I'm liking this story.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2016 09:12 am
This is a great story and I hope you come back and grace us with a sequel.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 05 2016 11:49 pm
Ariana says she's not a whore yet she behaved like one with her boss...sure women have the right to be as promiscous as they desire but professional lines were crossed...the woman is quite unprofessional...why turn her into the stererotype right out of the gate...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
[Report This]Date: December 05 2016 08:52 pm
This story is moving too fast. It could be a real good and believable story if their love had grown on a slower pace. I do like the characters and their descriptions but with the story moving so fast I couldn't believe the story, that is why I stop reading.
Reviewer: black girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2015 08:23 pm
I just love, LOVE this story. I am sooo damned late in reading this story but I am soooo happy I finally was able to. GREAT Story, from the first chapter to the last this story ROCKED!!!
Please, post one shot, just something on the Tobias & Ari. The baby is a wonderful addition and having a glance at them present/future time would be AWESOME!
BEST STORY EVER!! :D
Author's Response:
awe thank you for reading it! and yes i do have a holiday moment in mind for these two :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 03:14 am
Ahhh alast what a great ending for a great story
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 04 2013 08:40 pm
I love this story!! I would love to give Tobias babies! I would become a baby carrying kachine if he wanted! That man is fine!!! When one g raduates from college they receive a degree not a diploma
Author's Response:
my fault, lol I'm sitting here sneakily updating and barely paying attention. Let me go fix that :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2013 04:03 pm
yaaaaaaaay! Loved this chapter! I cant wait for the baby to get here! This was an awesome chapter! ^.^
Author's Response:
thank you!
Reviewer: heleana503 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 25 2013 04:32 am
Wow let me just say congratulates that's Soooo awesome you're studying abroad really takes guts to do. Well this was a great update seems Tobias is staying the head but is gonna change somethings in the Organization his baby & love giving him that motivation. They're back at home with their friends fixing to have Sunday dinner. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 24 2013 07:02 pm
Yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! I miss this story so much!!! Awesome update!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2013 05:09 am
That is awesome, being able to study abroad. I wish you nothing but success!! Yes, she killed Tobias' crazy ass momma and he won't allow the organization to to take their child away. I am a happy camper!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2013 04:30 am
ooh we love, we love it. Very nice. I love the flow of the story and how it all connects.
Author's Response:
thank you for the sweet words!
Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 10:19 pm
Mister T is fast and strange :-X
Author's Response:
strange indeed
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 07:55 am
Ariana is gonna be the matriarch of a new joint family. I love this story!! Post the one shot whenever; it won't take away from this amazing story (to me, anyway)...
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 07:46 am
What's in store for our interns? XD
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 07:37 am
Finish this please. That is all I have to say.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 04:36 am
This is the best story you've written. I would love to read a sequel to this.
Reviewer: sailormoon89 Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 04:09 am
Please finish this story first and I love any and all stories featuring that fine specimen of man David Gandy. I am so glad that she shot his momma as she deserved to die for killing her family. Dimitri and Ariana will have an interesting life together. i am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
You mean Tobias? Lmao
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 03:04 am
Finish this story first then do the other one.
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 12:14 am
Oh my gudness!!!! Ariana got so cra-cra.... I LOVE HER!! :-)
Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2013 11:40 pm
This is soooooo good I hate to see it end. Please finish this one first, then start the other.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2013 10:49 pm
Umm,,,,, What????? This is wild! I read it but still couldn't believe it. This chapter wrapped up two major plot points. Mommy and Uncle J went to hell together. Ariana and Tobias both got revenge on both of sister and brother. Very good and can't wait to read more;D
Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 15 2013 10:17 pm
Girlllllllll!!!!! About damn time her ass died!!!!!!!! I Love me some David Gandy!!! Please finished this first then post the other one.
Author's Response:
lmao your reviews ALWAYS make me howl
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2013 10:01 pm
Please finish this story.. Thank u.. :-)
Author's Response:
that's what I'm planning on doing, your welcome :)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2013 09:57 pm
What a tropper! She is a ride or die kinda of chick and I love it! Bring on the violence, lol
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2013 06:44 am