So happy you updated this story. Looking forward to reading more of it!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2016 12:35 pm
Loveeeeeee this STORY!! So glad to see you back. I'm a little sad that things are about to go sour with them. They are obviously feeling each other.
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[Report This]Date: April 01 2016 12:54 pm
I am happy to see a new chapter in this story. Armani is about to be dead soon.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 01 2016 01:39 am
Hello, please update. Miss this story. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 02 2014 11:50 pm
Please Please Update (or publish) soon ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2014 11:55 pm
Love it so far patiently waiting for the next update.
Reviewer: Cat Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2014 10:37 pm
Loved the update and Monique.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 05:35 pm
First ur a really good writer ur charecters r complex and ur story line is sexy and just drawn out enough to keep u in suspense without being long winded and u have a a natural talent for writing that cant be taught but u could use a good editor not just to look for typos but to help u reformat paragraphs so that it flows a little bit better again i love ur story but its kind of annoying to have stop reading and clarify in my head what u meant to say instead of whats there
Author's Response:
Thank you i'll try to make it more clear and less typos in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Bigfan Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 21 2013 09:24 am
You are by far one of my favorite writers. I've actually began to read this story from the beginning again waiting on another update. I really hope you get a chance to add some more soon! I love this story if that was hard to notice
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: TallyLuna Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 19 2013 03:27 am
this is getting hot bring on the fire! great update!
Author's Response:
Thank you =]
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 09:54 pm
can't wait 2 c what happens next, great update!
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 08:17 pm
I love the way that the story is playing out, it gets more and more interesting by each chapter. I mean I still can't get over Jacqueline's fiestiness. I love it and I just love the way that James responds to them. I did not like that he let those other men touch her even though he had them punished in the end. Also her mother got on my nerve and I just bursted into laughter when James took all of her money, I was like "Ha, that's what you get!" Great chapter and can't wait to read more!! :)
Reviewer: JR Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 13 2013 07:35 pm
I love your story, why I do love alpha male's I am patiently waiting for an update and more story line, its that good!!!
Alex
Reviewer: chocolatepink Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 23 2013 06:43 am
I like this story, but I feel like it's missing something. I didn't see many grammatical errs and your writing style is just fine, but it's missing that exra something that makes it great. It has wonderful potential. I hope James doesn't rape her or do anything harmful, if he does can you add a warning in the chapter please?
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2013 05:26 am
James is so wrong for making her hold it that long. I don't think that she should make it easy for him at all! Her mother is such a bitch for doing that to her! MOre please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2012 10:34 pm
Just started this story today - good premise; however, the grammatical errors are distracting. Please clean them up so that one can concentrate on the story - I will continue to read.
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: November 25 2012 02:28 pm
I really like the concept/plot line of your story and I think it is very interesting. I'd like to read more but all the grammatical errors made it very hard to get through the past 2 chapters, and I don't think I'd be able to get through the rest of the story if those mistakes are not fixed. I'm only saying this to help, because I don't want to stop reading your story, but please find a beta or someone to edit it.
Author's Response:
I'm going to fix that today thanks for pointing them out I hope that you still read the story
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 10:52 am
Hi, I just started reading and love your story. One thing though. 1700 hundred thousand dollars? I think that's a typo? Or a million dollars.
Reviewer: Patience Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 07 2012 07:18 am
yup, i'm intrgued and look forward to "mother dearest" slow and (very) painful demise - what she did is not okay no matter how much you hate your own flesh and blood (...!!) so i look forward to Kat's downfall *toothy grin* but other than thanking you for the new story, i was wonder happened to the sequel of Tiger Lily? are you going to wait until your current stories are done or?
Author's Response:
I'm working on the sequal as we speak
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: September 25 2012 09:34 pm
dun dun dunnn - draaama!! intriguing in deed - i look damn forward to more! :) thanks for the tease!!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2012 08:01 am
Love the cast especially Rain!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2012 05:28 am
