Thank you for the ride. This was a great well written story. Thank you!
Thank you for staying on the ride and not demanding to get off no matter how long it took for this to finish. I should be thanking you! Thank you from the bottom of my heart <3Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 11:44 pm
This epilogue was amazingly beautiful!!! You did your thang with it! The joys of being content with life... An being in love with your wife and kids is priceless!!! Hey, honey I hope all is well. I sent you an email I hope you got it. Thanks honey for this wonder ending to a great story. Stay blessed honey and you and your family is forever in my prayers.
You think so? Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate it. It has been a long time coming. Thank you so much for sticking to this story and enjoying it so much. It means a whole lot to me. :)) You're so amazing.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 02:42 pm
You may write an epilogue? It is seems only fitting that one is due. Sorry, you are one of the rare authors on this website that have a really great story from the first sentence to the last. Plz don't end it with chapter 24. Many authors do, but I've come to realize some good/great story have an epilogue (HEA); whereas other good/great stories don't need one at the end, because the HEA was clearly obtained. The villain confessed and is going to trial, a bad person became good, and Tristian and Briella's relationship SEEMS to recovering from their loss... and whom can resist an epilogue that ties the HEA up into a nice colorful bow?Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 03:11 am
Brielle survived and Michael is in jail, awesome.
Thank you!!Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2016 03:22 pm
Thank you for the latest update, this was good, sorry for this complaint... BUT, the dialogue from both nurses was unrealistic and forced.
I say unreal, because what nurse just offers up giving up on a patient when they weren't even asked about their condition. And forced, because it seemed like you wanted some type of dialogue showing an uncaring nurse.
The second nurse Heather, um that was unreal and forced too. Unreal, because she seemed unprofessional when she put down the 1st nurse and forced when Tristan thought of her age and when he said she was cool in response to his mom. Tristan is suppose to be distraught (and you did an excellent job showing that) to really have noticed, those two little things about Heather kind of threw off the tone, but just a bit.
Good story though.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 03:09 pm
Thanks for the update!!! This is a Wonderful story. I really hope Brie wakes up!!! It's a shame that Michael was so bitter about losing a girl he didn't deserve he set a fire. That boy needs serious help. I can't wait to read the next chapter!Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 02:24 pm
Missed this story. Please let Briella wake up, Tristan needs and loves her so much. I want them to have an HEA.
I knew that Douche Michael started that fire, I hope they put him Under the Jail...and I kinda figured that Chole's friendship was shady.
I like Heather, and hope she becomes friends with Tristan and Briella.
Can't wait for more.Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 05:25 am
so glad you are back :DReviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 02:31 am