Nice... continue plz?
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 15 2016 05:31 am
Why didn't you finish this story😭😭😭 ? It's spooky good.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 09 2015 11:30 pm
Please, please limit your paragraphs to no more than about 8 or 9 sentences. Your paragraphs are too big, it's a bit much to read... Gives the impression the dialogue will go on forever. I hope you don't mind the constructive criticism.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2015 02:42 am
So...will you, ever, continue this story?
Reviewer: Katt Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 13 2014 03:16 am
Pretty good, too wordy at times, but can't wait to read the updates.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: September 18 2014 05:19 am
Whoop whoop! Love this story so far. Update soon please!
Reviewer: Gothic-Innocence16 Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2014 03:15 pm
This story rocks n wish u could update this please. ...
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2014 07:53 pm
I would like to know if you will continue with this story, I find it very interesting and I would love to read more about Noah and Eliza....................................
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2014 06:22 pm
Update
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 03:13 pm
Loved it. don't know why you don't continue.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2013 03:00 pm
Damn that was hot! More please! I guess I am an undercover submissive! ooooh spank me,baby!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2013 11:56 pm
I am not quite sure of the world of BDSM, but for some strange reasson, the way Noah makes Eliza cum just from a look or a word is enough to make me venture into the unknown and take a "test drive".
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 07:06 am
Feening!!! Why do you all do this to us?!!? Get us all hooked on the good stuff then disappear!!
Please update soon!
I gotta know what that little silver object is and what the heck he's fixin ta do with it! *grinning devilishly*
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: November 16 2012 02:43 am
What's next? What happens next?
Reviewer: tnkzr Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2012 04:08 am
I loved is and I can't wait until you update more. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Reviewer: BLU Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 12:39 am
waiting for the next update.
Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2012 02:30 am
Amazinnnggg please keep udating
Reviewer: Chasz143 Signed [Report This]Date: September 16 2012 08:29 am
Damn! This story in intense and hawt!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 19 2012 06:12 pm
I liked it but felt Eliza should have inquired more about being his sub before saying yes. It was like signing a contract but not reading it. I thought *that* was queer but other wise I highly enjoyed Noah. My kind of Dom
Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 15 2012 10:11 pm
That was amazing. You're an excellent writer!
Reviewer: Lola Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 06:05 am
Strange but interesting.Waiting for more story and interaction between Noah and Eliza though outside of the office,but Noah is a little cold and intense...Sort of scary actually,lol
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 04:44 am
Noah, is a bad boy, She has no idea what she is saying yes too, but I do not doubt she will love it. Mousy no more.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 12 2012 11:09 pm
Loved it!!! I don't think that poor child realizes what she just agreed to..
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2012 04:34 pm
mmmm.
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 11 2012 04:28 pm
I love it
Eliza is my type of girl but at one point i would like her to shock him and step out of her usual self. I think Noah will fall in love with her first in the long run
Reviewer: Jovana Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 11 2012 03:23 pm