hey just out of curiosity, why have "party monster" and your second story in this series been removed from the site?
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 11 2015 10:36 pm
Just wow! I didn't think I'd like this story but I was wrong..it was almost like movie- I loved it!
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[Report This]Date: May 04 2013 04:28 am
Damnit!!! Keisha can't catch a break..
Reviewer: Teiga Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2013 03:00 am
Great! I'm so happy she finally killed Will. I'm hoping there will at least be another chapter devoted to the aftermath please
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 03:05 pm
Great update, loved it! thank you for the 3rd instalment. hoping for a conclusion for Will n Keisha....
Reviewer: crimson_red Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 09:56 am
Yes, she killed Tyler and it was good. A spike through the heart just like vampire that he was. Please tell me that Keisha finally tells Will that she loves him? I am equally thrilled that Evan is dead as well. Those two can hang out in hell together.
Will there be an epilogue?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 07:58 am
Damn, the dreaded cliff-hanger. I am so glad that Julie was just as strong as Keisha. Now kill them both so that this nightmare can truly be over. Make it real painful, I don't know who I want to hurt worse. I can't stand either of them but as long as they both die I'll be happy. Great update, awesome.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2012 07:53 pm
love how you continued with Keisha and tylers story. your the reason I keep waiting for the chamber grindhouse challenge!
Reviewer: nikol Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2012 05:18 am
This is such a twisted story, but its really good, please update soon.
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 06:05 pm
Julie is getting in Evan's ass while Kiesha was digging for gold on Tyler's neck. I just love karma rears its head. I can't wait to read more. Amazing!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2012 06:25 am
Evan is batshit crazy and I wouldn't be surprised if his aunt wasn't the first person he's hurt. Psychos do tend to start early. I hope they find the girls before something fatal happens. I'm scared for Julie and god knows what's getting ready to happen with Keisha and Tyler.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 31 2012 08:13 pm
Evan has been crazy since forever and he really had not choice has his parents were off their rockers as well. Please let them find Keisha and Julie before it's too late. I really want both Tyler and Evan to suffer horrific deaths even worse than the murders they committed. Wonderful!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2012 06:28 am
I went back and started this series from the beginning. I had read the first one but some how skipped the second one. Anywho...I love these stories and I hope you continue after the challenge. Update again soon!!!!
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2012 01:52 pm
You never make a deal with Satan, as he always lies! Please save both Keisha and Julie, I don't want either of them to die. However, I do wantTyler and Evan to die. Their deaths should be epic in nature! C-I-L-L the psychos!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2012 07:32 am
The police are almost there, I am so glad. Maybe now that Tyler is catching feelings Keisha she'll live a little bit longer giving the police a chance to find Keisha and Julie. I really want Tyler and Evan die in a shoot out with the police!! Just a suggestion?! So loving this story, I really love hating on these two evil characters. I get to dream of various ways for them to die. Cool beans!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 11:23 pm
There's going to be a problem once Evan realizes that Tyler won't be able to kill or torture Keisha because he has begun to have feeling for her..
I hope once this is over Will and Keisha will admit their feels for each other because they may not have a chance to do so again..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2012 04:00 pm
Oh snap, it's about to get ugly. I feel that Julie will be the weak link that will get both her and Keisha killed. Two pychos together is bad news for Keisha and Julie. Please kill Tyler and Evan!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 04:12 am
Oh snap, Ethan broke Tyler out of prison! This is bad, Keisha and Julie will have to kill them both. Is Julie strong enough? I just wanted Tyler shanked in prison. so please make their deaths more painful ans gruesome then any of their victims. Great update!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2012 02:33 pm
I don't know whose crazier Tyler or Ethan is protege? Julie buck up, Keisha survived twice so you need to believe that you can survive just once. I am still trying to figure out why she didn't move? Besides Julie, what is holding Keisha? Will would follow her whereever she wanted to go.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2012 04:21 am
Julie better learn to keep her mouth shut.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 24 2012 02:57 am
I like this series alot and I appreciate that you update pretty quickly. Please continue!
Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2012 12:09 am
I would really love for Tyler to be shanked in prison, please say that it will happen. Then they could have access to those letters and they would have to be keep his death a secret until Keisha and Julie were found. Of course when second psycho is found he needs to be shot while evading capture. Just making some hopeful suggestions, can you tell that I hate criminals! They would have to live to long to get death penalty so jail vengence works best for Tyler. Death by cop works best fir psycho dirt bag. I love it when a plan comes together!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2012 01:11 pm
Again??? She got snatched again this time with Julie!!!! No bueno..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 02:37 am
Where were the police guards? I knew they shouldn't have left the restaurant, there was psycho after you Keisha! How long before Wilk and Greg realize that they've been kidnapped? This story is so good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2012 01:30 pm
I am so glad that Keisha told Tyler to "Fuck You!" It's about time, you wasted your time the cops should have known that he wanted to play games. Haven't Keisha and Will been through enough without you adding their pain. I would still like to know why Keisha never left the area? Especially after the second kidnapping.. Great story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2012 09:37 pm