Reviews For You Make Me Wanna
Title: Pick Me Up Then...

Really good

Reviewer: altoider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 09:57 am

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

Sure wish you would finish this one. Re-read it and it is still good.



Author's Response:

I'm planning on it. I'm having a bit of a hard time with this one however. But fear not, Heather and Beck will be making their intense return soon. I hope. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 06:19 am

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

Love this story. Please continue! Do you need a beta? 



Author's Response:

actually yes i do need a beta lol

Reviewer: WrittenC Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 06:01 am

Title: Well isn't this a surprise...

When u gonna add moree 

Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 09:54 am

Title: Well isn't this a surprise...

Love this, love this, love this

Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 01:18 pm

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

gimme moreee i love ittt

Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2013 07:55 pm

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

I am really enjoying this. Beck is going show this woman was a relationship/love is really about without being her lap dog or turning into a jerk himself.. I also like your approach to the bratty main character, you don't want to slap Heather during every scene or chapter. She knows,she can be a pill, but she tries in her own rich and bossy way to do better when it comes to Beck. I'm sure she will fall back into her bitchy and bossiness sooner or later, but it's tolerable here. Good job.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 04:06 pm

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

Beck is cute. I like how he's softening up Heather.

Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 06:45 am

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

this is a pretty good story.  the guy is funny and keeps Cameron in check.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 01:39 am

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

This is cute! I'm glad Heather came to her senses. Can't wait to see what happened after Cameron's show.

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 08:34 pm

Title: Lessons to be taught

I almost felt sorry for Heather. Almost. But Beck is right, gotta teach her a lesson. And he is doing a fine job at it lol. I wonder if he might start having feelings for Cameron or vis versa. Great update!

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 08:23 pm

Title: Pick Me Up Then...

Well let's see what gonna happen next!! Aww, they're together now!!!

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 07:18 pm

Title: Well isn't this a surprise...

Oooo, I think this is going to be a cute, funny and sexy story.

I can't wait to see what a big boy he is.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. He's a BIG boy. Not scary big but big. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2013 03:28 am

Title: Lessons to be taught

Aww, He didn't give her sex, lol! I find this story cute and humorous, update soon! 

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 08:31 pm

Title: Lessons to be taught

That was hot and dang talk about she got it bad

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 12:35 pm

Title: Lessons to be taught

Cameron is really teaching Heather.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 04:59 am

Title: Lessons to be taught

!!

Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 02:54 am

Title: Lessons to be taught

OMG!  That woman is so damn horny.  But she wants more than just sex and she knows it!  He does too.  Four years is a mighty long time to go without and then get your mind blown.  Now he's withholding the goodies and she's about to go crazy.  LOL.  This is getting good.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 02:48 am

Title: Lessons to be taught

I Just love your Characters! Beck dont play I love what he is doing to Heather and I am glad Cameraon has his back! The bathroom scene was priceless. I love this story!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 01:22 am

Title: Temper Tantrums and Triumph

I like their relationship! 

Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 11:29 pm

Title: Temper Tantrums and Triumph

Beck "the pleasure releaser" Williamson just knocked her butt out. Old girl didn't know what hit her. If he does remain at her house, she'll be spying on him on the regular. No way is she done with him. This promises to be really fun to read.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 06:50 am

Title: Well isn't this a surprise...

I didn't think I was going to like Heather, but when she ran into the wall, yeah, that got me on board. I howled.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 06:42 am

Title: Temper Tantrums and Triumph

Great chapter, I hope you update soon

Reviewer: Toya23 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 05:04 am

Title: Well isn't this a surprise...

Well damn... very hot chapter. I love Beck's sense of humor and how he finally stood up to her and messed with her a bit. I love your style of writing, it's very refreshing. It'll be interesting what happens the morning after and now that he's not only homeless but also unemployed. Update soon!

Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2013 01:36 am

Title: Temper Tantrums and Triumph

Very interesting. I hope she doesn't give in too soon though, what is the fun in that :)

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2013 10:50 pm



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