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Title: Introduction to the Cast


Inquiring mine would like to know where u and your muse arei
going with this story... Please update

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 06:47 pm
Title: four : breakfast at ma'at's

Mmmm, can't wait to see what is about to go down <3



Author's Response:

I know, I'm plenty excited! Should make for a bit of a brow-raiser :D

 Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 01:20 am
Title: three : no mouth so sweet

That...was...awesome! *plays an air guitar solo*



Author's Response:

Hahahaha y e s! So glad you enjoyed it, shug! -rocks out-

 Reviewer: LadySade Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2013 01:06 am
Title: Introduction to the Cast

Glad to see you back! I'm still waiting on my girl Vesta!!!  I have a feeling that he's seen her tattoos and just can't remember. Does it still matter who gets the baby first? 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for staying tuned! Oh yes, Vesta's arrival's sure to put everyone in their place straight. Yes, he has seen those tattoos before and he'll be reminded why shortly. To their knowledge yes, whomever pops one out first is still the only to be released from the contract. 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2013 05:21 pm
Title: three : no mouth so sweet

Now this is an amusing story. I wish the love scene was more drawn out, but I enjoyed it. I'm studying in London for the semester, and reading the dialogue was really amusing.



Author's Response:

oh yay, i'm so glad you enjoyed it! that's funny actually; i was afraid i'd drawn out too much and not really gone anywhere until the last few paragraphs :/

lucky duck! i wanna go for my honeymoon, no questions asked. so you can tell me whether or not the jargon is accurate/believable or not :] but thanks for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 01:41 am
Title: three : no mouth so sweet

For a second there I was pissed! I was like WTH?! Hes suppose to be with Izzy! Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Hahaha you and I both! Thanks for your continued reading and reviews, Petite! You're fabulous :]

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2013 12:27 am
Title: three : no mouth so sweet

Good update . I love that the other girls -goddesses were jealous .



Author's Response:

Of course! Envy does seem to make the world go round ;] Thanks for your continued reading and reviews, Stacie! You've been awesome

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 06:13 pm
Title: three : no mouth so sweet

Achilles seems to be accepting things pretty quickly or is he just playing along? What does it matter who gets pregnant first as long as they each conceive? And what's going to happen to the goddesses and their babies once the children are born? 



Author's Response:

Oh I wouldn't say he was "accepting" of anything quite yet, but you'll find as we move along he makes his own plans on how things are going to go between him and the rest of the ladies.

 

And it does matter who has first dibs on big-bellied-baby! I just can't divulge cuz it's already in the following chapter haha :] Thanks for reading and reviewing dear, hope the continuing plot answers your questions better than I have! If not, do feel free to shoot me a PM :]

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 02:57 pm
Title: two : the business of being mortal

The goddesses are funny and you can already see parts of their personality. I wonder if Achilles' one night stand was with Vesta, can't wait to meet her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear :] And good, I did want them all to be contrastive in their own personas and how the respond to Achilles. We'll just have to see about Vesta, now, won't we? ;]

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 02:02 pm
Title: Introduction to the Cast

i heart this story! i can already feel that it's going to be funny as hell to read - thanks for sharing! look forward to more more and more :D



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Noir! Glad you like reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it :]

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 09:24 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

Loving it so far!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, dear! :]

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 06:40 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

Good and funny update .



Author's Response:

Hahaha thanks, I tried. Writing humor is kinda difficult to be honest, but I must not have done too shabby a job!

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 05:18 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

Interesting start!

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed :]

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 05:04 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

I  can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yaaaay! :] Thanks, hun!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 02:34 am
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

Good start. Can't wait for chapter 2 . :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Stacie! I appreciate your reading as well as reviewing :]

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 08:57 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

I like it. Vesta wasn't a fertility goddess as far as I know, but rather a virgin...



Author's Response:

Oh, good! :] Yeah no, she tended to home and hearth; not all of the goddesses are patronesses of fertility lol. Achilles' would really be in trouble then. Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear!

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 05:53 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

i like it



Author's Response:

Thanks dear, glad you do! :]

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 05:03 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

Interesting already. I'm looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks dear, that means I've done my job well :]

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 01:45 pm
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

im intrigued



Author's Response:

Score! :] Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 08:25 am
Title: one : a little bit of trouble

great update



Author's Response:

thanks for reading :] i appreciate!

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 08:09 am
Title: Introduction to the Cast

Love the cast.



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly, I rather like them myself :]

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 07:34 am
Title: Introduction to the Cast

Great cast ! Can't wait for chapter 1 .



Author's Response:

Thanks, Stacie! Just posted :] 

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2013 06:15 am


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