Beautiful!!!! I would love for a happily ever after too. But, in reality, the odds are very much against them. Never underestimate the power though. Can't wait for the next submission. 💖💖💖
Author's Response:
You never know... Thanks for reading and reviewing, Musicluva! Update posted.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
[Report This]Date: October 17 2013 02:15 am
I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really hate Hirah right now! Joss needs to kick that girl to the curb right now, because all she knows how to cause is grief! I seriously can't believe that Eshan didn't tell them the truth! Not only is Hirah ruining his good name but also Joss' good name! She is no friend to Joss, and I hope that Joss has the good sense to kick her out.
I really love happily ever afters and I hope that Joss and Eshan get one (preferbly with each other). I hope that Eshan's parents realize just how much Eshan loves Joss and vice-versa. It might take a little bit of time, but I think it is worth it.
Oh and on a final note concerning Chris: FINISH HIM!! ( in mortal kombat voice)
Author's Response:
LOL!!! OMG I had a moment when I read "FINISH HIM!" I knew exactly what you meant before I even got to the parenthesis. Mortal Kombat was my joint! Nostalgia time... But I digress (as usual).
You are REALLY not feeling Sahirah (lol), and you are definitely not alone. She deserves to be evicted and Chris deserved to be eviscerated. Let's see if either gets it. Update posted. Thanks for the awesome review, FaithMax!!!
Reviewer: FaithMax Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 02:07 am
wow, I'd kick that bitch out.. can I say that here??! Maybe that would be mean of me and I would regret it later but she would not spend more then 3 nights in my place. Enough time to find a hotel.
Author's Response:
Lol. I think "bitch" is allowed. If not, see you in the principal's office. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Alison!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 02:05 am
Wonderful date!
What's a girl tah do when 'her man' is the perfect man for someone else! However, isn't it odd that Eshan is performing the required acts to woo his predestined Iranian/Muslim wife with the American/Christian Joss?
Makes ya go hmmmmmm...
Author's Response:
It does, does it? Lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing, JV4ME!!!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 01:14 am
It is so hard to believe someone could be so naive and selfish. I wonder what will her parents find out the she in no longer so pure.
I need for Eshan and Joss to be together, but I want Eshan to also remain true to himself.
I hate to see this story end because it has a tragic hero, a loveable heroine, despicable villans, and comic relief.
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoyed the story, Drea. Sahirah, Joss, and Eshan's fates have been decided. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2013 12:40 am
Joss really loves Eshan she doesn't want him to lose his connection cc to allah or the love of his his family. Hirah is just a selfish bitch who needs to be sent back home with her parents! It pisses me iff that Eshan went along her lie. I want my happy ever after!
Author's Response:
We'll see if you get your wish. Thanks Pam!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 11:15 pm
No! You cant end it! I wont allow you to. But this chapter was extremely sad and sahirah is a giant bitch!
Author's Response:
Lol. I'm sorry. I gotta do it. Just posted the last two chapters. Hope you enjoy. Thanks Melanie!
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 11:10 pm
I actually understand why she choose to say goodbye because she knows how much love and passion he has for his family and beliefs that could possibly hurt the relationship in the future. He needs to be away from her and realize what he wants because it will hurt him the most to be alienated from his family. Her mother may say things but will not stand in her way of happiness whereas it doesn't seem the same for Eshan. Again, he has to make that choice and sometimes being away from that person will bring the right choice to light. I hope he can be strong enough to speak to his parents and tell them the truth and they can be understanding of what will make their son happy. Great chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
I agree with your take on the situation. Joss sacrificed to see Eshan happy. Let's see if his parents will do the same. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lajack1!
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 11:03 pm
Is ot the end?
Your stories are soooo beautiful (and trust me I'm not even a romance-drama fan).
There is so much emotions it left me speechless!
Thank you so much for sharing your talent!
Author's Response:
YW. Thank you for the awesome review! I just posted the last two chapters. Hope you enjoy. And thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 10:41 pm
I think I forgot to breathe while reading this chapter.. you are killing me here. Thank you for the excellent update.
Author's Response:
Lol. Don't die on me yet. We got two more chapters to go. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 10:32 pm
I really hope Joss kicks Sahirah out the apartment. Sahirah definitely needs to get a taste of her own medicine.
Author's Response:
I agree. Thanks Ohsoolee!
Reviewer: ohsoolee Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 10:11 pm
I don't know if I've mentioned it before, but I really appreciate how quickly you update. Thank you!
Author's Response:
YW. : )
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 09:42 pm
WHAT! WHAT! WHAT THE HECK JOSS! THAT WAS YOUR OPPORITUNITY TO MAKE HIM YOURS! MAKE HIM MAKE A CHOICE THAT WOULD CHOOSE YOU! OMGosh!
I can't stand that Saraih! I hope she gets hers before this is all said and done.
Author's Response:
Lol. Poor Joss. She's trying to do the right thing. We'll see how well that works out for her, and if Sahirah gets her comeuppance. Update posted. Thanks for reading and commenting, Flgurleygrl!
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 09:41 pm
My emotions is all over the place. I cant even write a proper reveiw. Lol.
I am so sick of 'Who shall not be name' like what the hell is wrong with that creature!!! I can't deal with that thing!!! Can it just get hit by a bus then burned alive!!! Ugh!!
My heart hurts for Joss. But something is telling me That something is about to happen. Something very unexpected.
Awesome update J.J. ♥
Author's Response:
Lol! You have zero tolerance for Sahirah, and you're not alone.
You and that gut of yours, Treale. Has it ever been wrong? Let's see. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 08:40 pm
OMG; how selfish and entitled could any one person be...Sahirah's parents have raised a monster and they are too blind to even see it. The harlot of Babylon is their very own daughter and they have no clue...so sad really.
This chapter broke my heart, even though this was the almost logical sequence of events, considering Eshan's position. Hope he still chooses love in the end...will have to cross my fingers, toes and all other appendages in hope...lol.
Hate it that this story is coming to an end, but it's been really fun to read as always...love it!
Author's Response:
Lol @ the crossing of appendages. Let's see if it worked. : ) Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amie!!!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 08:00 pm
With E. gone, Chris can step right in and go after Joss. I hope her anger comes out and she beats his azz and save some for S.
Author's Response:
Lol. You never know. Thanks Penelope!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 07:49 pm
Hoooollly Cow!!! Is that the end!!!
Author's Response:
Not quite. There's one more chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brown Mocha!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
[Report This]Date: October 16 2013 07:36 pm
Pearl is a mess. I love her. This is such a good story. I can't tell how it will end, but I'm sure as hell enjoying the ride, Chica.
Author's Response:
Pearl is all the way out of control. So glad you're enjoying the story, BellaChica. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 09:31 am
Pearl is now on my good side! I love this story!
Author's Response:
Lol. Miracles do happen! Thanks Pam!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 04:52 am
Why didn't Joss tell Eshan what that dumb ho Hirah did? Hirah makes my both my eyes twitch and my teeth itch!
Author's Response:
Lol. Well, Joss was looking out for Joss. Eshan threatened to tell Hirah's parents about her affair if she had anymore contact with Chris. That would mean that both her and Eshan would be gone. At this point, I'm sure Joss wouldn't mourn losing Sahirah. But Eshan is another matter. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pam!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 04:48 am
I'm glad mama Pearl brought her back down to earth. She is going to get hurt and she can't blame him bc he did warn her.
He is going to be hurt when he is handcuffed and charged, and finds out Joss kept her mouth shut, as if Chris would just go away.
I bet S. move Chris in--her dumb butt would hold Joss down for Chris, if he told her to.
Author's Response:
You're probably right about Sahirah. As far as Joss and Eshan are concerned, we'll soon see what horrors await them. Update posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Penelope!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 04:40 am
Great chapter! You gotta love Pearl.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Flygurleygrl!
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 03:57 am
I really love this story. The chemistry between Joss and Eshan is smokin'!
Author's Response:
Thanks Musicluva!!! So happy you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 01:48 am
I'm in LOVE wit dis story!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, AD!!!
Reviewer: AD Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2013 01:30 am
J.J now you know I'm about to start!!! Lol.
All I have to say is this....I LOVE ESHAN!!!!! That is all!! Lol.
Author's Response:
Lol. Treale, whatever comments you have are always welcomed. I happen to think Eshan is pretty damn adorable myself. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2013 08:59 pm