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Title: So Seductive

I love the update...I am so glad that you have updated this amazing story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 08:40 am
Title: Under the Bridge

love the update



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Thank you

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Date: May 30 2013 08:08 am
Title: Under the Bridge

seeing this update made my day - THANK YOU so MUCH!!! so Jack is going to be his mistress - it's going to be easier said then done. i think the moment they get a taste of each other, things are going to get very complicated...!

but i have to wonder - isn't anyone looking for Jack?! i mean she did have a job before she was captured, right? no way nobody isn't wondering what has happended to her...right?



Author's Response:

I'm glad I made your day, the next chapter is going to point that out and your going to get your answer.

 

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2013 10:43 am
Title: Under the Bridge

:)

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:03 pm
Title: Under the Bridge

Thank for the update, I'm always looking forward to your stories. You do beautiful work. thanks for sharing...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 09:02 am
Title: Under the Bridge

To be honest, I like this story by the second chapter. It has a very unique concept with most stories centering around mob boss and the reculant love interest. Although, I am sure this chapter happend like chapter six? It seems to be going in circles... I like the story I hope the next chapter will possible introduce more of what happends next.

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 03:57 am
Title: Under the Bridge

Lmao straight up it got that deep that she had to run to the bathroom, I mean if he planned on poisoning her she would be dead by now cuz she was smashing.

 Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 03:07 am
Title: Under the Bridge

I think James is building a cage of his own doings.  He has her lock stock and barrel, but the time is coming that he's going to want more from her than the physical.  He doesn't even realize it yet and that will make HIM her prisoner. He's so used to controling everything.  What is he gong to do when he can no longer control his own feelings.  He already has had a taste of it with the lack of sleep.  I hope that he doesn't rape her, but when he does have her I hope she rocks his world and has his mind tied in knots.

thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you, your so on the right trail he knows that his physically attracted to her, but he doesn't understand his emotions when it comes to her which well be both their battle in the story his battle well be more longer then Jacqueline. His not going to rape her that's not his style he likes playing games she's going to think his going to but he's not. His going to have sex with her but its going to confuse her emotionally. And there first time is going to rock both there world that James is going to be asking for more=]

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 01:40 am
Title: Cast

can't wait 2 c what happens next, great update!

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Date: March 21 2013 08:17 pm
Title: Red Light

*In my best Florida Evans voice*
Damn, daamn, daaaamn James!

Shame on you! You should feel bad for what you did!

This story is getting better. Keep it up ^^

 Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2013 05:01 am
Title: Red Light

I really need you to come back with more soon. This is getting damn good. You have created some great dynamic characters! I can't wait for you to start unraveling James. I can only assume he has many layers. This story is becoming a favorite.

 Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2013 04:16 pm
Title: Red Light

That was really sad and i wish he had not gone that far.  I hope we get longer and quicker updates next time.

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 01:26 am
Title: Red Light

Oh my what a experience I wonder how shes going to feel afterwards probably anger directed towards him but maybe also awareness of the compassion and tenderness he showed her.  I think he's falling for her lil by lil but he probably dosen't even begin to know he really is or what falling in love is.  He'll learn he'll be in denial but he will know in the end hehehehehe I hope :0 lol

Great Chapter cant wait for me and don't be to long girly!lol



Author's Response:

I won't take long I promise

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2013 04:03 pm
Title: Red Light

This is so sad.  Jac didn't bring any of this on herself.  She didn't asked to be used and abused.  I think James has gone too far and if he breaks her mentally he will only have a compliant body and not the fiesty woman he's come to care about.  I don't see how she can fall in love with a man so cruel like this, one who has all power over her.  It's going to be interesting to see how you work this story so that the reader would even want those two to be together.



Author's Response:

That's the one thing about, Jacqueline she keeps jumping back into her feistiness. It is some what her defense mechanism, especially after her father died when she was young and having to take care of herself especially with a mom like Katherine.

You also have to see it James side, his defense mechanism is to act ruthless he doesn't do we'll in voicing his feelings, which well be the main problem with them. The funny part is when you mention how can she fall in love with a man cruel like this she's going to be thinking the same thing.

How can she fall in love with a man such as him, how can she fall in love with a man who lives the way he do, etc...but she does and your going to love it.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2013 01:04 pm
Title: Red Light

He was cold to do something so horrible to her no matter what..

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 15 2013 02:27 am
Title: Red Light

He was cold to do something so horrible to her no matter what..

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 15 2013 02:27 am
Title: Red Light

I can't believe I waited so long to read this!! AMAZING!!! I can't wait to see more. I am too stupefied to say more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

 

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 07:34 pm
Title: Red Light

Great update! Hmmm, is James finally beginning to see the effects of his actions on Jacqueline? Is he possibly developing feelings for her? Has he broken her with that reality check?

Author's Response:

Thanks, James is intrigued by Jacqueline so she has spark some interest...the reality check really didn't break her for two reasons. One it taught her to be even more patient about trying escape as well strengthening her reason to play his game. The second her feistiness is the reason that James is intrigued by her in the first place so he wouldn't do anything to break it.

 

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 07:02 am
Title: Red Light

great update! talk about leavning an impression - the scene where the men were touching Jac was intense, to say at least and the end with James feeling guilty - yup, Jac has left an impression on him too ;)

thanks for the update!!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2013 08:58 pm
Title: Cast

I love the way that the story is playing out, it gets more and more interesting by each chapter. I mean I still can't get over Jacqueline's fiestiness. I love it and I just love the way that James responds to them. I did not like that he let those other men touch her even though he had them punished in the end. Also her mother got on my nerve and I just bursted into laughter when James took all of her money, I was like "Ha, that's what you get!" Great chapter and can't wait to read more!! :)

 Reviewer: JR Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2013 07:35 pm
Title: Red Light

Wow... I loved every chapter!! I need more! James is something else. This is getting really interesting! Keep going!

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Date: March 13 2013 07:26 pm
Title: Red Light

Keep going can't wait for next chapter

 Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2013 06:41 pm
Title: Red Light

I loved this chapter but James pissed me off letting those nasty men touch and feel On Her.. Update soon please

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Date: March 13 2013 05:20 pm
Title: Red Light

awww I feel so bad for her!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2013 05:01 pm
Title: Red Light

So James does have conscious, I thought that held was going let those men rape Jacqueline. I really want her mother dead or in jail. It's mandarian that the Chinese speak at least its one of the Chinese dialects.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hey mother is going to get hers in the end 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2013 02:09 pm


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