ooooh she a straight ho! An i aint mad at her! get it gurl!!
This was great! Loved the unexpected twist of the "plain" brown girl + vibrant sexual huntress. You should do a collection of shorts from p.b.'s point of view.
well done.Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 02:37 am
I really liked this. I hope there will be more ?
Yes indeed. I got the go-ahead :]Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 01:54 am
Yes you can make it into a series! I wanted our talented writers to have fun galore with these prompts. DO IT!!!
Cause I got to see what else you have in store with this juicy tale. LOVED IT.
Thanks for answering the prompt.
Thank you! I love your work :]Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 05:42 am
OH Dirty Dirty DIrty....she's the definition of naughty and then trying all the exquisite delicacies that the shop has to offer well well well...I like the way she thinks!
Also this I beckoned him with the crook of my finger and showed him all the sites our humble city had to offer. ... best line. I loved it
I love this! Can't wait to see what you have in store for me!!
Thank you so much :]
I think I might ask ElizaBlu if I can make it into a seriesReviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2013 04:16 am