Eshan. Excellent. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks Astrid!
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 11:07 am
Very good and the ending left me with a smile---a big ole smile! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response:
YW. Thank you Penelope!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
[Report This]Date: October 18 2013 07:43 am
Ughhh. I caught something in my eye..... lol. This was such a beautifully poignant story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
Lol. YW. Thank you Bhvana!
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 05:23 am
You had me tearing up and everything. This was just so gosh darned good! You truly have a gift with words
Author's Response:
Aawww, thanks PeppermintChocoSwirl!
Reviewer: PeppermintChocoSwirl Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 03:36 am
I love this ending! I am so happy that Joss and Eshan got their happily ever after. That and Hirah got what was coming to her :)I am also glad that Eshan's sisters realized how much that Joss means to Eshan and stood up for him. Now you know that his siblings love him and want the very best for him. I hope that we can get an epilogue, because I really want to know how the meeting between the families went and the wedding between Joss and Eshan!
Joelle Jax, I just wanted to tell you that this story and Unexpected Maintenance are my two favorite stories from The Chamber. You have a way with making people fall in love with characters and be able to relate to them. I hope that in the future I will be able to read more stories from you.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I'm hoping to write an epilogue or a short follow-up story. I just need to do a little research and make the time.
I'm so flattered that you've enjoyed this story (and UM) so much. Your review has once again made my day. Thanks so much for reading and for the awesome review, FaithMax!!!
Reviewer: FaithMax Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 03:30 am
Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
YW. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Flgurleygrl!
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 03:22 am
Eshan and Joss story was so sweet yet not sickeningly so. Iloved the pace of how their romance unfolded. I appreciate that she was able to pursue her dream before they married. This story was fantastic. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks Acdromance! So glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 03:06 am
Well, while she's out traveling the world Eshan is trying to figure out how to keep his woman. That was really cool how his sisters stood up for him. Poor Sahirah has to rely on her memories of Chris to get her through the rest of her life. Kinda makes you glad you live in the good ol USA. Where you can choose your own F-up relationships.. lol....This was good story...is a good story ...is it over?
Author's Response:
Thanks VeMo. There won't be a full blown sequel. But there probably will be an epilogue or a short follow-up story.
Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 03:00 am
I loved this, and also vote for an epilogue. Joss ans Eshen have so much chemistry through the story, it would be a crime not to 😜. I'm so glad to see that karma caught up with Hirah! Bravo!!👏
Author's Response:
Thanks Musicluva! I'll see what I can come with for an epilogue or short follow-up.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 02:53 am
Is there going to be a part two or epilogue? lol I want to know what happens after they're married and how their life together is. I really enjoyed this story it was a great read !!! =)
Author's Response:
Thanks Ohsoolee! There most likely willl be an epilogue or a short of some kind.
Reviewer: ohsoolee Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 01:54 am
That was awesome and Hirah is getting what she deserves. Married to a man 25 years her senior and helping raising his kids. Damn her parents must hate her! Joss got her man and Eshan sad the words that she needed to hear. I would love to read about their wedding.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pam! I'll see what I can come up with surrounding their nuptials.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 01:10 am
Joss should have put both thier asses out affer whoopijg both of them to within an inch of their lives. Sahirah is crazy and Joss was trying to tell your dumb ass that hris was using you. Wish THAT I COULD FEEL bad for her hurt feelings but she deserves every bad thing that is coming her way. To s ay that I can see that you are mad at me. Pearl stood up on bounced on my last nerve with her harrassment of Joss.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Pam!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 12:55 am
Loved this! Can we get an Epilogue, pretty please, with a cherry on top?
Author's Response:
Thanks Caramia Darling! An epilogue or a one or two shot is a definite possibility.
Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2013 12:37 am
OMG!!!! I KNEW IT!!!! NOW YOU KNOW J.J I HAVE THAT OLIVIA POPE GUTT. LMAOO!! YES I'M SO HAPPY IT'S MAKES NO DAMN SENSE.
karma is a bitch!! I know its mean but I'm happy as hell that 'who shall not be name' got everything that came its way.
This story was absolutely amazing! I never been so emotionally in story till I read this one. You have such an amazing talent. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all.
But this can't be the end. Can you give me a epilogue?? Please J.J
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Thanks Liv! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for faithful reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 10:57 pm
omg that was a great ending but i still dont want you to stop! Im so happy for them !
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Melanie! I may have a little something more for you with Eshan and Joss.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 10:27 pm
Great story, I'm glad she gave him up because if she didn't he wouldn't have been able to be sure as he is now about her.
Thanks
Alison
Author's Response:
Thanks Alison!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 10:26 pm
I'm gonna be honest and admit, at first the summary made me wary. But i was like "screw it" go ahead and read. So i did... the entire thing today. and can i say... YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Aww, it made my heart hurt in the best of ways. Awesome start to finish! 10/10
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 10:08 pm
I've been putting off reading this fic -- boy what a mistake! Update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Storyteller! Update posted.
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 05:42 pm
I have read this chapter a few times and I really want Joss to slap the taste and stupidity out of Hirah and tell get the fuck out of her house. Hirah deserves to be homeless and I want her to go to Chris to ask for help and for him to say no. Or maybe say yes and proceed to fuck other woamn when she's home. That little ho with her narcissistic selfish self deserves nothing but unhappiness and pain. You can throw in a whole bunch of humiliation.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! You might get your wish. Thanks Pam!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 03:48 pm
This is my 3rd time reading this chapter. I think it was unfair of him to ask her what does she want. I'm afraid of the ending. I would be perfectly fine with you jumping a few years ahead to wrap this up.
Author's Response:
I agree that Eshan asking Joss what she wanted was unfair IF he asked solely for the purpose of knowing with no intention of actually giving it to her. But it could be that he'd made his choice, but knew it was one he couldn't make alone. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 02:41 pm
Sometimes it's better to have loved and lost...
Author's Response:
Very true.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 08:58 am
Please, write me in your story so I can take that stupid git and pound her f'in' head into the concrete. There's no way that she won't screw up with no one to cover for her nasty ass. I am livid. Hirah is a, gah, I can't think of the word to use for her. What an entitled bint.
This:
“They found the condom in his room. They asked if it was you. I did not know what else to do.”
and this:
“I didn’t think it would matter. My parents already don’t like you—”
made my head explode with brain matter spattering all over my computer screen. This trick... no words, just no words.
I can not wait to see what E will do. It almost seems as if he might choose Joss.
Gurl, you put your foot in this chapter. yes, you did.
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! You are so for real about your retribution. I love it! We'll see if your suspicions about Eshan are correct. Update posted. Thank you for the fabulous review and the laugh!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 17 2013 08:44 am
To me this is what love truly is, setting it free, Eshan is Muslim and he is his faith and his family, whom joss fell in love with. It is out of respect for Eshan's faith and Joss' abiding love (agape), not succumbing to carnal desires or singular pursuit of physical possession but love of a deeper level. I love this story, the happy ever after is not necessary for the protagonists to be together, but embracing the deeper meaning of love.
Author's Response:
Thanks for an absolutely lovely and wonderful review, Joellen! I loved reading your insight.
Reviewer: Joellen Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 03:00 am
I really commend Joss for taking the high road at the end. Not an easy thing to do, I'm sure.
Author's Response:
No it's not. We'll see what it profits her. Thanks Musicluva!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 02:42 am
You know what... - Sahirah is a grown ass RICH woman - if she's not rich, I'm sure her parents are - so she would just have to find her another place, or go back home with daddy! Joss is too nice. Sahirah threw Eshan AND Joss under the bus - the very two people who was trying to protect her dumbass. Nah boo, you gots ta go!
Eshan and Joss are torturing themselves, and me! Gurl...what is Eshan going to do? lol
Author's Response:
Lol. We'll soon see. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing, JV4ME!!!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 02:26 am