Reviews For Consequence
Title: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

Well. The shit hit and demolished the fan!!! Great update!!



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Thanks Khamalani!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

First off I would like to say, thank God the chamber is back, and secondly........yasssssss b***h you did that....(sorry for saying the b word)......but honty im am in love.....thanks for the update and please dont take long for the next one........xoxox:-D



Author's Response:

Lol.  So glad you liked this little chappie.  The next one is in the works.  Thanks Pillow82!



Author's Response:

Lol.  So glad you liked this little chappie.  The next one is in the works.  Thanks Pillow82!

Reviewer: pillow82 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

This story is EVERYTHING!  I love the way you're weaving this tale.  Any time I find myself reacting to a situation within a story like it's happening to me personally...that's good stuff right there.

I don't know who I dislike more, Merecedes or Barb.  No wait...I'm lying.  I DESPISE Barb, but I'd like to deliver a shot straight to ol' Merc's chops.  Manipulative ol' biddy.

Great Story!

 



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Lol!  Thanks Jaye Sims! 

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

This chapter beginning was kind of confusing.

Poor Ant.  all this time suffering under people who wasn't worth the gum stuck on the bottom of his shoe.

I really hope Nat never goes near those hateful and dsyfunctional people ever again.  She needs to go to a doctor ASAP!

Ant. needs to man up in the next chapter and read both Mom and 'Pop'.  Glad his mom business got put out there for all to see.  



Author's Response:

Ant just found out his father isn't his father in front of a mob of unsupportive family members the same day he buried the one man who treated him like a father should.  "Manning up" and reading people isn't really a priority for him.  At this point, he's just trying to come to grips with the three gut-punches life just dealt him in rapid succession.  Thanks Penelope.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

Man that was so good,I hope ant is alright. He should have really put the beat down on Richard. I hope nat and the baby is okay. Isn't it just like a women who have skeletons in her closet, trying to out a nother woman. She need to sweep around her on door before she sweep arond someone elses. GOOD JOB!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Mercede thought her secret was safe.  Leave it to Rich to blow up her spot.  Unfortunately, Anthony (and possibly his relaitonship with Nat) will suffer.  The fall-out from this sh*t storm is coming next chapter.  Thanks Jacqua43!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Please please update soon.  I'm missing this story.

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Alright Ms. JJ!  We back online, and it's on like pop'con!  I need my fix, so where's that update?! 😍



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Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 11:14 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

There's no way the piece of craps Richard can get away with this, he needs to have his ass handed to him. Where's Anthony?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2015 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Oooh wait till baby boy finds out and Richard is done for!!!

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

wow...after have read this, it seems i held out hope that the man natalia once loved would appear but after this...richard is simply scum. lower even. i applaud natalia for not sinking to his level. she could've easily revealed the fact that ant isn't his just to hurt but she didnt.

i liked how you portrayed sabrina and didnt turn her into a cliche - thank you for that :)

i didn't like the way the talerico just stood by except for ginger and aunt when richard attacked natalia - that was disturbing. uck! no wonder ant is ashamed for them *shake my head*

i'm glad that natalia left - it's time for her to focus on herself, ant and the twins - Channing & Nico. like the names? sound good? if not i got more, hahahaha!

thanks for the double update, JJ! you're my rockstar!!

 

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 09:14 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

I'm anonymous, anonymous at 1:12.  I have a problem leaving a review sometimes because it so long

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2015 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Anthony and Rich are serious about Nat.   Mercedes was trying her best to put distance between Anthony and Natalia.  I thought Anthony went for it.  I was happy when he played his mother . Sat her upfront and let everybody lock her in her seatt and went to the back to be with his woman. That’s how you do it and not be the one to case a scene.  Hooray for Anthony.  I w as surprised that Sabrina was as civil as she could be  given the situation Mercedes put her in.   Natalia was decent about the situation too.   I like  that about those two.  Let Sabrina have her closure because you know your relationship is solid.   That speaks volumes for the  love they have.    Now this  family gathering.  It’s amazing how men will accept you because they usually don’t care. , but women  bless our hearts, we find fault even if we have to turn over every rock and stone  to have a reason to snub someone.  I’m glad that Rich was there to help Anthony ward off those hens.   It turns out it was only about three men at the whole gathering. Anthony , Rich and the guy who tried to pull Richard off of Natalia.  You know I want to know how BIG IS THAT DAMN HOUSE that Anthony and Rich did not hear the commotion.  OMG when Anthony sees the blood on her clothes and think Richard has cause harm to a possible embryo of his ...please don’t let the court give him the death penalty.  If he  damn near kill his brother over whatever the were fighting about in a previous chapter, then  Richard better get prayed up and quick.  He put his hands on Natalia.. that's a no no. Now that I think about it , Anthony and Richard have a lot of animosity. Richard may want a piece of Anthony real bad too.  He still needs to be prayed up because Anthony is younger than him and owes him a ass whipping.  I wonder how many of the guys are going to stand around and not help Richard.  I thought of something.  Anthony can’t fight Richard while  Natalia is there. that might make her lose the child if she is even pregnant.  I can’t wait for the next chapter to see what happens.  I can say if took a vote right now Kick Richard's would  score 100 %.  He's a jerk.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 01:12 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Man he's an arsehole

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 10:43 am

Title: Chapter 34 - Burying the Dead

Suffering the loss of someone so close to you is horrible and small comfort comes when you have someone who is yours to hold you and soothe you, i wish i had that someone.

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 10:19 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

That Rich is a nasty one & Natalia let him get to her.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 07:38 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Oh. My. Gosh. Natalia handled Richard with too much class and restraint. He was asking, no begging, for her to set it off. She could have really chopped him up and spit him out.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Where did Anthony and Rich go? I really hate that she was alone in that confrontation with Richard.  Love how the story is unfolding...

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

I can't even... though I know he was going to pull punk b--- move. I just need for Nat and Ant's baby to be fine. There are no words for what should happen to Richard. I see why him and Mercede were involved birds of a feather!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

I can't even... though I know he was going to pull punk b--- move. I just need for Nat and Ant's baby to be fine. There are no words for what should happen to Richard. I see why him and Mercede were involved birds of a feather!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

I gpt no words for Richard. All I can say is I wish Natalia had taken her 4 inch heels and enbedded them so far into Richards balls that when he decided to think he was a man again he would feel nothing but patten leather and a twitch. I can't believe Rich or Anthony didn't hear that but if they did. I hope that Rich tells Richard about himself, and Anthony beats the shit out of a man that has no right to call him son since Pop Pop was more of a father, mentor, and friend to Anthony then Richard. And maybe just maybe Rich will tell Anthony the truth so he can wipe his hands of that man and that lying mother of his. Hopefully Natalia goes back to the hotel and waits for Anthony instead of her first instinct to run.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

 

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 34 - Burying the Dead

I have tears for my boys. That was real poetry. I am so glad this finally closes the door on Sabrina. I don't know why she was stupid enough to come, but I know now she won't come back. Oh Rich, I feel so bad for him. I am glad Talia was there to help him. They are the men that was raised by a true man, Pop Pop. When is Richard going to finally get it?

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Well, now he's done it.  I hope Anthony doesn't kill him...or even Rich, who is more than capable.  What I do hope is that the baby is ok.  I don't think Anthony and Natalia can take another loss.  And they have come so far in their relationship...they deserve to have their baby.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

what a fucker.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Whooooooooo....

 

So, I need to calm down before I can write a proper review, but I will say 2 things...

 

1. PLEASE let Natalia's babies (yes babies) be OK!  I cannot bear (even though these are story characters) for her and Anthony to lose another baby.

 

2. PLEASE let Anthony cut ALL those sorry, disrespectful, good for nothing pieces of flesh that he calls "family" out of his life, forevermore.  For them to just stand by and watch Richard assault Natalia and do NOTHING?  Sorry ass pieces of shit, ALL of them,

 

3. Yep, I know I said only 2, but this is MOST important.

 

Can Richard die a slow, painful death.  I mean poisoned with Arsenic, stabbed twice, ran over and back over like road kill and left to meet the devil in hell type of death.  He is absolutely the worst type of thing, because he doesn't even deserve to be called a human.  Just despicable ass trash.

 

Otherwise, great chapters!!  Oh and please say Anthony is going to whoop the dog shit out of his "father".  Pretty please with a cherry on top.  *smile*

Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Damn!!! I knew Richard was going to do something like that...ass!  Poor Nat...she thought better of Richard still even after all the crap he did to hurt her. Now she'll never want to go back there again. And I bet Richard will still try to get her back, begging her forgiveness. He thinks Anthony will dump her because his family really gates her now.  Ok, those two chapters were so good!! So good!  Now I need more...I hanging on here wondering where Nat will go and how Anthony will react.  Crap I need a drink.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 12:38 am



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