Title: Chapter 24

That was hot!!! It was perfect and I'm glad they are back together!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 23

i feel sorry for sasha thinking she would get answers from the women who birthed her but she turned out to be so rude and impassive when it came to sasha's feelings..great update!

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 24

Damn finally these two got their shizz together! I was wondering when they were going to stop their little banter they damn well knew they wanted each other TEASE

It was great and while there are still problems I feel like these two are at a better place to fix them together and Lord knows the journey was rough

Thanks for the update and I will be looking forward to the next

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 24

As I was reading this, all I could think was 'I know you're gonna give us a sequel :-).   You have written one of the best stories and the sex scene was not awkward; it was basically off the chart. 

I am so glad he won her heart and you brought it home!  I can't wait to see him stand up to his father and Sasha handle the sister.  They are going to be shocked, except for Dom, that Sasha now comes first in D's life.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 24

Great Job...

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 24

I'm so happy! It wasn't too soon! Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next and the sequel! I have high hopes for the couple! 

Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:58 am

Title: Chapter 24

I don't think it was too early. I thought it was perfect.

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 24

Good loving!!  I don't think that the sexing is too soon, it was inevitable since they meet up again. I give this chapter two thumbs up for Dimitri opening up to Sasha. I still say she should have butstayed in her own lane but he could've been sensitive. Sasha don't renege after the good loving.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 24

I don't think it was too soon : I wouldn't have love to see the situtaion dragged to no end and Dimitri mope around and grovel. I hate that, when people have to humiliate themselves to supposedly "win" some one lese affection. It is a childish game. So I am glad they were able to move past their issues to get back together. The sex scene was pretty hot too, good work. (Even though the emphasis on the "slim" hips, the "thight" vagina and the height difference kind of bugged me...)

I am still not convinced about the all "I love you" thing : I understand why Sasha needed to hear this at the moment, I even understood why she nedded it back then even though I found it more a needy clingy thing linked to her abandonment issues rather than the expression of an healthy feeling. I don't think that just because she said it first, Dmitri HAD to follow right back after her and say it just to please her. they had been dating not even for 2 month, and was dealing with his own emotional issues, I always found her need to hear him say "ILU" selfish. For some people, it is love at 1st sight and they can and want to express it verbally right away. For some other it takes more time, and they won't express it verbally righ t away or at all, but they'll show it in one million ways. The latter shouldn't pressured or shamed just because they are dealing with emotions and love differently.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 24

Great update! I Absolutely love this story. Can't wait until the next chapter. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 01:00 am

Title: Chapter 15

Dmitri's a fool!

I had to read this chapter for a second time. These comments are insane. I cannot understand how anyone could blame Sasha for the break-up, or justify Dmitri's words and actions. So she crossed some lines when it came to his family...So what?! He's lucky to have someone in his life that cares about him enough to involve herself in his idiotic family drama (honestly, how many of us know people, friends and/or family, that get involved in our lives?). He handled everything wrong!

She deserves so much better.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 24

This was great! I'm glad you didn't draw it out. It flowed really well!!! I'm glad that we can see the change in Dmitri and also the fact that despite her hardened exterior, Sasha really hasn't lost he loving person she really is. 

Reviewer: SleepEasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 24

Wow.... This is my favorite chapter, hands down. The love between Sasha and Dmitri is something special. I HATED how they ended & how people treated Sasha, expecially Dmitri. But you had Dmitri comeback in a very big way and I love it! LOL!! 

Great job on the sex scenes, one of the best on this site. I like how you don't have it in every chapter, the build up and special ones you make are SOO worth it. Please post another chapter soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 24

I have a feeling that by the end of this story (if not soon) Sasha will find out she's pregnant as a result of their.......'passion' in this chapter. lol

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 12:02 am

Title: Chapter 24

I have been following this story from the beginning, eagerly waiting for an update cause this story is sooooo good. you are very talented and I love the characters so much. I know that the story is coming to an end and am so :( I can't wait for the next update. Great job!!!!

Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2014 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 23

OMG! I cannot express to you how much that last scene gripped my heart!!!  I actually felt her pain when she sobbed those words to Dmitri! Mad kudos to him for manning-up and being there for her when she needed him most!

Don't fret Sasha. Janelle will need you b4 you will EVA need her again!!!! I hope Sasha can become acquainted with her grandfather b4 it's too late...fix him up and save him from that horrible daughter of his. Sasha deserves the HEA...with the man who chose her in a crowded room three years ago. Great update. 

from a crowded room

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 06:29 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Darn near perfect chapter, I needed this tonight.

Reviewer: ayiti2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 09:20 am

Title: Chapter 23

Damn that was beautiful, but sad. Yeah she needs him back in her life.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 12:05 pm

Title: Chapter 20

i think dmithri should tell sasha about hw he patched things up with dominic by letting go of his childhood anger...he should show sasha hw much he has changed his perspective and view on life..glad sasha agreed to hv dinnee with him...love to see her gradually forgiving him for his past actions..update soon!!!..

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 09:32 am

Title: Chapter 23

Thnaks for the new chapter. I would have done without Sasha's family reunion but it seems like she needed that closure to grow out of her abandonment issues and I am glad that she may start to do so. Yeah, some people, some family are just assholes, and you are btter off NOT having them in your life.

As for Sasha and Dmitri, I have always been team Dmitri, thought they were both at fault for the break up, liked how he started growing out of his own issues and didn't think he had to grovel to supposedly "win" her back. But now I think may be they need to start by rebuilding some friendship rather than jumping back together, especially considering the very vulnerable state Sasha is now.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 23

I would like for her to get better acquainted with her grandfather. They both deserve that! Forget Janelle, she is not worthy of the dust on their shoes! 

As for Dmitri, he needs to wait one more year for Sasha to give in and be with him! I am in love with them as a couple.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 23

great chapter!!! update soon

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 23

Her mother is a piece of crap. It's good for Sasha to see she is better off without that woman. Hopefully she can build a relationship with her grandfather before he passes and it would serve her incubator right if her grandfather leaves everything to Sasha in his will. I think Dmitri needs to stand up to his father and show Sasha that he chooses her over that man before she can give him another chance. But I'm slowly starting to see that maybe Dmitri isn't the big turd I thought he was. 

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 02:55 am

Title: Chapter 23

Dmitri came to help her in her time of need.  They deserve a heartfelt reunion and a second chance.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 02:42 am

Title: Chapter 23

He was a real jerk, and I didn't think you could redeem him. I was wrong. I am so ready for Sasha to become emotionally whole, and ready for a relationship. Perhaps they should have some transitional counseling, but this relationship is definitely salvageable and believable again. Congrats!

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 01:33 am



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