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Title: Greenlight

Please update?

Reviewer: bolavettel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 09:40 pm

Title: Characters

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ IN A LONG WHILE. 

Reviewer: miss jlb Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 06:31 am

Title: Greenlight

Great story! Clearly Ethan & Aurora aren't over each other - there are so many things have that been left unsaid which is real sad! Mama Carmichael is a witch - im glad that Ian isnt a complete fool and will put his foot down if needed unlike Ethan!! 

 

Look forwars seeing how things will go but im super excited for the upcoming UD II chapters...! XD

 

 

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 11:12 pm

Title: Greenlight

What is so funny to me is that Ethan is getting upset over imaginary scenarios with Aurora and another man but she gets blindsided with reality that he is essentially doing those scenarios with Katherine.  You are drinking right now because you know you are wrong.  I have the feeling he kept Katherine private from Aurora because he knew if she learned he was in a RELATIONSHIP with someone else, that information would distance her further emotionally from him.  If she wasn't in a relationship now she soon would be.  Please give her a love interest so Ethan can truly see how it feels vs just using his imagination.  It sounds like she is taking the blame for their marriage falling apart and Ethan is still clueless on his part.  Dude, how much money do you need?  He needs some counseling for his childhood and overcompensation in adulthood.  Hell hire a Vice President to help out with the workload.  Work is his escape, it had become a clutch.  Talking down about her career choice is a no no.  Regardless if you agree, you respect her choice.  I have a feeling these little digs have happened before during the marriage and was probably helped along by the MIL.  

They should set their mother up with a guy so she can be out of their business but knowing dragon lady, he will run with scorch marks on his butt.   The difference I see between Ethan and Ian is that Ian understands and accepts his wife as his first responsibility (a little late, but better late than never) and when push comes to shove it will be his wife.  For Ethan it will be his mother.  That is a heavy toll on a wife who is loving you physically, emotionally to know you will always be second best and despite your efforts, you have allowed your mother to degrade me on my wifely duties.  Wonder what Alma is going to say to him next.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 03:26 pm

Title: Greenlight

Thanks for updating :D, great chapter.

Reviewer: bolavettel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 06:50 am

Title: Greenlight

Thank goodness Ian has come to his senses.  Now Ethan needs to apologize to A.  and he is finally seeing some light--another man spending more time with your kid than you, is no joke.  

I hope Aurora meets someone, a man who makes her laugh and feel like a woman---she don't have to have sex with him...just be attracted to him.  Then maybe he and she can run into Ethan and Katherine while out.  K. may be beautiful, but A. wasn't a supermodel for nothing.   I wish Katherine would see Ethan reaction, bc he will not be able to hide his feelings.  

Kinda feel sorry for this couple---want them back together in a HEA, but unless they learn to communicate and figure out the problem that lead to the divorce, they will just be wasting their time.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 06:44 am

Title: Greenlight

Aurora handled her conversation with Ethan much better than I thought she would.  I need another update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 06:43 am

Title: Characters

Oh, and someone needs to call the MIL on her petty jealousy.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 09:24 am

Title: She Can't Love You

No. She needs to be calm, go over, introduce herself to the girlfriend and stun Ethan. He's such a jerk.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 09:23 am

Title: Characters

I kind of want her to date someone because she's just all alone while Ethan is having the time of his life. I also hope to find out why she divorced Ethan. I kind of want them to work it out, but also I want to see how Ethan responds to his ex wife getting a new man. 

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 08:47 am

Title: Characters

I dislike her mother in law so much. Can someone just hit her or something. Great update and can't wait to see what Auroa does next. 

Reviewer: liltay550 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 10:37 pm

Title: She Can't Love You

I didn't expect her feelings for Ethan that soon.  Ethan still as feelings for Aurora as he was flummoxed by the thought of her dating someone.  I don't Katherine and I dislike her even more since their bitch of mother really likes her.  I am looking forward to another update so loving this story!!



Author's Response:

LMAO you're not going to like them in the coming chapters.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 09:56 pm

Title: She Can't Love You

Wow! I didn't know Aurora didn't know about Katherine. Alma told Ethan right but it was still too late, he's gonna get caught red handed. I'm can't wait to see how Aurora & Ethan will respond to one another next chapter.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 09:52 pm

Title: She Can't Love You

I can't wait for the next chapter. I can already see Aurora confronting Ethan, and I'm happy she is accepting the fact that she still love Ethan...

Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 09:48 pm

Title: She Can't Love You

It's about time A. decides to accept the loss and pain of not having him in her life and decide to move on.  E is still working so much that he forgets his daughter and has not learned anything that can help him to make his marriage a success in a start over.  

Since E. is enjoying sex with his new girl and looks content, A should let him know she is happy for him and has decided it is time for her to move on, also; after she get in that ass about bringing a strange woman around her child and having sex with her while P is in the house.  

I hope she tells E that when she finally decide to sex up her new man, they will go to his place or a nice hotel instead, until she feels comfortable enough to bring him around P.

Caroline needs to suggest Katherine make her a grandmother again--watch how fast C smile slips when K shoots that idea down.  Poor Margaret, she won't confront Ian about mom bc she thinks Ian will choose his mom, and she may be right.  

Story is so good and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 08:44 pm

Title: Scared of Lonely

Why did Aurora and Ethan get divorced? I love Dimitri, enough said!!   Those two are still I  love you only get that angry with when love is involved.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 02:14 am

Title: Scared of Lonely

I really like this story. I can't wait to see what happens leading up to their present predicament.  One bit of advice though is that you have quite a few grammatical typos. They stifle the progression of the story and your nice turn of phrase. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I will surely go through the chapters an check. I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 07:26 pm

Title: Scared of Lonely

Nice update.  I had forgotten about this story and had to start over--it's still good.

E. helped in the demise of his marriage by not realizing being a workaholic made it easy to cut him loose.  He literally brought his work home and made A. feel invisible.  It was bad enough A. had to put up with his mom...  

It's time for A. to become interested in someone else and shake things up--I don't care if she did sleep with E.  He's moved on and can tell another woman he loves her--that's just wrong.  Yeah, time for her to move on.  

If this happens, please don't let her bring the new man around the daughter early, but let E. realize another man may soon be in his princess life and taking her to the zoo.  

It would be a shocker if all the daughter-in- laws grab their kids and leave their husbands and then maybe the sons will strengthen their backbones and stand up to dear mom.  

E is not dumb, but the light is starting to flicker on why mom loves his new girl so much--what woman helps her son find another woman, so quickly after a breakup? That should have told dum-dum something then--did he not know what A. had to put up with?  He was never there, even when he was and then a dragon MIL coming in to criticize your every move bc she is afraid of being replaced? Yes, time to shake things up!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!! Ethan's brother will be the first to have a backbone about his mother jumping into their business don't worry as the stroy progress.

Ethan is going to experience first hand how Aurora felt during their marriage so his going to learn real soon. Aurora will have a love interest, Ethan can't easily have all her attention his going to have to prove himself to her. 

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2014 05:32 pm

Title: Resentment

Please update please please

Reviewer: vulgarviper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2013 09:15 pm

Title: Resentment

Interesting story so far!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2013 05:30 am

Title: Resentment

I saw this and I was like Tom Hiddleston..."yes". It's a good story and can't wait for an update. 

Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 05:16 pm

Title: Resentment

Honestly, I was so hesitant to read this because the main character is based off of beyonce, when there are many other beautiful black females to fill the slot. Let me tell you, that I love what youve written, I can feel it, its realiatic and very intriguing. I cant wait for the next chapter. Bonus points-father/daughter scene.



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Reviewer: VenomQueen2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 12:57 pm

Title: Resentment

I missed this story so much!!!!! I freaking love Ethan!! I don't know why, but I do!! Can't wait for the next update!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 11:52 pm

Title: Resentment

This is good, please continue.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 07:31 pm

Title: Characters

I am definitely hooked on this story, can't wait for your next update and that is too many days out of the week to see yo mamma when you are married with children.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2013 05:50 pm



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