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Title: Chapter 3

I love this story.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 3

This was good to short thought would have loved to see where their relationship could have gone.

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3@gmail.com Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 01:37 am
Title: Chapter 3

Me likey!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter 3

What a twist! LOL

 Reviewer: LadySade Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 12:55 am
Title: Chapter 1

love it part 2 great story

 Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2013 04:00 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh no!

I hopethis doesn't end bad.  

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 11:10 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like the secret crush.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 11:09 am
Title: Chapter 3

Cute story.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 18 2013 11:08 am
Title: Chapter 3

Snap, crackle, pop that was funny!   Bastian had drawn all the wrong conclusions and made himself look stupid in thee process.  Loving this story!



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Happy you liked. 

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 3

This is by fore the best chapter yet. Loved that she has some spunk!!!! The confusion over her age was a nice twist!!!

Author's Response:

I'm happy to end on a high note.

 

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 08:39 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Loved it. He thought she was younger, but I did not get that impression while I was reading about her. They can be a family, nice update.



Author's Response:

Oh. I have to work harder at my hinting skills. Thank for reading.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 07:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This was an interesting update. I really enjoyed the story; can wait to read your next story

 Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 07:01 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Totally LOVED this chapter!! Great story.

 Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Great update! You answered the questions I had. 



Author's Response:

I hoped that this chapter would wrap things up.

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 06:24 pm
Title: Chapter 2

So, that was hot... I hope he's sorry because he thinks she's upset and not because he is tryingto be "mature" again.

 Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2013 01:52 am
Title: Chapter 2

PLEASE COME BACK!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 09:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Please continue.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 09:15 pm
Title: Chapter 2

MORE PLEASE!!! I like it :-)

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 04:01 pm
Title: Chapter 2

these two had better get it together, they only want to be with each other anyway. Lovely read, thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 09:57 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, I hope that "I'm sorry "doesn't completely ruin the moment for her... This was HOT, but I feel like once the high goes away reality is going to hit hard..and not in a good way.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 2

Bastain, those of tears of joy.  You made her happy your loving was so good!!  This was so good!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 05:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

I must have read that too fast, didn't know he put the coat over her face. lol

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 12:08 am
Title: Chapter 1

How old is Sage? How did Sage and Sebastian meet? Why don't' they know how each other feels about the other?



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon. I promise just stick it out please.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 09:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it. Why the nightmares, does she have insomnia? The twins love her that is sweet.



Author's Response:

It wasnt a nightmare. Sebastian put his sport coat over her face not realizing she was asleep in the chair, so she was frightened.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 04:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it Acromdance. How old is she? And where is the boys' mom? More please :)

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02 2013 01:10 pm


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