Reviews For To Love the Devil
Title: Under the Bridge

Good Chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you=]

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 10:36 am

Title: Under the Bridge

love the update



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Thank you

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 08:08 am

Title: Under the Bridge

seeing this update made my day - THANK YOU so MUCH!!! so Jack is going to be his mistress - it's going to be easier said then done. i think the moment they get a taste of each other, things are going to get very complicated...!

but i have to wonder - isn't anyone looking for Jack?! i mean she did have a job before she was captured, right? no way nobody isn't wondering what has happended to her...right?



Author's Response:

I'm glad I made your day, the next chapter is going to point that out and your going to get your answer.

 

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2013 10:43 am

Title: Under the Bridge

:)

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:03 pm

Title: Under the Bridge

Thank for the update, I'm always looking forward to your stories. You do beautiful work. thanks for sharing...

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 09:02 am

Title: Under the Bridge

To be honest, I like this story by the second chapter. It has a very unique concept with most stories centering around mob boss and the reculant love interest. Although, I am sure this chapter happend like chapter six? It seems to be going in circles... I like the story I hope the next chapter will possible introduce more of what happends next.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 03:57 am

Title: Under the Bridge

Lmao straight up it got that deep that she had to run to the bathroom, I mean if he planned on poisoning her she would be dead by now cuz she was smashing.

Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 03:07 am

Title: Under the Bridge

I think James is building a cage of his own doings.  He has her lock stock and barrel, but the time is coming that he's going to want more from her than the physical.  He doesn't even realize it yet and that will make HIM her prisoner. He's so used to controling everything.  What is he gong to do when he can no longer control his own feelings.  He already has had a taste of it with the lack of sleep.  I hope that he doesn't rape her, but when he does have her I hope she rocks his world and has his mind tied in knots.

thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you, your so on the right trail he knows that his physically attracted to her, but he doesn't understand his emotions when it comes to her which well be both their battle in the story his battle well be more longer then Jacqueline. His not going to rape her that's not his style he likes playing games she's going to think his going to but he's not. His going to have sex with her but its going to confuse her emotionally. And there first time is going to rock both there world that James is going to be asking for more=]

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:40 am



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