Title: Chapter 2 - The Meetings

Can't wait formore

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2013 10:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

 So I'm beginning to love Gaia, lol. She's a hoot. Anais' opinion and reaction to men is very interesting. And like someone said before I have questions which will keep bringing me back to this story. I also like the way you write in first person; it draws me in.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that a lot of people are liking Gaia so far. She is quickly becoming one of my favorite supporting characters. I hope you find that your questions are answered in the following chapters. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Music Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

Interesting start so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

So far I like. The story's 'voice' especially is somewhat reflective giving the story depth. And Gaia is a riot. Cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment and review. I tried to make the voice very reflective of the characters and I'm glad that I am accomplishing that. Hope you enjoy the following chapters!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2013 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

Ana, what happened to you...



Author's Response:

All will be answered in the following chapters and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

Gaia is so funny, I love her!!  Anais is an interesting young woman.  So is she shy or just doesn't like people in general?  Who is she in love with?  Has she meet him yet?  Is he Gaia's grandson's employee?  I have  so many questions and I am looking forward to finding out the answers.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you found Gaia so humorous! I can't answer your questions without there being major spoilers, but hopefully they will be answered in the upcoming chapters. I should have the next one out either tomorrow or Saturday! Thank you for the review. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Sometimes You Just Need a Little Push

I have alot of questions that I think can only be revealed by more chapters so to that end, I'll hold off asking. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and I hope that your questions are indeed answered in the following chapters!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 08:58 pm

Title: Prologue

Great letter for you know who....though I'm anxiously awaiting another chapter....loving it...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! The new chapter should be coming out in a few minutes, actually. 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 01:04 pm

Title: Prologue

Very vulnerable start; I like it. Will the following chapters also be letters?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment and the review! I'm glad that you caught the emotion I was trying bring out. I hope this isn't a big spoiler, but letters will be incorporated into the story, but I haven't decided if I should let a letter be a whole chapter like the prologue or not. There will definitely be some dialouge and description. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 10:48 pm

Title: Prologue

That is an interesting beginning.  Why is a grown woman writing an anonymous letter and signing it live you kno who?  



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and I can't quite answer your question now, but hopefully you'll find your answers in the following chapters!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 04:30 pm

Title: Prologue

The opening letter is just lovely. I'll be waiting patiently for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I'll probably have the next chapter out in one or two days, hopefully sooner! 

Reviewer: Music Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 07:40 am

Title: Prologue

I love the open of love...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for being the first person to review my story. I hope you enjoy the other chapters as well!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2013 06:45 am



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