Wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: December 18 2013 06:12 pm
You set us up, to drop us here? You a crooooooel lady!
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 02:18 pm
Ron got drunk and showed up at Marissa's place I am surprised that he knew where she lived. Did is ex-wife get everything? Will Marissa allow Ron to sleep it off on her couch? Will she give him sympathy nookie? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 01:55 pm
Uh-oh....
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 12:43 pm
Uh-Oh!!! LOL, please post the next chapter soon :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 11:47 am
Mark was an asswipe! Makes wonder about Christie, makes me think that she maybe pretentious as well..
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 11:26 pm
Very good update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 10:17 pm
hate to say this, but M is boring as hell...she know people are shocked with her living in the Bronx so why not give a snappy comeback instead of 'excuse me?!" all the time.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
[Report This]Date: December 16 2013 08:06 pm
Great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 05:37 am
Good update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 01:08 pm
Ron is a super jerk! I would have slapped him and then walked out! While I was out I would be searching for a new job!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:53 pm
Ron is a asshole to the inth degree but his ex-wife is super bitch. I know that this blind double date will be hilarious. Will Ron show up at the restaurant with his own date and belittle Marissa?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:50 pm
He is an unhappy jerk and is taking it out on his assistant, he will learn behind every great boss, there is an even better assistant! I will keep reading because I can not wait to see when he comes to her begging for her help!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:47 pm
The way you are depicting Ron is too exagerated , he needs to mellow down a bit . This is the making of a good story the charecters and dialogue needs to be believable . Ron comes across as too vicious , you can write him as hostile find away of this coming accros , i know it a story but try and make them have more pesronality , emation
please read this book
No Compromise by Rochelle Allers :
PS please continue wrtting , I would love to continue reading your work
Author's Response:
Okay, I will keep that in mind...I will try to write Ron with more emation...thanks!
Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:24 pm
keep it coming very good!
Reviewer: pattyb Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 04:20 am
Love the start.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 06:52 pm
Thank you for bringing this story back!
Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 02:56 pm
What an asshole! But the Oliver guy sounds cool. Good start.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 01:49 pm
Betty White is in cast, I love it!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 01:42 pm
Great start! More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 12:25 pm
great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 12:05 pm