Title: Chapter 26

Fantastic update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 26

Great update.  I have  feeling this dinner will be a disaster, but I've been wrong before.  Glad Teagan is coming back.  Interesting that she wants Carter...lol.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 26

He's got a key?!  Big old happy smile.  I can't wait to read about the dinner and if she goes in wearing an engagement ring...  I stop everything when I see your updates.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 26

Ok, well....here goes

As much as I hate to admit it, Natalia is right. I believe Dmitri would use that wholely inappropriate occasion as a "fuck you" to his father. Nikolai deserves one, but I'm not sure when his life is depending on how calm he stays is the time for it. That moment will present itself in Sasha's behalf.

Now, Natalia and the whole backstory with her is a bit more complex. She was the other woman, and that's not generally condoned amongst most people. However, the entirety of that backstory has not been reveiled up to this point.

I usually don't spare homewrecking ho's at all, and she seems to be hurt that Dmitri thinks she's no more than a gold-digging harlot. So that leaves me to believe something more happened. It still doesn't explain Nikolai's behavior, but the whole truth might not be known concerning that. Of course she would cry it was all just powerful love as to why she married Nikolai. Yeah, sure. Right. That's the thing that needs to be resolved between Dmitri and his father. We shall see.

As far a Teagan goes, honestly, I'm not feeling the love connection that's being set up with Carter at all. I personally think Carter can do better. And when it comes to men, she acts a little too much like her other two cohorts.

Teagan has always kinda bothered me concerning her friendship with those two vipers and how they treated Sasha. I don't get how she can connect with someone like Sasha, and still jive with two people who are basically shallow, cruel, mean and just plain nasty. And she never said much about it. Even with having friends that are polar opposite, that always seemed a bit much.

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 26

I can't stand Natalia and I think that she should die right along side her husband.  Is that bad?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 26

Who will the sequel focus on?

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter. I am ready to see what happens at the dinner.

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 07:03 pm

Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter. I am ready to see what happens at the dinner.

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 07:03 pm

Title: Cast

Hey, Sha. You are leaving me hanging! Its time to update. I am so desperate to see the showdown between Dmitri and his father.

I think you should try to get the story publish after you finish it on Chamber. The story is DAMN GOOD. EXCELLENT WORK and I LOVE YOUR WRITING VOICE. You have the potential to be a first-class novelist. 

Reviewer: Hotscotch23 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2014 07:36 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Its a good start for Nadia and Sasha. I think the siblings will stand behind Dmitri if their dad will continue to be an asshole to Sasha.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2014 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 25

Welp.

Shit, I can admit it. Sasha grew up and realizes she is lovable and if nobody else does she must love her damn self first! And D while I wanted to see him broken broke limp dicked and curled into fertile position on the floor I like your version of him evolved better. Thank you so much for continuing their story with such maturity grace and sincerity. Oh and girl the sex woo! Jesus be a quicker picker upper lawd! 

 

Please please make me even happier by let thing S&D lay the smack down on his trifling daddy!!! I'll be your best friend!! 

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Nice chapter, I can't wait to read the meeting of the father :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 09:55 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the new chapter.

The sex scene was hot. Though I am not a mega fan of the usual dominant man/submissive woman sexual pairing (I really hate "alpha male" bullshit 'cause way too often in fiction it's a way to romanticize male abusive behaviour), I get that it's just a sexual dynamic, so to each its own. It doesn't define the entierety of Dmitri and Sasha relationship, which, I think has evolved into a friendly loving equally respectful relationship and I LOVE that.Just one question though: what happened to safe protected sex? If I remember well, they used to have safe sex. Is Sasha at least on BC? Or have they decided they wanted to start a family? But they haven't been back together for 1 month yet. THAT would be a bit rushed, wouldn't it?

Aside from battling her anorexia, I am glad Nadia grew out of her selfishness. And that she apologize to Sasha and that Shasha also apologized to her. I don't expect them to ge BFF but a cordial relationship would be nice.

Now, about that father of theirs, I do hope he get some long earned ass bitch slapping. The man is just....UGH!

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 08:13 pm

Title: Chapter 25

I like that their relationship is moving forward past the obstacles that made them break up the first time, one more so they can get their happily ever after. Love them together.

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 04:15 pm

Title: Chapter 25

I think the level of maturity on the part of both ladies was AWESOME. Nadia has learned her place in her brothers lives as well as her need to understand Dmitri's love for Sasha. This chapter was much needed so that when the time comes, Dmitri and Sasha can have Dominic and Nadia on their side as a United front against the father! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 12:18 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Awesome Chapter.

I love that Sasha is still the same loving woman that she was in the first chapter. She forgave Nadia and owned up to her own faults as well. I hope that Dmitri will be there during the storm that has been his father, they are going to need to prove to each other that they can whether storms without breaking down or apart. This has been one of my favorite chapter, I am a sucker when it comes to romance and hot scenes.
I love a dominant Dmitri, strong alpha men are the hottest. They know when to lead and when to show their vulnerable side, love it!!!

Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 08:34 am

Title: Chapter 25

*Sighs* 

I have been unhappy with the direct you've taken this story ever since the break-up, but I kept reading to see if things would get better. Unfortunately, things are worse.

1) I do not like the fact that Sasha seems to be back in a position of 'inferiority' regarding Dmitri. Some of what was featured in this chapter between the two of them reminded me of how things were between them before (Sasha thinking of herself as less than Dmitri, Dmitri ordering her around, etc.). It is frustrating.

2) Even though you already mentioned that things aren't 'perfect' between Sasha and...Nadia (there, I said it), this chapter, like several others, just seems so rushed. That entire 'apology' scene was so cliche.

Whatever.

The story was good while it lasted, I guess.



Author's Response:

Well, I am sorry to hear that you dislike the story. I, however, respectfully disagree with your statement of inferiority. I am not going to change who a person is to create a more happily ever after fairy tale where everyone is on equal footing and the relationship is perfect. You say "Dmitri is ordering her around" but I have written no scenes where Sasha has been placed in an inferior position. Being submissive to someone sexually does not make you inferior in any aspect and I am sad to hear that you would think so. If anything, Dmitri has been in the position of being both vulnerable and inferior as he has tried to woo Sasha back into his life. 

Sasha definitely does not consider herself less than Dmitri; she has never said that nor thought it since the break-up. And this chapter was supposed to remind you of where things were before- a better version of it where they are happy and accepting of each other's faults and more secure in their feelings for one another. 

The scene with Nadia was not rushed. It wasn't the main conflict of the story and I don't believe that someone has to beg and plead for several chapters before they are forgiven. How was the scene cliche exactly? Is it cliche to own up to what you did and apologize for it? Sasha accepted the apology with hesitation but with a willingness to see where things would end up. 

I don't know what you were expecting from the story. Quite frankly, if I gave you what you were expecting it wouldn't be a good or memorable story to begin with. It would be cliche!

Thank you for reviewing and for reading my story. At the same time, I wish you would be a tad bit more respectful in voicing your opinions. I have worked on this story for more than a year now with sincere intentions. Whether you enjoyed it or not please respect that. Statements like "whatever" (whether you mean them to or not) are unnecessary and disrespectful.  

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 25

Wonderful update.  I am glad that Nadia and Sasha were/are able to let bygones be bygones for Dmitri's sake but I still have my eye on that heffa.

I like the open affection that Dmitri is showing to Sasha and how they/he considers her his best friend.

I can't wait for more. I like Dominic is too wondering when he is going to be an Uncle cause they have been bumping like bunnies since their stay at the hotel when she went in search of her mother.  It also had been 3yrs since she was intimate so has there been contraception used?

Thank you for the update sweets waiting for more.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 25

I now respect Nadia because she put on her every big girl panties and apologized. Not only did apologize bet she offered up her crazy reasoning behind her treatment of Sasha. I am proud of Sash for realizing that she should have stayed in her own lane and not gangstered her way into Dimitri family business.  Most excellent! !!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 02:50 am

Title: Chapter 25

I love the strength in Sasha and I can't wait to see Dimitri's strength when he confronts his father.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 25

Supreb!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 25

Yep! Thats what I was looking for! Those two are just freaks...lol!!

 

Lovely chapter!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 12:04 am

Title: Chapter 25

Good for Nadia and Sasha for being big little ladies and apologizing to each other because it could have gone left really quickly.  I hope that they can really become friends because while Sasha has Dmitri and Teagan, she can always have another friend.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 24

loved it!!!! she is soooo pregnant!!! more please!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 10:42 pm

Title: Chapter 25

great chapter...so excited to see what happens with the father

 

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Date: July 03 2014 10:41 pm



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