Title: Chapter 1

I want to read more, what happend after she openned the box?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2013 12:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

Using paragraphs will help with readability. Plus a new paragraph when someone starts talking.



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Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ummm can you say unfair cliff hanger?!? LOL Come back and put us out if our misery!



Author's Response:

Lol blame Jacci for the 500 word thing.... Not that I managed lol just glad you like it and that it makes sense.

Reviewer: LittleRedRidingHood Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 03:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Your writing career began when you first posted this gem! Please continue, I love to see what you got next for us.



Author's Response:

You don't know how much that means to me and coming from you wow. Surreal totally awesome you are one of the greats for me on VC and you thinking I make sense wow Thank you..... thank you

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 02:39 pm



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