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Title: Chapter 6

great job!! they finally did something!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2013 08:10 am
Title: Chapter 6

Ok, so Kay seems a little wishy-washy. And Sebastian seems to be pulling this weird passive-aggresive thing on Kay. Which all makes me unsure what they are all about. They buried the hatchet, finally; now its all about SEbastian being jealous and practically daring Kay to sleep with him. On the other hand, here's Kay upset because she finds her ex only wanted sex the whole time they were dating; now she says what the hell why not concerning Sebastian? These two are confusing me.



Author's Response:

It's not that she was upset that her ex only wanted sex with her that makes her upset, it's the fact that he used that as an excuse as to why he was dumping her. She just never felt comfortable with the idea of letting that part of herself go to him. Also she isn't exactly saying what the hell I'll sleep with sebastian, more like she's going to have fun instead of over thinking everything as she normally does and if that involves a few hot make out sessions with seb then why not? lol

hope that cleared that up :D

thanks for the review

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 06:04 pm
Title: Chapter 6

That was cracking!! Kayleesi let go and let Seb love you.  You know that you want that boy!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2013 12:34 am
Title: Chapter 4

Great update!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 11:58 pm
Title: Chapter 3

great update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 04:16 am
Title: Chapter 3

I'm g;ad they made up but they need to do something about the sexual tension.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Check this last chapter...something went wrong with the posting...it seemed to have cut and doubled what you wrote.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 07:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

I was confused at the formatting. Were there some copy and paste confusion? I do that all the time-__-

 

I hope she opts for something more serious than a fling I totally want the happy ending and the marriage and the kids!

 

I love your writing!

 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 2

Good start. But, am I the only one who noticed the sudden change of Kay's parents' names?Is it Sandra and Sean or Trish and Derek? I root for Sandra and Sean...

A cottage by the lake, what a beautiful setting! But, Kay goes from indiferent to attracted way too quickly for my liking. Please, don't rush the story.



Author's Response:

OMG i am so terrible lol. I'd left the story for so long completely forgot her parents names lol. Thanks for the feed back though

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 11:11 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Yes please do!!! I feel like the story is moving fast though? This spa day could had been much longer? Loved it though.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 10:03 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I say go for the summer fling also. Why not? they're are young and it's the last summer before senior year.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 09:19 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I love Seb already!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 04:47 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad you updated.  Looking forward to reading more!

 Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 04:09 am
Title: Chapter 1

Love the first chapter. The parents are funny. This is going to be a good story.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh I'm excited to see where this goes!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 08:57 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it and can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Flashbacks of when they were younger would  be nice! Luv the parents ahahah

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 03:24 am
Title: Chapter 1

 luv it so far!!!!!!!:)

 Reviewer: queen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh she knows she wants to get into trouble with this boy! Great start! :) p.s her Parents are totally embarrassing ! Lol

 Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 08:09 pm
Title: Chapter 1

LOVE!!!! 

 Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 08:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1

when is are they going to apologize to each other? I love the parents they are too funny. I think that their relationship will change with this vacation. This will be juicy!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 07:58 pm


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