I want to read more, what happend after she openned the box?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 12:02 am
Using paragraphs will help with readability. Plus a new paragraph when someone starts talking.
Author's Response: Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:19 pm
Ummm can you say unfair cliff hanger?!? LOL Come back and put us out if our misery!
Author's Response:
Lol blame Jacci for the 500 word thing.... Not that I managed lol just glad you like it and that it makes sense.
Reviewer: LittleRedRidingHood Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 03:18 pm
Your writing career began when you first posted this gem! Please continue, I love to see what you got next for us.
Author's Response:
You don't know how much that means to me and coming from you wow. Surreal totally awesome you are one of the greats for me on VC and you thinking I make sense wow Thank you..... thank you
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 02:39 pm