Great start! Sorry it took me so long to read this. I love the cast & can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2013 10:37 pm
i hope you give Jamie some oracle like power to zap his ass. I know he was wronged & she will change him, but he needs a black Jesus beatdown!
But I love it so far! great job!!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 05:13 am
Jamie did right by fighting him. Poor dear.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 03:32 am
It's a good start, but watch your tenses.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 03:07 am
OMG hurry with the next chapter!!! this is awesome!!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 03:31 am
I'm Hooked, line, sinker!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2013 10:37 pm
strange that mom and dad knew this day was coming and did nothing to teach her defense skills. They kept her innocent and basically defenseless.
I wish Jamie was tough and had street smarts, bc between Hades aand Venus, she will be naked scrubbing floors and wimpering any day now.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2013 09:36 pm
Very interesting, I am intrigued.
Update Soon!!
Date: July 12 2013 09:36 pm
Hopefully, she will make his life hell (no pun intended).
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2013 09:32 pm
Does is so weak, how does the head god allow himself to be tricked by Hades? Does is to suppose know all so how did he get tricked?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2013 05:15 pm
I like it! its very dark and i love it. but who supposed to be the facr for presephone? her pic is not showing. By the way Hades is an ass. lol
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! Irina Shayk is supposed to be Persephone
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2013 02:58 pm
What a way to find out who your father is and to be stared out lasciviously by her uncle? But hey I guess that incest means nothing when you are god!! Looking forward to reading about Jamie's reaction to meeting her father and to the real reason why Zeus and Hades have shown themselves. Good stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 01:14 am
It's definitely an interesting start. I'd like to see how you develop these characters.
Reviewer: mags Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 11:23 pm
I like it. Please continue
Reviewer: VirgoBeauty Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 08:35 pm
Love it! Give us more!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 07:52 pm
Please update soon. I really like the story and the characterization of hades and Zeus . I wonder if there is a backstory of Zues and Jezebel and how you will incorporate that into the story?
Reviewer: Tea rose amber Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 07:21 pm
Interesting and a nice start.i hope you update soon , I want to see the reaction ofjamie and introduction of the other character. By the way, nice touch on the photo of the character . It's a very helpful.
Reviewer: Kira Dylan Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 07:19 pm
Agh.... This is. Very good start! Continue you please.
Reviewer: Jmie injunction Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 07:14 pm
I love it ! update ASAP!
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 07:07 pm
Some good looking men in this cast, yummy!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 03:12 pm