Hot damn, what next? And please spare the hapless fainting spells, so, well u know. Let the girl have some stamina, she ran and he snatched her and set her in his saddle in front of him with his hand holding her in place. I don't know, I was really liking it , till she fainted.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2014 10:30 am
Please keep working on this story, it is good.
Reviewer: LoveGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 03:50 am
The story's interesting so far. I can't wait until you update the next chapter; I want to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Ebba Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2014 11:16 pm
Oh I want more so tantalizing can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 06:24 pm
Kirada saved her from marriage, so what f he kidnapped her. Ava is punk she assed out from running and fear! That is just sad! More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 15 2013 06:05 pm
Loving this story!! More please!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 15 2013 07:32 am
hey lady,
please write more.
Reviewer: Maroongal Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2013 04:33 am
Hahaha I went back and saw Jan and then thought of him in the story and hahaha he's a hoot man just wow well at least Ava got her wish yes? She's been taken from that horrid life she could have been living.
Oh don't you worry Ava, you wanted to go explore your feminine wilds hahaha Ren weill most definitely help you with that.
I'm ready for this! Thanks for the update
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 09:05 am
Oh hell Ren is HOT. I had to go back and read the prologue with this picture in mind and it did not disappoint YES
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 06:10 am
I am so glad that General Kuroda saved her from upcoming specticle of her arranged marriage. Don't like mom and pops but jury is still out on May. More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2013 03:37 am
i say go for it so more please!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2013 10:09 am
Was so excited I forgot to rate lol
Reviewer: IndianChocolate Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 06:47 am
KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: IndianChocolate Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 06:46 am
Wooooo this is a good one, I can feel it. Looking forward to more
Reviewer: PeppermintChocoSwirl Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2013 04:05 am
Ou interesting! I want to know where this goes please do continue. I'm intrigued
thanks!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 08:21 pm
Yeah, I got some thoughts....WHERE'S THE REST? I NEED MORE!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 05:43 pm
Great start. I wonder if her father gave her up!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 04:30 pm
i love it so far!
Reviewer: xsweetdellzx Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 03:28 pm
That was hot!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 03:06 pm
SEXY so far! intriguing intro, definitely can't wait for more. You know I love everything you write, so this will be no exception. thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 02:48 pm
Ohhhhhh me likely!!! Please update ASAP!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:22 pm
Ummmmmm this sounds like the beginning of a very interesting story please continue
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 10:55 am