I like James....
please pass me a cigarette :-)
I don't smoke either lol
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 03:32 am
please update this, it's sooooo good
Reviewer: nononsense Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 28 2014 10:29 am
I love this story and it has all the hallmarks of a 10. The story progression, character development, flow are all great. The one thing that is holding it back is the grammar mistakes. There are quite a few. Please be careful. You might want to go back with a fine tooth comb and do line editing. Ex. When she dropped the bowl, you put bowel...distracts the reader. We can always expect some errors, no WIP or finished work is perfect but you have a but more than average. I do love this story and can't wait to see what is next!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2013 07:08 pm
Fantastic update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2013 03:06 am
Wow so worth the wait! incredible chapter!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 01:26 pm
sexy sexy update - everything will change after this! thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2013 10:48 am
Could you please try to update this much sooner then later
please! Please! Please!!!!!!! :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 09:54 pm
Great update, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 02:20 pm
OMG please say that your going to post the next chapter soon and that this isn't one of th having a dream... I think that this is one of the best chapters so far
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 11:08 am
wow, can't wait to see what happens with them next. Great update.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 05:06 am
I was so happy when I saw this update!!
Awesome update!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 09:48 pm