Reviews For Hot Brown Beans
Title: Gustav

Yes Please continue.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 09:45 am

Title: Gustav

Girl,  you better not stop! This is one of those... M.Y.S. stories. Are you sure this is your first time? (Submitting a story that is) Keep it up and you will be on everyone's must read list!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2013 10:34 pm

Title: Chapter 1

What can you add on the coffee......

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

ooooh she a straight ho! An  i aint mad at her! get it gurl!!

This was great! Loved the unexpected twist of the "plain" brown girl + vibrant sexual huntress.  You should do a collection of shorts from p.b.'s point of view.

 

well done.

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this. I hope there will be more ?



Author's Response:

Yes indeed. I got the go-ahead :]

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 01:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yesss! HBB Series here I come! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :]

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yes you can make it into a series! I wanted our talented writers to have fun galore with these prompts. DO IT!!!

 

Cause I got to see what else you have in store with this juicy tale. LOVED IT. 

Thanks for answering the prompt.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love your work :]

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

OH Dirty Dirty DIrty....she's the definition of naughty and then trying all the exquisite delicacies that the shop has to offer well well well...I like the way she thinks!

Also this I beckoned him with the crook of my finger and showed him all the sites our humble city had to offer. ... best line. I loved it 

I love this! Can't wait to see what you have in store for me!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :]

I think I might ask ElizaBlu if I can make it into a series 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 04:16 am



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