I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT!!! Something told me that Tobi was like a Mob boss or Mafia boss, or he was the head of a family. He is so freaking sexy!! lol. Can't wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 12:21 am
Yes! This has definitely become my new FAV! Thank you. Girl, Tobias is everything!
Author's Response:
hot sex on a platter lol
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 10 2013 07:27 pm
I am addicted to this story! Please update soon! Pretty please with a cherry on top!!! 😊
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2013 07:26 pm
I just have to say that i'm loving this story so far, please update soon. Also i wonderf if Ariana really has thought about what she is getting herself in to and what is going to happen when she has to go back home.
Reviewer: tiffany Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 10 2013 07:20 pm
Girl! YES! YES! And YES!
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 07:54 pm
Great story can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 03:34 pm
Ok the friends came knockin' instead of the cops. Tobias " Michael, One bitch with BG ASS TITTIES COMING UP!!! Good looking out player getting rid of baby boy for a real stallion to handle his business." lol
Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 04:52 am
Michael, this cocky brat with his dougie ! I just love him ! TJ is really interested in Ariana, he's going to drive Tobias through hell... well, I love love triangles ! How come Tobias isn't suprised that she's a virgin? Though they just recently met, I'm really pleased to see that they address each other with such familiarity. Your cast is perfect, both T & TJ are sexy, I wouldn't know what to do surrounded by so much sexiness, there's no saying Ariana is way more strong than my poor weak self ! lol. Thanx for sharing !
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 03:49 am
This story is great. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 02:49 am
i love this story. I love Michael he a trip. Im so in love David Gandy. Can't wait for the update ツ
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 01:57 am
please dont let tobias be too older than her let him be the max four years older than her it makes it more steamy and some story suggestions would be to make someex booyfirend comebackt to like her after they are in a relationship and for the friend to like her and if you really felling it he being in a mob thing ya know just suggestions lol
Author's Response:
i will let you know that one thing you've suggested. is happening very soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 11:58 am
Hummmmm......interesting
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 08:41 pm
So far so good. I like this story. Are one or both of the main characters Shifters?
The whole thing with the mark made me ask.
Author's Response:
what is a shifter?! LOL Tobias is just a possesive ass man
Reviewer: LamLife Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 07 2013 07:11 pm
loving this story more soon
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 05:43 pm
more, keep it coming
Reviewer: renata Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 04:57 pm
Nice start.
At some point it would be great if we could find out what exactly happened on the night before the story started.m
Also, wouldn't Tobias be a bit more discrete even if he is the boss?
Author's Response:
Tobias is a powerful man...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 09:43 am
LOVE! Can already tell that this one will be exciting!!
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 08:02 am
AN ASS I wnat to ride like a thoroubred stallion until the cops come knockin.
Author's Response:
LMAO i love this review. this made me laugh
Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 06:51 am
cool story i like tobias
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 06:09 am
Tobias was all kinds of wrong for what he did to Arianna. Just because she drunk kissed last night does not make her easy. I am glad that he apoogized but will Arianna forgive him? Yes Tobias was an ass!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 05:39 am
This is going to be interesting, Tobias is their boss! Me likely!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 04:26 am
This just might have my interest
Author's Response:
i hope it does :)
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 04:25 am
I like this story can't wait for more
Author's Response:
thanks love! first review! next chapter dedicated to you :)
Reviewer: PrettyinBlue08 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 03:59 am