Reviews For Chocolate
Title: Whiskey

comment about last chapter funny how we as women notice when someone has nice shoes or outfit on. btw, welcome back I was so excited to see the update. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Lol, I know! That's exactly why I did it. Gives life to the characters when they do stuff we all do. Thanks!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 02:05 am

Title: Seeing Red

Hi, do you plan on continuing this story? And if so do you know when we can expect the next installment? I really love it and want to know how it ends.



Author's Response:

Yes, It's not ending yet, but please stay tuned. I'm not always going to be able to post a new chapter every day like in the beginning, but I WILL finish this story so help me!

Reviewer: JP Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 02:56 am

Title: Not Quite Dead

 

          HAPPY HOLIDAY & BLESSED NEW YEAR!!!

            UPDATES PLEASE

 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2013 01:19 am

Title: Broadway

Love this chapter! I can't wait to see what Loki is like in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Ainslee Capoise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 09:24 am

Title: Not Quite Dead

ooooohhhh man!! Finally I have found a Loki story!!! I am so happy!!! After watching Thor 2 I feel in love with Loki!! He's my favorite!!! I'm so happy to find this story!! 

"I am Loki of Asgard and I am burdened with glorious purpose!"

Love him! 

Reviewer: Ainslee Capoise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 08:25 am

Title: Seeing Red

Omg! This story is so amazing! I can't wait for more! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! New chapter up and another one coming today as well!

Reviewer: Cerebral Ballsy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2013 06:24 am

Title: Seeing Red

I never thought about Loki, but I like him more then Thor. I like this story so maybe you can continue writing it?



Author's Response:

Lol, I am continuing. I won't ever just abandon a story even if I'm on hiatus. :)

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 18 2013 09:26 am

Title: Not Quite Dead

Congratulaions! Your story is now on my stalk list! (next to Misha Collins and Tom Hiddleston) 

Reviewer: Ashuri Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2013 06:41 pm

Title: Seeing Red

I'm really enjoying your story. Can't wait to see what Danny cooks up to get back in Noni's good graces. And Loki is just too cute. :)



Author's Response:

Yes he is, thanks! :)

Reviewer: sha2011 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2013 06:51 am

Title: Seeing Red

"What the hell...is he?!"  LOL. 

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

LOL.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2013 08:05 am

Title: Seeing Red

Well Damn! Jenna is a bitch in beautiful clothing and a racist to boot.

Danny should have punched her ass but I know it would not have been gentlemanly.

I like Anna she seems to be cool.

Danny saw Loki disappear I wonder what explaination Noni will give him as to what Loki is.  I can't wait til the next update which I hope is soon.

It's so sad about Jake he was just beginning to live.

Thank you

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 07:09 pm

Title: Seeing Red

Don't admit it!!! Deny deny deny

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 02:59 pm

Title: Voices

 

This is my first time reading this story and I love it. I've seen the updates but didn't think it would be my type of story.  it is very well written and entertaining.  Parts either make you laugh or feel sad for the characters.  Wonderful job.

 

 I am sorry for your lost at this time I hope you feel better.  When my grandmother passed I too didn't know what to do, so I understand.  Years later I still wish I could reach out and hear her voice. The best to your family during this time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 02:29 pm

Title: Seeing Red

Well that was different.  

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 04:33 am

Title: Voices

That was cool. Sorry to hear about your Grandmother. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 03:13 am

Title: Seeing Red

That Jenna bitch needs her as handed to her. Danny Noni has never liked in any other way than a b friend get over it and mind ya business! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 03:02 am

Title: Seeing Red

*falls out all over the place* OooooOooOOOOh!! 😮😩😩😩

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 07 2013 10:41 pm

Title: Voices

well this is not going to be as simple as I thought.  Life is uncertain and things change in a split second.  My condolences for your loss I know how you feel.  

Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 04:59 pm

Title: Voices

I'm glad to see you're back. I am sorry about your loss.

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 04:14 pm

Title: Not Quite Dead

Sorry to hear about your grandmother.  We appreciate that you have been able to provide us with a chapter to read and entertain ourselves with.  Take the time you need to heal & adjust (which is sometimes the biggest challenge of them all when we lose a close love one) and we will be here waiting whenever you're ready.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 01:12 am

Title: Not Quite Dead

Sorry to hear about your grandmother.  We appreciate that you have been able to provide us with a chapter to read and entertain ourselves with.  Take the time you need to heal & adjust (which is sometimes the biggest challenge of them all when we lose a close love one) and we will be here waiting whenever you're ready.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2013 01:12 am

Title: Voices

Sorry about your Grandma. I can understand you not wanting to do much. Sometimes when someone is checking up on new chapters, they have no idea what's going on in the author's life. I wonder sometimes when I don't see story updates in awhile if something has happened.

Reviewer: kimikae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 04:56 pm

Title: The Gun in the Bun

Pleasssssssssssssssssssssse write more!!!!!!!! This story is sooooooo good, I'm suffering from withdrawls :(

Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2013 04:15 am

Title: Snow

It wouldn't be a lie if I said... I was stalking this story. : p

Reviewer: Kimikae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 03:10 pm

Title: Not Quite Dead

Your story is one of my guilty pleasures. I can wait, especially since I know that you haven't fallen off the edge of the planet ;-)

 

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2013 08:30 am



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