Reviews For Drifting Away
Title: Chapter 2

That is truly a damsel in distress.  I can clearly picture her going down. This is intriguing so they a past to the hero and the damsel.  I am liking this more and more.  Great Job.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 03:18 am

Title: Chapter 2

I'm so glad you decided to add more to this! I laughed a little when she fainted! That's such a damsel thing to do. Can't wait to see where you take this! 



Author's Response:

Yes, fainting seems to be a damsel thing. I wonder what it was that made her faint, hmmm??? Glad you are enjoying the story!!

Reviewer: FrancetteP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow!  Please give us more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading more to come in chapter 3.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 06:56 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Very intriguing! I like this chapter, reading it was just like watching it on tv, especially with the flashback. Now what did he have in his hand that caused her to faint? And why was she so surprised to see him again? Was he supposed to be dead? Had he moved and was never to come back? 

And how did I know you would write a guy with blue eyes? hehe 

By the way, you wrong for that comment in your A/N LOL



Author's Response:

You hate it when I am in your brain, so now you are in mine. Hmmm, what will happen next?? If the muse only knew how to stay focused. Lol I'm thinking you might get some of your questions answered. Stay tune!!!

Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

First. NICE!!! Looking forward to seeing some more from you missy.

Second, WTH! Why you left us hanging like that?

So not funny JV. Can't wait for more chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!! Don't start I already get slack from Missus James about my writing. Hopefully, chapter 2 will answer some of your questions. And you are one to talk about cliffhangers missy!!! Lol

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 04:18 am

Title: Chapter 1

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Umm...why the heck did you leave us hanging like that? Who was in that car? Girl, you are worse than me with the cliffers. LOL And that's kind of scary to be on a deserted road with a broken down car and no communication! Yikes! This story can go in so many directions. 

Let's see if she's going to see her mother and to a town she hasn't been to in a while it has to be someone she knows. Hopefully a fine, sexy man who will rescue her that she's had a crush on back in the day. Just saying...hehe 

Don't you hate it when people try to write the rest of your story for you?

Why do I keep thinking of The Little Mermaid everytime I see her name? :)

Great start so far! Are you going to continue it? I'm just so excited you finally wrote a story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!! I figured I better put my creative juices to good work, since I am always reading and reviewing, why not do some writing. Glad you liked the story and there is more to come. Hopefully, I will be able to answer all your questions.

Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 02:48 am

Title: Chapter 1

Super introduction with a clear understanding of the character thought



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!! I tried to make it easy to u d'état and who the character is. I think when you can understand who the characters are you are better equipped to understand the journey of the story.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

Cliffhangers are of the devil, how you end it with her gasping?  I will just assume that she knows the person who pulled up in the truck.



Author's Response:

Well it was a prompt and it was no more then 500 words so I guess a cliffhanger was in order. Lol Thanks for reading and more to come the muse and Missus Jamea seems to be riding me hard.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 1

This was intriguing.  So who did she see in that F150? I hope yo continue past the prompt.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!! And more to come!!! 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 1

Where's the rest of it woman??? What happened? Who's in the truck?? Seriously you can't just leave it there. I know it's a prompt but come on...! I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!! I see you too don't like a cliff hanger. Lol turn about is only fair play!!!

Reviewer: Francette P Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

So this is what it feels like after reading a cliffhanger. I am sooooo happy you decided to do this challenge, however, I am pissed off you left it like that. That's jacked up. You can't leave me hanging like that. Just because I do it to you does not mean you can do this to me. Do as I say, not as I do! Love it. I can't wait to see more postings from you.

I BETTER SEE MORE POSTINGS FROM YOU.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought it was only fair since you love to do it to me. Btw, where is my Epilogue??? I have written a story so I should get my Epilogue...Write it woman!!!! Thanks for reading and more to come!!

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

omg!!! please tell me there is more



Author's Response:

There is more!!! Against my will there will be more to come. Lol Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: renata Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

Woooo who that drivin that truck? Don't leave me hanging woman!!!!

Author's Response:

I hope your question was answered in chapter 2, but wait was that who was actually driving the truck. Hmmm??? Glad you are enjoying the story!!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 10:20 pm



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