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Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Hot!!!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 08:15 am
Title: Come Into My Web

i am loving this story so far. thank you

 Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 08:13 am
Title: Come Into My Web

I agree with pmgayles review. For all of those reasons, it is a little hard to read. However, I'm sure you're going to do it justice, so I'm in it to the finish. Curious to see what you do with it.


 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 05:16 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Loved it. This is gonna be good. Noah...HOT!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 04:27 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Oh my!  That was so hot!  I am so glad you did an update.  I haven't read 50 shades but if it is anything like this then ... wow.

Please keep this story rolling!!!

 

CL

 Reviewer: crocuslady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 09:40 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Fantastic update. Really like the erotic quality to the forming relationship.

 

Please update again soon.

 Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 08:04 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Oh!! I shake my fist at YOU!! Why did you leave it like that? (big pouty face...) I love it and to be honest with you, I had some reservations about a story of a white true dom molding a black female into his sub...could help it, so I was kinda of iffy about reading it. But just goes to show you about the POWER of good storytelling and my dear you have it in spades. I love it so far and can't wait for the next update...Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 07:40 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

I can't believe you left it their. You have got to continue. This chapter was sexy. Please please please update ASAP

 Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 06:31 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Love this, wow! That was hot!

 Reviewer: catblais Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 04:42 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Noah has Eliza completely under his spell, I just hope that he dorsn't hurt her. Being black woman the BDSM thing with white man is just too much given our history! But this story is hot, so I will continue to read it so that I can see Eliza grow in confidence.



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 03:51 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Wow!  I hope Eliza realizes what she's getting herself into. LOL   More please!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 02:21 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

Love it!

 Reviewer: Bigsix Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 01:18 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

I read this at work and was forced to make a visit to the bathroom!

 Reviewer: mjfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 01:02 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

Oooooh! That was just.....Nasty! And sexy as hell!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2012 06:56 am
Title: Come Into My Web

Interesting update!! He's a control freak but I guess that's what she likes!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 07:15 am
Title: Come Into My Web

Lovely, well done. A well done concept but I'm enjoying your take on it.

 Reviewer: Lola Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:34 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

Well that was exciting and hot!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 06:23 am
Title: Come Into My Web

Awesome. Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: LuckiestOne Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2012 05:56 am
Title: Come Into My Web

Well damn, he got straight to the point didn't he? I like it :D

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 12:36 am
Title: Come Into My Web

Put up the next chapter stat!!! That was an amazing start

 Reviewer: Jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 12:26 am
Title: Come Into My Web

That was straight...I liked it! Don't keep a sista waiting too long!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 12:12 am
Title: Come Into My Web

I enjoy your styling of writing, it is easy to follow and descriptive as it moves the story forward. I am curious to see where you take this relationship because so many BDSM stories involve the Boss (male-dom) with an assistant (female-sub) where she changes his ideas on this lifestyle. I just hope you don't take it down that predicatable path. Anyways I like it so far :)

 Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 09:00 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

Ok, while reading this, I kept getting that much angrier at Eliza. However, I must confess that I don't know much about the Dom-Sub "lifestyle" such as it is. I agree that I don't like seeing her that submissive. To me, it reeks of weakness, but I guess that's the attraction for a Dom in that life. I think you can be submissive to your man and still be a strong woman. That doesn't- at least not yet- seem to be the case with Eliza. She's described as quiet, shy and mousy; and her actions support the assumption that this means she doesn't stand up for herself. I understand alpha, but Noah is a bit off-putting. He seems a bit extreme. However, he did muse that it was a testing process for her, so maybe it looks worse than it is. I'm probably all wrong about both of them and they will completely surprise me...lol!

You have definitely got my attention with this so I'm anxious to see where you take us with this.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 08:32 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

Wow! That was so hot! Can't wait to see what happens. Love it!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 01:52 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

hmmm. He held out for a year. Noah is looking at the big picture. :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 07:00 am


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