Title: To tell or not to tell?: That is the secret

Honey...you do need to do more.  A steamy multi-chapter fic where you just give it your all.

 

Now, if you don't mind, I'm off to share this with just about every woman I know.

 

xoxo,

Ankh

Reviewer: Ankhesen Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 03:00 am

Title: To tell or not to tell?: That is the secret

pleasantly surprised to find dacey fanfic on the chamber. i really enjoyed your take on what could have happened between the kiss and their diner meet-up. it's a great fill-in-the-gap scene i think would have worked on screen.

i'm glad this couple (yes, they are a couple. what's an archie?) caught your interest and i hope you desai to write more about them.

 

 



Author's Response:

Aww, you do pun [I sucker 4 that]. I'm still finding my way & figuring out what I'm good @ so I can hone in on that.Even though I hate describing scenery but love writing dialogue I realize I have to work on both for balance. Ugh...I edit myself & that's horrible because I have very little creative writing experience in general [but in English especially]. There might be some tense-mixing, questionable punctuation & other such errors but I, like you, really enjoy Danny & Lacey & hope they might be overlooked. To Answer your question, an Archie: Is a Future-Ex-Boyfriend ;)

Reviewer: chassylady Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 09:57 am

Title: To tell or not to tell?: That is the secret

Excellent chapter ! Please, go on. You captured their nature so well. During Scandal's absence, this is my favorite show ! Hopefuly, since she deserves it, Lacey will be more present in your story than in the show... Nice job !



Author's Response:

Hi! I'd love to be inspired to write more. I just have to warn about having a pet peeve when writing fanfic that I've discovered: I don't like to write non-canon if the pairing I like is actively coupled. Maybe that's weird, but it's the #1 reason I enjoy delving into "missing scenes". BTW I'm so happy you enjoyed my portrayal of Danny & Lacey's characters, that's what I most worry about, that I don't know the characters well enough to write for them. I re-watched all the episodes & some scenes dozens of time hoping to get it right. For dialogue: I am a sucker. BIGTIME. But I'm so new to this i have yet to write for more than two characters in one scene! Hopefully Twisted is my three-character breakout fic.

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 06:55 am

Title: To tell or not to tell?: That is the secret

Good start. Can't wait for more. I actually really like this show alot.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm really not a writer like I see prolific others on this site. With that said I mean[printed] words don't come easy to me. I'm learning by doing I guess & it seems I'm inspired by chemistry + well written|acted characters. I love Twisted too!The whole entire cast is delicious & they mesh really well. A Thayzee|Olitz friend started a Dacey forum last week & I wrote this to help start the fanfics on there. Here's to a second season!

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 20 2013 05:23 am



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