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Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

I love,love,love Rich he is my new BFF.



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Lol.  Thanks Lisa!

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Oh no, Natalia doesn't need anymore stress, she has to take care of the those babies. (Yep, I said babies. LOL) I think Anthony has the right to know and if finds out Natalia knew and didn't tell him he's going to be so hurt. I never thought I'd say this but I kind of felt a little sympathy for Richard but not a lot, he shouldn't have left a good wife for that skank Mercede (yeah I said it) She's got a lot of nerve to try to perpetuate this fraud all these years. And if the people in Philly find out what she did, she'll probably be shunned and she knows it. I hope Anthony lets her have it. Richard is still an ass though. He's only holding on to the secret to get back at Natalia. Gosh this story is playing with my emotions but I love it so much. Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

Lol @ you and those babies.  Richard is definitely a villain, but, as with most villains, at one time he was also a victim.  He deserves a little sympathy, but not a pardon or a pass.  And Mercede is just as guilty as he is, if not more so. 

Sorry for puttin' you through, Happy2bNappy (sort of ; ).  The torture won't last forever.  The story is drawing to a close.  Glad to hear you've enjoyed it thus far.  Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

 i get it, really i do but this could easy end badly. the journals are in his office and someone could slip up - looord, the suspense is killing me!

brilliant update - thank you!



Author's Response:

The build up is a bit much, but the tension and the story will soon come to an end.  Thanks Yuukiyanagi!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 02:34 pm

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

I think she should Tell Ant no Matter what Sr. Or Jr. Says not fair he's the only one out the loop when it's about him. No more secrets & lies. Intentional or not. He deserves to know now not a month because during that time one of the others may slip 'Sr. Tell him &say Nat knew for another way to hurt him.

Author's Response:

That's a definite possibility.  But Nat believes she's doing what's best for Anthony.  The chances of it working out for her are slim to none.  But you never know. 

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 12:49 pm

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Man, talk about being caught between a rock and a hard place!  I sure hope Natalia doesn't stress herself out about this and risk her health and the pregnancy. This new development came out of left field for me, but she'd some light on why Ant's father (or rather the man he though was his father) has been such a complete ass. Great update!



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Poor Nat.  She's in for one.  Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

I was all for her telling Ant. But with this chapter, I'm conflicted.  I think Rich may be right. And while he and Ant are not blood, as far as he's concerned, they are. I think Ant will be more upset with the news that Rich, Nat and Thomas knew and didn't tell him. What a quandary.



Author's Response:

Yes it is.  Thanks BellaChica!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

This truly was another intense chapter. Natalia taking on the burden of Richards misdeeds about not being honest with Anthony. She finds out the truth wants to give Richard the chance to right his wrong for treating Anthony like a second rate citizen and yet again Richard shows that it's all about him. Maybe he doesn't want to loose Anthony even though he treated him like crap all his life, maybe he doesn't want Anthony to look at his mother any differently, maybe he doesn't want everyone to know that he made a big mistake but whatever the reason I feel like Richard doesn't know how to man up and be someone that can be honest and open about his misgivings. And he leaves Natalia holding this secret that she knows she can not, will not keep for Anthony and being the one to ruin his world. Or maybe Anthony knows the truth maybe he has realized that he doesn't look like anyone in the family and he knows something is off maybe that's why he hates Richard. But he deserves the truth.

Rich seems to know all that goes on in the family and I love that he has continued to see Anthony as his brother. But how can he ask Natalia to keep that secret? That stress alone isn't good for her. He better kick Richard ass and make him tell Anthony the truth because he not Natalia should have to be responsible for that bombshell of a secret.

So I was confused so is the meddling woman Mercedes' that likes Sabrina? 

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, Mercede is Anthony's mother and Sabrina's number one fan.  She cheated and got pregnant, and Richard kept it a secret because he didn't want to look like the fool he was for leaving his first wife for her.  Anthony knows his father hates him, but has no idea why.  This will come as a shock to him, no matter who tells him.  Hope that cleared things up.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, JovanBleu!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

I just live Richie Jr. Can't wait to see what happens next!



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Thanks Michmom!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 02:56 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

The more I read about Rich the more I believe he really is a decent guy. Although he has kept a huge secret from Anthony I can see that all he wants to do is protect his little brother so he has the happiness he deserves.

I hope Natalia finds a way to channel all the stress she is about to face!

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Rich is a big ball of dysfunction, but like you said, he really is a decent guy who loves his brother.  Poor Nat, she's got a rough road ahead.  Thanks for reading and commenting, Annienathanson!

Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Every time I think you are going to wrap this story up it takes another twist and gets beter and beter.  Thank you, for being better and for giving me a reason to visit The Chamber!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Dee!  You made my bad day better.  : )  The story is in its final stretch.  I hope to have it completed in the next few weeks.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Such a good book keeps getting better. You rock!



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Thanks Jachannah!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

dirt nap---Rich is funny.  

Nat shouldn't worry about Ant finding out he is not Sr's son, because Ant will not be hurt and may want to throw a party like it's New Years Eve in Times Square.  

Nat really don't give a damn about Sr anymore and her tone is what did him in.  Am I the only one thinking Sr is so high strung and aggressive that he is either going to hit someone or have a heart attack?



Author's Response:

Anthony isn't fond of Richard, but he's still deeply affected by him, no matter how much he tries to hide and deny it.  So I doubt there'll be any party throwing when he finds out the truth, something Nat seems to realize. 

Richard is very capable of exploding.  The only question is will he?  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 01:21 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

What a tangled web we weave....



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Yep.  Thanks Khamalani!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Richard is such an asshole, Ant's birth is not is fault but his ho of a momma.   Nat it's a mistake jot tell Ant about his pops not being his pops.  Awesome sauce!!



Author's Response:

Richard is an asshole, and even Nat knows that not telling Ant about the secret is orobably a mistake.  But she feels like its necessary.  We'll see how that all works out for her.  Thanks Pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2015 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

oh what a web we weave



Author's Response:

Exactly.  Thanks Astrid.

Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

You my friend are amazing.



Author's Response:

Thanks Amy Winehouse!

Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

5

 

dun dun DUUUNN...!!

 

 

5

Excuse expression but...!

5

Mama Mercedes isn't soooooo squeaky clean...! it now makes sense but still...

5

thanks for a powerful update! the way Anthony handled Richard was nicely done and sexy, lool! can't wait until next update - it's going to be epic...!

pleeeease Talia dont hide this news away from Anthony - let the truth come out! it's best for everyone, hehe

5

 

 



Author's Response:

I can't tell you how much I love this review, especially that ice-cream eatin' baby.  Priceless.  Thanks Yuukiyanagi!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 10:33 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

whoa.  i was NOT expecting that.



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Thanks LiLi!

Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Please don't let her keep this from him.



Author's Response:

I wish I could.  : /  Thanks BellaChica!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

He just can't get it. Like really. Over done with. Now she with Anthony she's happy glad she didn't come between them & just left after kissing him. Did she find what I think. Is that his snip papers, oh please be so that means he not his father that's why he never treated him like his son & was so low down to him. But his mom she needs to answer some questions once Nat shows Ant those papers. That proves his father isn't who he thinks it is.No blood relation thank god.



Author's Response:

Yep, those were snip-snip records, and Richard is not Anthony's father.  Thanks Kvgurl!

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Oh, snap!



Author's Response:

Exactly.  Thanks Caramia Darling!

Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Omg!  So not was papa Rich a rolling stone, but  so was Anthony's mom.  

Rich Sr is such an evil, hateful man and he made Ant's younger days unbearable. Now we know why he is so mean to Ant--he took his anger out on an unsuspecting child that was not his, such a coward.  I am so glad Ant stood up to him and didn't tell him about the baby she is carrying.  

Nat should give Ant this new info and any guilt he is feeling will evaporate.  Ant mom can't say anything to Nat about her relationship with her son or the ex.   



Author's Response:

I don't know if it'll be quite that easy, but the truth will certainly change some relationship dynamics.  Thanks Penelope!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Another amazing chapter. I swear Natalia cracks me up at times because she tends to forget that Anthony might not be the only one to come-a-knocking at her door.  Richard is lucky that wasnt me because he would have gotten a swift kick straight to the balls that when he opened his mouth to tell me he "loves me" the would have rolled on out. I am so glad that Natalia calmed Anthony down from doing something very stupid like fighting his father over her but made him focus on his no -existent relationship with Richard.

Richard has some F***in nerve to tell Anthony better men would have left him on the street. Funny how better men would have loved Anthony with their whole heart rather that food and a roof. Anthony walking away from that man showed he is a better man than Richard for not giving in and punch dude smack in the face.

I see Natalia pulled an Angela Bassett move from Waiting to Exhale by burning the clothes that Richard got her. But hot damn did she uncover a secret that the family has been keeping for 24 years. Anthony was adopted. Why wouldnt they tell him when he got older. Well I guess Richard has done one thing by not revealing that Anthony aint his but there is most likely a reason behind it. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Anthony is Mercede's child, just not Richard's.  Why they never told him becomes clear next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, JovanBleu!  'Preciate it!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Damn you just me so happy when you revealed that ahole dick wasn't Anthony's father, which also explained why he treated Anthony like he short.  Natalia made me proud in this chapter. I do hope that Talia a tells Anthony of her discovery and show him the file. Then I really him to confront his meddling momma and his strp-bastard!  Awesome sauce!



Author's Response:

It won't be quite that easy, but hopefully just as entertaining.  Thanks Pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

OMG!  OMG! 

I think Richard's first wife slept with his father!

I did not see this coming... It explains everything!  Oh Lord!

I'm in the hair salon acting the fool over this story! LOL

This is Better than Daytime Drama!

Excellent as usual Ms. JAX!

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks Sharlene!

Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 11:02 pm



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