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Title: Chapter 8- Nothing is as it seems

Great fic!

 

 Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2017 07:38 pm
Title: Chapter 8- Nothing is as it seems

Great story I can't wait for the updAte. There are some mistakes throughout that may need the help of an editor. Otherwise it looks like things are about to get good.

 Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter 8- Nothing is as it seems

i love this story its amazing.i really like the connection between the guys and kalila especailly the one with her dad. my one request is that kalila have a mink talk with her birth mother please and thank you . keep going because your story rocks

 Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 06:32 am
Title: Chapter 7- First Taste of Freedom

OMG you got me hooked!!!!!   Fantastic weaving of their stories! please update soon!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 07:14 am
Title: Chapter 6-First Experiences

I'm loving the story. It reminds me of Katherine Madisons The one who Walks with Wolves and Loving Mia!!



Author's Response:

I love Katherine Madison, after reading her books i wanted to try writing something in that direction, I just hope its not too similar.

I also got a little insperation from Lynsay Sands and Christine Feehan.

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 08:53 am
Title: Chapter 5-Testing the Waters

Sexy....me like :-)

Update soon



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter now, trying to get it right.

 

thanks for reading and reviewing 

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2013 03:15 am
Title: Chapter 5-Testing the Waters

I'm embarassingly addicted to this story. I pounced on the new update like a crack head. That could be the cold meds talking though haha. Lovely chapter with a hint of some sexy time next go round :)



Author's Response:

lol, cold meds or not im glad your reading and enjoying it. stay tuned the next chapter is coming soon.

 

thanks for reading and reviewing 

 Reviewer: PeppermintChocoSwirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2013 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 4-Explainations

That was deep, Kalila is really hurt, there is no pain like being hurt by family.  Mina is going to die Kalilia will be devastated.  How is Blain going to convince her that he care about and loves her?  Wonderful!!



Author's Response:

I love your reviews. you always get what i'm trying to achieve in each chapter. Thanks

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 3-The Past

Wow, that was good.  So Kalila really is mate to both Marcus and Cain.  I can't get the finess of each man in this story, the drool factor is tripled!!!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 11:35 pm
Title: Cast

I like where this is going, more please...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 08:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

i really enjoyed what you have written so far and i can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope you continue to enjoy.

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 06:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

I loooooved reading this so much that I reread it a second time...
Awesome update ..
Eagerly waiting for the next 1

Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch. Im a sensitive writer i need a compliment every now and then.

Thanks for reading and reviewing 

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Me likey ! More please.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. More on its way

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2013 05:48 am
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

I'm liking it already! Eeep!!! Sexy men!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. i just love the cast for this story.

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 05:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Kalia has two shifters in love with her, one her true mate and the other unlucky. Or is this going a menage story?  Love the cast and the story!  I give this story two thumbs up! More please!



Author's Response:

Its totally a menage, Kalila is half wolf and half "something" else. so two mate for her two halfs. There is also a secret about Caine and Marcus wrapped up in there.

 

thanks for reviewing. Keep reading an enjoying.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 05:04 pm
Title: Prologue

Wow you are off to a very powerful start. I hope that Blain finds his baby girl and raises her. What was Lila? She made the ultimate sacrifice for love she is my shero! 



Author's Response:

I haven't figure out what Lila was. I know how i want her species to be but i cant figure out a name that works.  She was a strong woman.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 04:52 pm
Title: Cast

Why in the hell is her daddy finer than her mates roflmao when I saw the first picture I'm like "ohhh I like dreads" then I saw the second pic and I was like "Ohh he cute I like me some Thor" then I saw her daddy and I'm like "Daaaaaaammmmnnn no wonder her daddy conceited her fine" then a mamajama I can't have no daddy like that can her daddy be Caine and Caine be Blaine cuz her daddy sexy then a mug but let me stop. Anyways wonderful pictures good size it's not blurry and plus I like Kalila's picture and the green eyes are a nice touch.



Author's Response:

lol. they look alike so it had to ne her dad. dont worry he gets his own girl in another story at another time.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 03:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

This is going to be interesting...



Author's Response:

I hope so... thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 07:25 am
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Well damn. I'd like to be mated to either of them. And her dad? Not fair. Dad's arean't supposed to be that insanely hot.



Author's Response:

Her dad gets his own story in time. I admit he is probably the hotest one there.

Thanks for reading and reviewing

 Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 07:00 am
Title: Cast

Seriously in your head Caine is better looking than this!?! Feeling a little faint from the sexiness coming from both Caine and Marcus. Keep them all the same please. YUM!!

Author's Response:

yep, in my head his hair is a bit redder and the tips are pitch black. i wanted him to be native american but when i found that picture for Caine it worked better.

 Reviewer: shellyme Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 05:24 am
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Uh this is going to be Awkward for someone. Jeez why didn't Caine just grow a pair and tell her. Anyways awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Caine is the suffer in silence type and when nobody is looking he makes his move...that is if he gets the chance.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: SeriouslyMe Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 05:16 am
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Good start. Will you be adding cast pictures? I can picture their wolf forms but have a hard time picturing their faces. I love stores when the lady gets two hunk.

Author's Response:

I put up the pictures for the cast. hope you like.

 Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 04:09 am
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Drama drama drama......whats going to happen next?



Author's Response:

lol, keep reading to see.

 

Thanks for reviewing. hope you continue to enjoy the story.

 Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 03:40 am
Title: Chapter 1- Introductions

Lol good job



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 02:06 am
Title: Prologue

Please make longer chapters. :)



Author's Response:

lol, will do.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2013 02:05 am


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