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Title: Are Charity Events Fun?

Your story is good, but some things that are mentioned (Because hun, you made your bed and it's time to lay in it) okay that came out of nowhere... What is the backstory on that comment and their relationship? I can see where the tale might be going, but it needs some... Hmm, help. Sorry if my opinion annoyed you. That was not my intent.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2016 07:45 am

Title: Are Charity Events Fun?

Your story is good, but some things that are mentioned (Because hun, you made your bed and it's time to lay in it) okay that came out of nowhere... What is the backstory on that comment and their relationship? I can see where the tale might be going, but it needs some... Hmm, help. Sorry if my opinion annoyed you. That was not my intent.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2016 07:13 am

Title: Are Charity Events Fun?

I love Mila's personality. Jackson and Nia are some trips, Nia is in love with Jackson. Jackson has a secret he loves Nia too. I'm liking mama Sara. More please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I cant help but write about people i love. I need to throw some ass holes in here lol 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 10:08 pm

Title: Open the door

Mac is a mess talking about he can watch her bent over and wiggle anytime. He's right white on a black women is pretty amazing, my husband love to see me in white.



Author's Response:

I love white, but i neder wear it because i feel like i will get it dirty lol such a shame. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 10:00 pm

Title: Blow the wistle

That's right Mila don't be the hunter be the hunted. I knew there was sexual tension between Hanna and Mickey.



Author's Response:

Yeah their sexual tension is crazy.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 09:54 pm

Title: Casting Call

Love the cast, Is that the Basketball player who play for the San Antonio Spurs.



Author's Response:

No idea, just tried to look it up and i didnt see any players like that. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 09:50 pm

Title: Breakfast shenanigans

Sometimes people love eachother but they just can live together. Mac needs to grow up and deal with his parents split. I think there's some sexual tension between Mickey and Hanna.



Author's Response:

Yeah hes still butt hurt. But thats not it for his family though!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 09:47 pm

Title: Club X part 2

What is Mac trying to do eye fuck her. Maybe I read wrong but did Mac suggest that Mila and Hanna leave with him so they could have some fun, like a threesome. Mac is a asshole a fine one at that. Hanna was ready to kick Jackson's ass for spilling his drink on her. If Mac was to snatch my phone from my hands, I will be snatching his balls from his pants SPLAT!!!!!.



Author's Response:

Im actually crying at this review lolol but no Mac just wanted Mila! lol Yeah ive actually had a guy snatch my phone once. i kicked him in the balls so it worked out well. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 09:43 pm

Title: Club X

Mac is in denial he knows he want some Mila on a plate. Man you have to watch what you say around kids they repeat everything. The part where Jackson was watching "Bride day friday" was so funny.



Author's Response:

LOL right, i have a thing for men who watch my shows with me. 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 09:31 pm

Title: Meet Mac and Mila

St. Jude Children's Research Hospital is a place after my own heart, my family and I donate monthly. I'm a Certified Registered Nurse Anesthetist in the NICU, children is basically my whole life. I like Hanna she's a feisty chica. Mila is sweet I can telll she's a force to be reckon with. Mac is just delicious he can stare at me anytime. Jackson that man is so yummy.



Author's Response:

Thats so great to here! Thanks, I love real aspects in stories. Also thank you for your service as a Nurse, YOU ROCK!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 09:22 pm

Title: Are Charity Events Fun?

I can't wait for the next update :) This was really good.



Author's Response:

THANKS!!! <3 ya!

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 02:03 am

Title: Open the door

You really have a good story here. It is a shame you have not followed through to finish it  I see you have not updated since 2013 pr responded to your reviews.  Therefore I doubt you will respond to this one.

hopefully you will continue your writing and update your stories.



Author's Response:

iM BACAK BABY

Reviewer: Don't give up Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:41 pm

Title: Open the door

I really hope you come back and finish this.  It is a really good story even if some words were missing to complete sentences.  I did not picture the girl you have has Mila as her.  You state the her skin was milk chocolate not dark chocolate.



Author's Response:

Im back!! And I use the cast as like guides, some of the ways i describe people are a little off from what the picture is, imagination is key boo! But i feel you and im totally open to suggestions!!!

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 03:16 pm

Title: Meet Mac and Mila

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!

I think the characters are gorgeous and suit each other, please update!

Reviewer: naytherocker Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 08:12 pm

Title: Open the door

Mila and Mac....I wonder what what will be said at the event.....all eyes on them



Author's Response:

AHH SO sorry its coming!!

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2013 09:12 pm

Title: Open the door

I'm excited for the date  They have too much chemistry for nothing to happen. Please don't make us wait too much longer for an update.



Author's Response:

Im a terrible person. SO sorry. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2013 03:49 pm

Title: Open the door

I hope Mila crushes him! I just think he needs it...lol! So, thats what I'm hoping for from this date. Mac is entirely to sure of himself. Sure that he can treat all women any old kinda way because of a few opportunists that's come his way. Like I said, Mila has a lot going for her, she doesn't need to accept any type of off treatment from him.

Awaiting the actual date.....



Author's Response:

Its coming tonight! And i feel you love i feel you!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2013 04:56 pm

Title: Open the door

I'm ready to read their time at the event!!! But it was cute.=]



Author's Response:

Its comming!!!

 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 09:28 pm

Title: Open the door

You need a proofreader.



Author's Response:

EHH.. Thanks??? lol Im looking for one. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 01:32 pm

Title: Open the door

It was great but end too soon..please update soon



Author's Response:

About to update NOW! Sorry Sorry!!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 03:18 am

Title: Open the door

 I can't wait for the benefit. Should be all kinds of interesting.



Author's Response:

Ahh about to put the chapter up! Sorry for the hella long hiatus!

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2013 02:15 am

Title: Blow the wistle

I love the story so far! I'm excited to see how the date goes. I'm nervous she will come close to sleeping with him though.



Author's Response:

Wouldnt anyone come close if not do it with that man! gosh hes an ass but hes a sexy one ;0 THANKS FOR READING, update comming sooooon

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2013 07:48 pm

Title: Blow the wistle

Mac really irritates me! Ughh!! I hate that he thinks he can just get over on every woman he meets, not questions asked. He literally paints all women with the same brush. That's why he thinks he can just play Mila. Of course, sleeping with him didn't help the matter, but Jackson is right, she has a whole lot going for her. I want her to act like it, and I think she is for the most part. Because acting unsure and nervous around Mac only works against her. He takes it as weakness to him and his "charms." 

I want Mac brought to his knees, that's all. He needs it!

Hana and Mickey really do need to get on with it...lol! I love their substory!

Nice!



Author's Response:

Oh no, Mila never slept with Mac, but yes he is an ass, but a hot one i might say. and Jackson is a little smarty pants but hes my kinda guy ;) and i love that you want Mac to fall off his high horse, because i honestly do too! haha welp we shall see! and Mickey and Hana are in for some trouble as well!

STAY TUNED

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2013 07:17 pm

Title: Meet Mac and Mila

Love love how cool Mila was on the phone with Mac....

Author's Response:

I knowwww, shes not that awkward bundle of nerves all the time now is she? lol Next chapter already written and needing some edits, so i should get too it huh?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 05 2013 06:12 am

Title: Casting Call

Mila seems scattered. I mean, she knows she wants a relationship, but she's on the fence about Mac and he seems to want the exact opposite.

And are Hana and Mickey into each other in some way? They are dancingaround like it.

I also like the relationship between Mila and her friends. There's an easy camraderie with them.

Nice!



Author's Response:

I know, Mila and her pals is just like me and my friends. And Mila is a scattered person isint she,, like get it together guhh! but yeah Mila and Mac are pretty opposite Mac is used to being in control 24/7 and Mila is easy going and laid back so how will it go?? i wonderzz

And Hana and Mickey are an interesting pair, you shall see

Update comming sonn i promise 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 09:54 pm



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