anf see what a real man looks like. One as beating on the way, YES!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT UPDATE thanks for the Christmas gift.

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Date: December 22 2012 02:42 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

Not good at all. I don't like william at all hope that bastar balls get cut off. I would like longer chapters. Thank for  the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 02:11 am
Title: N is for Narcissism

longer chapters please.

 Reviewer: Nina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 05:52 pm
Title: N is for Narcissism

:( waited so long...

 

More chapters, shorter. I would definitely prefer that! 

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Date: December 21 2012 03:40 pm


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