Title: XI

Awwwe :D I can't wait to see what happens next (if something does continue...).

Reviewer: Shy-Koha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2014 03:09 pm

Title: XI

awesome story.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 05:23 pm

Title: I

this is awesome...loki yayyyy

Reviewer: The nihilst chick Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2013 09:23 pm

Title: I

just checking for an update 

Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 11:00 am

Title: XI

Wow!!! How gullible can Ava be.  Why is she not questioning the reason why Thor told her to keep away from the witch?  Well I for one would love to see that she wise up before she drink that posion and become infertile or disfigure.  I want to see Ava use that badass self she give Balder on the witch, well not in that way, but by following the feeling she get went something just isn't right. Anyway as the saying goes 'If you can hear you will feel'.  So next chapter please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2012 02:43 pm

Title: XI

Damn I can not stand Amora will she just disapear already. Love how protective Thor is and finally he let Ava please him. Great chapter can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 07:55 am

Title: XI

ava needs to stop listening to amora and she's not even sure what the concoction really is and now balder is more determined to have her so im sure he's willing to do anything to gain her trust or get her alone....great update can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 07:13 am

Title: XI

Ava will be sorry for trusting Amora!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 04:57 am

Title: XI

Lord, you are really stupid Ava, Thor told you not to talk to her so it's obvious that he does not trust her.  Amora means you harm and your dumb ass will die if you take that Asthen.  Balder is just taking liberties with Thor's woman and it won't end pretty.  I can't wait for THor to end him.  Amora needs to die as well!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 02:53 am

Title: XI

great update...please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 12:41 am

Title: XI

This was a good update. More please.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 12:02 am

Title: X

Amazing :)

Reviewer: Diamond Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 05:13 am

Title: X

Ava's so hardheaded, maybe she needs more of a fright!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 07:06 am

Title: IX

I liked it a lot!  I hope Ava listens to Thor about Amora!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 06:44 am

Title: VIII

Ava really needs to remember she is a stranger in a strange land!  She better listen to Thor!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:59 am

Title: VII

Keep it coming!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:39 am

Title: VI

What is Amora up to?

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 05:04 am

Title: V

It's no more sappier than any other story!  Let's see where it goes!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 04:09 am

Title: IV

Can't wait for Loki to see her and see her lust after Thor!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 03:50 am

Title: III

Write your story the way you want it written, that's why it's your story!  I for one am loving your take on Thor and Loki, with his crazy ass!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 02:54 am

Title: II

Enjoying your take on Loki and Thor!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 09:57 pm

Title: I

Really enjoying the story being a big comic book fan of the old 

Reviewer: trindap76 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 06:09 am

Title: X

Thors right she ight get into trouble. They have the best relationship ever can't get enough of this fic.

Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 08:10 am

Title: X

Ava is kind of dumb.   In this chatper's conclusion, it's almost as if she's saying, "Yeah, let me go out with this evil sorceress that everyone in this dangerous as hell mystical land has warned me against. It doesn't matter that I've promised the love of my life I would no longer visit her.  No worries." It makes little sense as a plot point and makes her seem dull and juvenile.

Smarten her up a bit. It will only enhance the good romance you've got going on here.  You've got the romance down to a tee.  You're smart, your readers are smart; give us a heroine that reflects that. 

Reviewer: tens Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 07:47 am

Title: IX

YEEESSS,really enjoyed this chapter,lol!!!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 07:13 am



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