What the hell! Ending it like this is wrong on so many levels! I'mma need you to continue ma'am! Like now! LolReviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2014 12:09 am
Love the story so far can't wait to read the next chapters however, as a Marine myself, I would just like yo note that we do not have specialists in the Marine Corps. She would be a Cpl/ E-4. Also, a Marine should never be confused with a solider. Soldiers are Army. Other than that, I am enjoying the story.
First, let me say thanks for your service. I truly appreciate it.
Forgive my error. No disrespect intended. I have military cousins and them can be fighting words, lol. What I hoped to convey in Evan was the confidence, self-assurance and sense of self-direction so many of our military display.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 11:45 pm
This is some good $h!t....
Her responses are indicative of her military background...professional, business like...deliberate. I feel bad for Cody....and I cant wait to see how this turns out, esp. the how he will bring about his next course of action in bringing her around....Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 04:55 am
Why do you keep doing this to me? Keep leaving me on a cliffhanger!! WAAAAh
Don't think of it as a cliffhanger. Think of it as an open option to revisit. Yeah.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 03:53 am