Title: Chapter 1

I resisted your story for a while, but finally broke down and read.

I like your treatment of the challenge... I like that 'word' puzzle with 'betray'. I love that Eshan had the balls to move from California and pull off the No-speaky-english game.

Still shocked by Shahirah... That her taste in men is so appalling. Still I wouldn't wish any kind of repression on her. I suppose she's one of those muslim girls who don't have to worry about choosing a sensible partner (her parents will do that for her), all she has to concentrate on is not getting caught /-by pregnancy, STD or Eshan.

Looking forward to updates and seeing Eshan crack. How long will he be able to resist?



Author's Response:

Only time will tell.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Bookbutterfly.

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2013 09:35 am

Title: Chapter 3

Cliffhanger!!!! Who is it? You can't leave us hanging like this!



Author's Response:

I know...I'm a stinker.  But the suspense is over.  Just posted an update.  Thanks for reading and revewing, Flgurleygrl!

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2013 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 3

Glad to have come across your latest story. I'm a fan of your work and this one definitely has my interest. I like the suspense and the mid eastern male character. 

Can't wait to read more and find out who is leaving the threats. 

PLEASE update soon!

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks Flgurleygrl!!!  I'm not really sure where I'm going with this one.  But I'm so glad you're coming along for the ride.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2013 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 3

No! Lol, I'm actually leaning forward in a " And, the killer is...." pose.

 



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks for reading and commenting, OrangesatHome; and for the visual!

Reviewer: OrangesatHome Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 3

Why hasnt Joss contacted the police? I think that It's that Hirah because she wants Chris to herself.



Author's Response:

Joss hasn't called the police because on and off she's suspects it was either Sahirah or Chris.  She didn't want to involve the police if it was either of them because despite the potential shadiness, she doesn't neccessarily want to get them in serious trouble.  And she's not even sure a crime has been committed.  No one has made a threat, just an accusation.  There was no forceful entry or property damage.  So, regardless of who left the letters, the only crime that may have been committed was criminal trespass; and even that might not stick depending on the culprit.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Who was it? How could you end it there?  I am not liking Sahirah I wouldn't man nd her beinv sent back to her country.



Author's Response:

Pam, you know I'm partial to cliffhangers.  But the identity of the familiar face will be revealed next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 3

no! no! nooooooooo...!! goddammit JJ - you can't leave it there...! thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Sorry (sort of).  I'll try not to leave you hanging too long.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Cassius!!!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 08:24 pm

Title: Chapter 3

no!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was just wrong



Author's Response:

Lol.  Sorry.  But thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 07:45 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Im school and when I saw this update. I was jumping up and down in my seat and my teacher thought I was having a seizure. lol 

But Noooooooooooo why end it there!!!! Lol. 

Who was the familiar face!? I bet it was Eshan!

The interception killing me!!



Author's Response:

Lol!  We'll see if your prediction is correct next chapter.  But just remember, a face familiar to her might not be familiar to you...  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Treale!

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 06:31 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Great Story! Keep updating plz

Author's Response:

Thanks M3l4n1!  My plate is fairly full right now.  But I'll be as prompt as possible with the updates.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 05:00 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Eshan seems so intense and brooding .....  can we have second helpings of him pretty pleeeeease. Lol.

 

P.S. The nonverbal communication between them is pure erotica.



Author's Response:

You have not seen the last of Eshan.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Bhvana!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 07:55 pm

Title: Chapter 2

so so good - thanks the update!



Author's Response:

YW Cassius.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 09:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks Acdromance!

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2013 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 2

I love it. Chris is something else! But something telling me that Chris didn't do it. OWWEEEE cant wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Thanks Treale!   You might be right about Chris.  Then again... 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 08:46 pm

Title: Chapter 1

More please. I'm enjoying this so far. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Karmal! 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 01:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You had me at, "It's spider entrails." :'''D I love it! Keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Thanks T!  Updates forthcoming.

Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 01:51 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i've really missed your writing so to see a new story from you made my day - it was so funny and sassy that i forget someone is stalking Joss and leaving disturbing letters, lol! like always i look forward to the read - thank you, JJ!

 

//Cassius



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks Cassius!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 12:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  love it



Author's Response:

Thanks Bredreaway!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 06:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was funny! More please! 



Author's Response:

An update is in the works.  Thanks Pam!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hey, hey! That's not place to stop a chapter! This story is interesting, fun and hilarious. I'm ready for more.



Author's Response:

Lol.  We'll pick up where we left off in chapter two.  Update coming soon.  Thanks Peachmartini!

Reviewer: peachmartini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 06:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like enjoyed reading the first chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank Blucat!

Reviewer: blucat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I liked it I would love to see where it could go but Im scared that you wont finish it because of all the pirating and things... but if u do Ill be on for the ride!



Author's Response:

I know what you mean, RedMoon.  But no need to worry on this one.  I will definitely complete and post it.  I feel guilty posting and then removing stories due to all of the theft that's going on.  So I've decided not to post anything I may later publish until I've decided whether that's something I want to pursue.  In the meantime, expect some shorts, drabbles and one-shots.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2013 05:46 pm



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