Reviews For To Love the Devil
Title: Play

please update this, it's sooooo good

Reviewer: nononsense Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2014 10:29 am

Title: Play

I love this story and it has all the hallmarks of a 10. The story progression, character development,  flow are all great. The one thing that is holding it back is the grammar mistakes. There are quite a few. Please be careful.  You might want to go back with a fine tooth comb and do line editing. Ex. When she dropped the bowl,  you put bowel...distracts the reader. We can always expect some errors, no WIP or finished work is perfect but you have a but more than average.  I do love this story and can't wait to see what is next!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 07:08 pm

Title: Play

Fantastic update 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 03:06 am

Title: Play

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wow so worth the wait! incredible chapter!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 01:26 pm

Title: Play

sexy sexy update - everything will change after this! thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2013 10:48 am

Title: Play

Could you please try to update this much sooner then later

please! Please! Please!!!!!!!  :-)

 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 09:54 pm

Title: Play

Great update, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 02:20 pm

Title: Play

OMG please say that your going to post the next chapter soon and that this isn't one of th having a dream... I think that this is one of the best chapters so far

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 11:08 am

Title: Play

wow, can't wait to see what happens with them next. Great update.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 05:06 am

Title: A Price to Pay

I like the story.. good job.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2013 02:25 am

Title: Play

I was so happy when I saw this update!!

Awesome update!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 09:48 pm

Title: There's No Need to Worry

 

UPDATES!!!!!

 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2013 08:10 am

Title: There's No Need to Worry

Cannot wait to see what more can happen will her cousin fall for ace...



Author's Response:

I wasn't going to make Ace have a significant other but now I think I would want him to be with her cousin 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 08:39 pm

Title: Cast

Loved the update and Monique.

Reviewer: Aiwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 05:35 pm

Title: There's No Need to Worry

Thank you for this amazing update. I still really want Katherine dead. I don't like that ho Lisa she's jealous and a jealous ho is a dangerous ho. James will rid their lives of that pestilence. Fabulous!!



Author's Response:

Lol...thanks everything is going to reveal itself in due time believe me=]

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 04:11 pm

Title: There's No Need to Worry

really happy to see an update from you! if i was Jack i would think TWICE before playing aka tease James because it's going to backfire - for sure, lool!

but i look forward to that! thanks for the update! :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 12:09 pm

Title: There's No Need to Worry

Fantastic update, I absolutely love Monique and Jacqueline relationship.  Complex but simple...thank you for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you =] Their relationship is base off my friend and I relationship its pretty funny...lol

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 10:32 am

Title: Cast

First ur a really good writer ur charecters r complex  and ur story line is sexy and just drawn out enough to keep u in suspense without being long winded and u have a a natural talent for writing that cant be taught but u could use a good editor not just to look for typos but to help u reformat paragraphs so that it flows a little bit better again i love ur story but its kind of annoying to have stop reading and clarify in my head what u meant to say instead of whats there




Author's Response:

Thank you i'll try to make it more clear and less typos in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bigfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 09:24 am

Title: So Seductive

don't know how i missed the update but great update!! james is reaching breaking point and jack is clueless, loool! things are beginning to each for them ;)

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 11:09 am

Title: Cast

You are by far one of my favorite writers. I've actually began to read this story from the beginning again waiting on another update. I really hope you get a chance to add some more soon! I love this story if that was hard to notice



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: TallyLuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2013 03:27 am

Title: Under the Bridge

Good Chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you=]

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 10:36 am

Title: So Seductive

Mmm-mmm-mm-mm-mm.
That was something else.
I know what Mr. James is gonna do once he see's Roxanne... while his love is going bang bang bang, he will be think all about Jacqueline and that perfume she was wearing. Heat indeed.

On another note, I like Ace.
He is cute. I hope he get's himself a good girl :)



Author's Response:

Yes... Lol James is seriously going to be thinking about is Jacqueline. Yes, indeed Heat indeed. I love Ace but well not have a significant other his happily single =]

Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 03:25 am

Title: Cast

this is getting hot bring on the fire! great update!



Author's Response:

Thank you =]

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 09:54 pm

Title: So Seductive

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you =]

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 12:38 pm

Title: So Seductive

Amazing update.

Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 09:57 am



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