Title: Chapter 1

please update soon!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I LOVE ME SOME JONATHAN! He is so understanding and caring. Why can't I find a man like that? I am glad she is going to take the baby in as a foster child, I bet she ends up adopting the cutie!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2012 12:03 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow! I am glad they decided to be together. I hope they can make each other happy!

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Date: October 20 2012 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Jonathan, I think you made your move to soon! Step back and give her a minute to get herself together. Remember, she was just molested. When you said she woke up with something in her mouth....please don't tell me the hotel/motel manager has his nasty penis in her mouth! If so, cracking his head open, was the least she could do for him! Nasty bastard!!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2012 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Why are your chapters so short? If they are going to be this short throughout the whole story,then you need to submit more of them! I will give you a 9 for content, but a 7.5 for the shortness of it

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2012 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Poor Jonathan.....he is horny! He needs a qquick fix. Please don't make him wait too long, or he may end up with a case of blue balls!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2012 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love that show,Property Brothers....it is amazing what they can do with a fixer upper!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2012 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I hope that she will be able to get the baby. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 05:14 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Love the idea of the story but would love to know Drew's story with his wife and you may want to adjust the amounts on the real estate prices. You would be hard pressed to find a run-down condemned house for anything less than $50K and if you do there is no way anyone could live there without almost dismantling the entire structure. But I love this story because the property brothers are my most favorite guys to watch on HGTV.

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2012 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 6

This is a powerful read it had me continually pressing next.  I hope there is more soon.  Please let there be more.

 

A new fan,

Kim

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 6

Aiyana has a good heart and Jonathan is so support. The baby is so cute!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 23 2012 06:22 am

Title: Chapter 6

Loved the update! That baby is so cute. Glad everything seems to be working out for Aiyana so far!Yeh!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2012 02:51 am

Title: Chapter 5

So good! Now bring on the hot but naked sex! Which you did chaptet 6. So awesome!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 09:42 pm

Title: Chapter 5

So good! Now bring on the hot but naked sex! Which you did chaptet 6. So awesome!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 6

That baby boy is beautiful. I am so glad that she finally broke Jonathan off a piece. Good stuff!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Wow, she made that decision fast. I know she can do it, she will have lots of help.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 06:27 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Drew was playing matchmaker for his brother, nice. I can't wait to see how the relationship works out now.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 4

Too fast Jonathan. Mr hotel manager will be in jail for a long time.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 5

Her house sounds gorgeous. Yeah that they will give dating a try. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 4

Dang nasty behind clerk. He should be thrown under the jail. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update. I am not sure why she stayed at that creepy hotel.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 5

Yay! Aiyana is going to go for it. Jonathan is a hottie so I'm excited.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 4

I HAD TO MENTION, THERE IS ALWAYS A TRIAL. AFTER A CRIMINAL IS ARRESTED THEY GET A BOND HEARING WHERE THEY ARE EITHER REALEASED REMANDED WITH A FUTURE TRIAL DATE. A PLEA DEAL IS USUALLY ONCE THE TRIAL HAS STARTED.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Interesting update. Poor Aiyana!! Just can't seem to catch a break! Hope thing work out with her and Johnathan.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 4

I don't watch the Property Brothers but I really like the story. I'm interested in reading more!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 03:46 am



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