Ooooooooooooooooooooo!!! You wrong!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!!
Author's Response:
LMAO at: you wrong!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2013 03:22 am
Oooo you wrong you are so wrong.....I LOVE IT!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOLOL y'all are killing me with the "you wrong" reviews
Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 03:20 am
Very interesting I like this..
Author's Response:
glad you do :)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 03:09 am
I'm still with it! I need another chapter!!!!!
Author's Response:
You will get another one! :)
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2013 03:08 am
maybe the pill was a placebo or it didn't work for her--fingers crossed. if this happens then she should keep the baby, but get away from tobias for a while--let her get strong enough to take on his mama.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2013 05:26 am
I love this story. Maybe they should both be cold hearted and sadistic . That would be a different twist to the story.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 05:57 am
is ariana crazy, after everything tobias told her she still wants to be with him, she needs help.
Author's Response:
She's in love
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 02:17 am
GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ??!!?? I am FLOORED!!! Literally!!! You just spilled some MAJOR T!!! Phew, I can't breathe! OMG! I need another update. It just got sooooo GOOD!!! Well done!
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 11:26 pm
Maybe I am sadistic but I would like her to find out about her family and become a new breed of cold-hearted bitch and take out his mom and uncle. The meeting with his mom should come after she has more of a sense of self-worth or something, where I feel she won't be intimidated. But keep it coming, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
You're reading my mind ;)
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 10:24 pm
Oh Yea I want her to interact with his mother. That will be epic!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 10:11 pm
All I can say is HOLY SHIT!!!!
1. No keep it hidden. Put it in a box. Lock it and buried it under 50 tons of cement!!!
2. No. She don't. But She love him.
3. Yes. For now but happy ever afters don't last forever.
4. And Yes I will kill you!!!!
5.Michael!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 10:04 pm
I want to see Ariana and Tobias's mother to interact!
Author's Response:
Oh that's coming. Don't you worry!!!!
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 08:40 pm
Even thought i didnt think she was ready for a baby it was still sad
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 05:55 am
Tobias is being an asshole. Ariana is showing her age.
Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 30 2013 05:12 am
Phew! That was close! Now you've got my wheels upstairs turning about what happens when she is pregnant and what is Tobias and his mother not sharing?!? Oh the suspense!! You've got me on the edge of my seat. Good work.
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 29 2013 08:03 pm
No, I don't think she get pregnant quite yet. BTW I am obsessed with this story, I keep coming back and re-reading it! Keep up the amazing work!!
Author's Response:
Awe! Thank you! This just made my day!
Reviewer: simplymandy Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2013 08:35 am
Well I think she should keep the baby & become more independent because her baby will have to join the family business. I know she was ok with that before but now it's here..... :)
Author's Response:
well she'll become more independent in the more upcoming chapters I'll tell you that much
Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2013 07:41 pm
This story is amazing! Loooove it! I hope shes not pregnant its too soon. I hope they make up soon! :)
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2013 12:00 pm
Making her pregnant would be such a copout and soooo predictable. I swear no one gets an abortion or just practices safe sex like everyone else in these stories. Ariana is young, has a life ahead of her, and living in another country (and her boyfriend is in the Russian mob). This is not the time for a kid. Save the little Gandys for when Ariana can talk to her bf rationally instead of pouting.
Author's Response:
Agree, not the time. But if she is pregnant. There could be a crazy twist
Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2013 06:26 am
i hope she is pregnant. can you imagine little tobias running around, so cute.
Author's Response:
little tobias would be a bad child LOL
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2013 12:54 am
David makes me smile as well with his fine self!! Please no babies, as that child is not ready to be a mama! Tobias shot that man that was cold hearted, How does he expect to keep his way of life away from his lady love? Jealousy is killing TJ but I an help him feel better. Loll Fabulous!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 11:22 pm
Please don't make her preggers. Let them have more time together. Plus he is officially in the the biz now. Let them get through this first.
Author's Response:
We shall see
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 10:43 pm
Ooonhhh the suspense! Thx for the update! Its just what i needed today. I hope your day gets better...I failed mine as well. Sucks but it happens :-)
Author's Response:
thank you hun. I needed that! <3
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 09:19 pm
Make her pregnant!! And She should keep it!! And David Gandy makes everybody smile. Lol
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 09:13 pm
I'm really enjoying this story!
Author's Response:
I am glad you are :)
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 08:35 am