Hello Joelle Jax,
I'm finally able to write a review for your story. Your story has touch me so deeply that I could not sleep at night. The relationship between Anthony and Natalia was breath taking and I felt like a peeping tom, while I read the ups and downs of this couple. It have been over two months since I had read this story and I'm ashamed because I did not leave a review for every chapter. You are amazing writer,their are few authors that are able to write such outstanding literature. Your writing is a thing of beauty. Thank you Bain
Thank you so much for this AMAZING review, Bain! Your kind words mean the world to me, especially at this complicated time in my writing life. And please don't feel bad about not reviewing every chapter. I truly appreciate you taking the time to share this one. Again, thank you, and be blessed.
JoelleReviewer: blueangel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 01:15 am
I loved this story and the realistic imperfect characters. Your writing is just wonderful.
Some of my fave sections are with Rich and I absolutely cannot wait for his story.
Thanks for the wonderful reivew, Cocoverdad! So glad to hear you enjoyed the story.
Rich is one of those characters I never expected to love. I called myself taking a break from agnst before writing his story (which will be full of it), but with LGN I've come to realize I'm irrefutably drawn to the stuff. So I'll be headed back Rich's way soon. Thanks again!Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 03:17 am
I adore Rich for so many reasons and on so many levels. Oh, in my head CT Tamburello is Rich, there is no bigger lovable douchebag alive.
Lol. CT's a good choice. I always encourage readers to see the character as whomever they choose. In my head, Rich looks like Taylor "Too Delicious for Words" Kinney.Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 04:37 am
I'm ugly sobbing just want you to know. Bravo!! This was an emotional, superbly spun story that made me laugh, want to hurt someone (namely Barbara, Mercede, and Richard), and anticipate each new chapter unsure of how things would be resolved, but it was a wonderful journey. Ant and Natalia are proud parents, Rich Jr is on the road to getting his life back together and doting on his niece and nephew, and all toxic individuals have been flung out of their lives. The reunion with Ant and his uncle and eventually his father was simply beautiful. And that vicious, lying Mercede going so far as to forge a death certificate to keep a man away from his child, how cold-blooded and selifsh can you be? Ugh, but enough ranting, thank you SO much for sharing this story with us. Looking forward to what you have cooking in that magnificent brain of yours next!!
Lol @ the ugly sob. Aww... Thanks for this and all your wonderful, insightful reviews! I'm so happy to have had you along on this journey. Rich's story is next. Hope to see you there. Thanks Lapis Love!!!Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 10:52 pm
Great story! Great characters! Great Author! Best story ever! I know it has been asked before but I am asking again. When are you publishing? I would buy your books in a heartbeat... Good going JJax!
I don't have any plans to publish in the foreseeable future, but do plan to keep writing. Thanks for the wonderful review, Introspection!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 06:17 pm
This was my fav chap!!! Really touching, I had no choice but to celebrate with some (oh well, a river..) tears ! It could have been wonderful to read about David and his grandchildren's encounter. But this chap was a masterpiece on its own. Wonderful job girl !!!! (And Rich and his nephew/niece, just hilarious!!).
What a wonderful compliment! Thanks Peanut! I'll be sure to include some Grandpa David and grandbaby time in Rich's story just for you.Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 07:06 pm
Tear Jerker!!! You hear me? Tear jerker!!! A great ending for a phenomenal story! I can't wait for Rich's story and a revisit of Natalia and Anthony! Loved it. Loved it. Loved it!
Thanks Brown Mocha!!! So happy you enjoyed it! More Rich, Nat, and Ant is in the works : )Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 04:11 pm
Oh, my...the epilogue brought me to tears...what a fitting end to a marvelous tale. So glad Ant got to be reunited with his real father who had been made to give up all hope of his existence by his spiteful, evil "mother". Some people really do not deserve to be parents, and Mercede definitely falls into that category. Glad she is no longer allowed to be a part of Anthony's life or the lives of his immediate family.
Rich really deserves someone special to love and care for him; he has shown himself to be loyal, dependable and the real deal time and time again. Can't wait to read his story; I know you will fill us in on little tidbits from Ant and Natalia's lives during the telling of Rich's tale.
It would be awesome to have this story on my kindle, as it is far superior to any of the stories I currently have, but I do understand if you decide not to go the publishing route. I must say that I would buy your book in a instant if you did decide to publish; it's really that good.
Thank you for another thoroughly absorbing tale and I look forward to reading whatever your amazing mind conjures up next!
Thanks for the amazing review, Amiefuzzy! Publishing isn't a "definite never," just a "not in the near future." But thanks so much for the support. It is very much appreciated : )
I agree with you on both Mercede and Rich. She's a horror and he really is a gem. He will get his chance at the love and happiness he deserves. Questions is, is he ready for it?
Unc is all about his brother, Sis, and those babies, so you will definitely get a peek into their lives in his story.
Thanks again, Amiefuzzy!Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 03:22 pm
superb. magnificent. amazing - i have run out of words. this chapter had everything. loved how you wrote that David's love survived life and death - this reunion was everything and it sucks that it's the end, lool! i want more. yup. i'm greedy like that =P
thank you again and again, times 1000 - this has been an excellent read!!
You are very welcome, Yuukiyanagi! Thank you for the wonderful reivew! So happy to have had you along for the ride.Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 07:22 am
Simply brilliant. I'm little sad that it's the end. Barbara and Mercedes...I can't!!!
I know; they're still awful. Thanks lleendaah!Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 05:48 am
OMG!!! i usually don't review..But damn! this was such a good story! i'm so sad that it's ending!!! But it was a wonderful ending and i legit cried!! You should do like a 5 years later or something just like one chapter in their lives 5 years after everything! and I want to see who the girl that Rich like is!.
A five year flash forward isn't off the table, but you'll definitely get a glimpse of Nat and Ant pre- and post-babies and have a chance to get to know Rich's lady love in his story. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, chocojojo16! It is much appreciated : )Reviewer: chocojojo16 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 03:28 am
Brilliant!! I loved this story from beginning to end! As I was reading the Epi and realized that his father was in the airport, i sat straight up in the bed and the tears could not be stopped--GREAT WRITING!!! Take a bow--and thank you for sharing this beautiful story.
Thanks Mya1967! So happy you enjoyed it.
Thanks Mya1967! So happy you enjoyed it.Reviewer: mya1967 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 02:40 am
I'm so happy Anthony got to meet his father. Now for his mother,I dislike this women more and more. Don't she know whats done in the night always comes to light, saying that Anthony drowned, that is someone with a dark heart. I'm glad she's not allowed around the twins. J.J. Thank you for your vision, your talent and your time.
You are so very welcome, Jacqua43. Thanks for reviewing!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 11:28 pm
You have amazing writing skills and when you get published I will be there to purchase, thankyou for this awesomes story, I laughed and cried along with Natalia and Anthony, now I see you have another story up, I'm heading over there now :))
Thanks Dounome!!! So glad you enjoyed my little tale!Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 09:17 pm
This chapter was amazing and beautiful. This whole story was an emotional rollercoaster. I wouldn't have had it any other way. Thank You for sharing this story with us.
YW : ) Thank you!
YW : ) Thank you!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:28 pm
You are a very talented author; it felt like I, personnally, knew the characters, that they were friends of mine telling their story to their new best friend, me! Thank you! Please continue with Rich's story!
Consequence deserves to be published, so that others can read their story!
What a wonderful review! Thanks Katt! I don't have any plans to publish at the moment, but I will definitely be working on Rich's story. Hope to have you along for the ride.Reviewer: Katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:24 pm