Reviews For Body Party
Title: Chapter 13

That beautiful was meant to survive!! 

Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 16

damn its 2am and im like more!!!!!!! im going to sleep now lol new fav!



Author's Response:

haha thank you for joining the ride :)

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 15

These people are evil, who would have thought that Johannes would betry that crazy ass woman.   Tobias is still alive now come back for your woman. The doctor told Arianna about who she is and I am so glad that Tobias didn't know at least at first. This is so crazy, but I love this story, 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2013 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! This chapter had me on edge of my seat!!!!!!! Girlllllllllll!!!!!! Can't wait!!!



Author's Response:

hahaha :)

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2013 09:56 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Tobias' mother is certifiable and needs to be put out of everyones misery. I can't wait to read what happens next!



Author's Response:

lol she ain't going down without a fight.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2013 09:51 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Damnnnnn! This is so good!

Author's Response:

thankyou lovely!

Reviewer: simplymandy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2013 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Why you keep doing this to me?? Lol my emotions is all over the place!!! Tobi can't die!!! I'm not readyyyyyy!!!! (In Kevin Hart's Voice) and why he lying???  Loving the drama!!!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh noo! Its about to go down.

Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 13

Yaaaaaaaas! Thank god! The baby is alive! Woooo! Tobias is just crazy! Idk what Ariana has gotten herself into! Lol

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 14

Kris has a death wish and Ari tells too many people her business.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 12

I don't know how I missed this chapter, but damn it was good. His mother is ruthless and she wouldn't hesitate to kill Arianna but she has a right to know what happened to her family and why. She may love Tobias and he loves her but she stands to loose too much including her life he maybe fine but he ain't worth her life. What the hell is the doctor thinking? What is the miracle here?   Taking their children away to be raised to be assasin's. She needs to know so that she can make an informed decision about her life.I am trying hard to remain team Tobias but damn his family is too cray cray!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 14

First off I love Kristoff he is fine as hell!! Tobias' momma is crazy, she shot her own son!!  Damn!!  How is Tobias going to react to Ari still being pregnant?  This story is just too damn good, I need more!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 07:54 am

Title: Chapter 14

Woowwwww!!!!! Tobi momma scares the shit out of me. Lol That body guard of his something don't feel right about him. Can't wait to see what happens next. ツ



Author's Response:

She scares me too. Lmao

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 13

...how do you mess up an abortion?



Author's Response:

Dr. Luboya is a smart man. 

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 12

Woah, this just got strange. Ddin't see that coming

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 13

This story is awsome. You put a different spin on the mob romance story.  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: playboy25 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2013 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 13

uh uh it's on now--so glad she is going to keep the baby, and the doc was smooth in lettingher hwear the heartbeat before telling her about the baby.  Wanna know what T. is up to.  Update soon, please.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Still with it, but ...

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 13

My obsession with this storyvis unhealthy and I'm 800% okay with that! Keep up the amazing work!!

Reviewer: simplymandy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 07:27 am

Title: Chapter 13

This story is amazing. I cant wait to see whats gonna happen next  

Reviewer: Carriekiara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 06:57 am

Title: Chapter 13

Lots of twist. I like it, but Tobias needs to be more Alpha.

Reviewer: LamLife Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 06:32 am

Title: Chapter 13

I know that I am 1000% percent in. Yes I did mean to put a thousand. This is a wild ride and i am in it unti lthe end.



Author's Response:

Ride or die, I like that! :)

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 13

You have redeemed yourself. Thanks for writing a miracle in your story. Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

*wipes sweat* woo. Thanks for sticking along :)

Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 13

WTH, after all of that she' s still pregnant? What is the doctor talking about? How did Tobias' family take from Arianna's family?   I love the puppy, Leonides is so cute!



Author's Response:

Chapter 12 explains what Tobias' family did.

And yes, she is pregnant.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 03:59 am

Title: Chapter 13

I'm still with it :)



Author's Response:

yayy :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 03:41 am



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