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Title: Chapter 34 - Burying the Dead

Seriously? Seriously? Hoes never learn.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

"He is a cunt of a man"!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 12:15 am

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

This story is getting better and better.  Excellent writing. Right amount of drama at the right time.  Feel sorry for Richard because I think he really loves Natalia and will regret what he did.  Too bad Natalia went to his mother's house but I understand why she did.  Anthony's genuine love and devotion is wonderful.  He is a true man unlike his father who let shame, family prejudice, and his fear to completely love his woman to end his marriage only to finally realize he was too late to get her back.  Hope the baby is OK.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I wonder who will confront Richard first, a berserker Anthony or the 'I am crazy enough to do anything to protect by brother and his woman' Rich.  

PS. If you do a story about Rich soon or a year from now, I would be greatful.  He is one interesting character.  I am always waiting to see what he does next.   Excellent work

Reviewer: triniflwr Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

I had one more thing to say. Those bastards heard Richard assualting her and they did nothing to help her Are you kidding me? Those people are evil and I hope Anthony gives them all what is coming to them. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Richard, Richard, Richard...if you were my son I would whup that azz every day, just because,  

There is no way Ant or RIch will let this go; they should both feel guilty, too, bc they knew nutty Richard was waiting in the wings.  

Nat did the right thing by getting out of there and she should never let her child go near that nest of vipers.  

Awesome update!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

That Richard is one mean bastard.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

From the chapter's title I knew what was coming but what was even more disturbing was that soo many of the family members just stood by and watched Richard physically assault Nat.  I cant wait for Anthony's reaction and I have no doubt that Rich will have no problem revealing Richard's secrets.  Either way Nat will always be persona non grata with the Talericos.  Can wait for an update!

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

OMG!!!! Those last two chapters made me catch a damn case. Are you serious Richard? If he hurts dem babies....oh lord. I can already see it now. Anthony and Rich are going to run out and see the commotion and Anthony is going to give Richard the ass whopping he has been begging for and Natalia won't be able to stop him. I bet Rich will help him lay into that ass. And that's when Richard will drop the bomb out of pure spite. He's going to tell Anthony he's not his son and then hopefully people will turn on Mercede as well.

Mercede....whooo child there's a special place in hell for that woman. That whole Philadelphia crew except Theresa are a bunch of creeps and Anthony needs to cut every single one of them out of his life even his mother is she don't get her crap together. Screw them. These chapters made my blood pressure escalate and I don't know how in the world Natalia didn't lay into every single one of those bitches. 

You see how passionate I am about this story? LOL,girl you did the damn thing. Great updates!!!! 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Let's be realistic, karma's a bitch and Natalia should have known that she would be hurt by him the same way she hurt him when she went for his son sometime ago; you're mixing grief with rejection that is never a good mix! She should have known better. Don't get me wrong, Richard's a dick, but a dick in pain will inflict pain of his own because he can't deal with the hurt other than to inflict it to others as if someone else's pain will, miraculously, lessen his. 

 

Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

D@mn!  Richard is such a creep!  Richard made it seem like he and Natalia were just screwing. I hope Natalia clears the air to let them know it was more than that. So much drama!  I love it!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:42 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

My heart is broken for Natalia, I don't know what to write.  Richard is incredibly cruel, omg!!  Poor Nat!

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:36 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Like for real, they must have expected something like this to happen. Like come on, they knew that there would be a great chance that Richard would be there, at his mothers house. Why they insist on bringing Natalia to Nanna I don't understand and why Natalia would agree to go either. Most of the family had clearly show that they don't want or like you to be part of them. Why would you want to go at a place you are clearly not wanted. I get that she wants to be there for Anthony and all. But she already did enough and showed her support. She could have skipped this one and stay to wait for them at the hotel.  And where was Anthony and Rich when all this spectacle was going down. Both Rich and Anthony had failed her. If they cared for her and her well being a little bit more, they wouldn't have taken her to Nanna's house in the first place. Everyone already knows that she is Anthony's woman anyway. Both Rich and Anthony know that she is not comfortable around their family. And on top off that Richard would also be there. So why bring her. They are being very selfish. This could have been prevented.

Reviewer: Miss Stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:31 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

That man oh i mean little boy got some nerves. It take a HOE to know a HOE, THOSE ARE FIGHTING WORDS. IT'S ON NOW!!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:24 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Omg! I'm in shock where was Anthony or Rich his family is crazy they just stood there and watched and poor Anthony will never be seen the same by his family. Richard needs to get over his little hurt ego. Please update soon

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter 34 - Burying the Dead

These Talerico's are are crazy, Anthony and Rich are the only ones that I like!! The rest of them at least the women are evil as hell.  Mercedes is nothing but a manipulative bitch!! Can you tell that I don't like her?  Just amazing story telling Joelle!! Awesome sauce!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

I can't even say anything 

I'm so shocked p issued

Man that Richard is a real b***h

I hope the babies are okay

Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Richard is an asshole!! I want Anthony to beat him like he stole his last dollar, since he isn't his father it wouldn't be disrespectful.  Please don't let her loose their baby.  So much ignorace and drama!! Anthony hurry up and go get your women!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Dang, she should have left as soon as she knew he was there because she knows he's nothing but vindictive.  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 08:34 pm

Title: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

I thoroughly enjoyed this.  I hope that we get more chapters or an epilogue.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

That was BA-RIIILLIANT!  LMAO at Rich.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 12:26 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

It’s so nice to see how caring Rich is towards his little brother.  Anthony is very fortunate to have someone in his life like Rich.  Although he tries to hide how big his heart is by being obnoxious You can see he is truly special.  I’m amazed at how loving Anthony is considering how his father treated him.  Natalia knows  she is lucky to have someone like him who truly loves her.  You could tell   he needed her with him but he didn’t want to risk his family upsetting her and causing harm to his possible child growing inside her.   You have some very adorable characters.  You have some real butt holes too. I can see Mercedes is going to be one of them. I wonder who will be the one to tell her what time it is.  It looks like Rich is  more than willing.

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

It’s so nice to see how caring Rich is towards his little brother.  Anthony is very fortunate to have someone in his life like Rich.  Although he tries to hide how big his heart is by being obnoxious You can see he is truly special.  I’m amazed at how loving Anthony is considering how his father treated him.  Natalia knows  she is lucky to have someone like him who truly loves her.  You could tell   he needed her with him but he didn’t want to risk his family upsetting her and causing harm to his possible child growing inside her.   You have some very adorable characters.  You have some real butt holes too. I can see Mercedes is going to be one of them. I wonder who will be the one to tell her what time it is.  It looks like Rich is  more than willing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

you know what? natalia has really grown. i dont think she would've gone to philly without ant saying it before and would've probably stayed at home even though in her heart she knows she should be there.

before this chapter i didnt want natalia going to philly because of the timing but maybe it was a blessing in disguise, lol! i mean Ant's mother had to shut up and behave so yea, maybe this is/was the perfect time for natalia to meet the family - this time around.

now the funeral...yeah. that's a whole another ballgame.

lastly, loved that rich called natalia sis - that was awesome to read XD

thanks for the update, JJ!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 10:23 am

Title: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

I'm glad Natalia was there for Anthony in his time of need, (again, thanks to Rich).  Also glad she had a chance to meet the family, and that Ant has learned from his and his fathers  past mistakes.   I sure hope Richard doesn't use the fact that Natalia had previous knowledge about his paternity as a way of trying to drive a wedge between them. Please update soon!   I am so loving this story ... can't get enough!!

 

 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 01:11 am

Title: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

Rich just keeps surprising me.  He really is a good brother.  I'm glad Anthony let Talia meet the family, but we knew his mom's was gonna be a bitch.  Now she'll up to no good trying to destroy their relationship.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2015 11:43 pm



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