Title: Chapter 1

This story has enchanted me. The wedding was beautiful. It didn't miss a thing. I was worried that this chapter would include a love scene, and I'm glad it didn't because I wouldn't have read it. This might sound dumb, but I felt like their first time should be private. So, I'm cool with the fact that you left it out. There were so many things I liked about this story. 1.) How you switched up the often played out virgin trope and made Eshan the virgin. 2.) How sweet Eshan was. What a gentleman. If only all men could be as kind as Eshan. 3.) The story's uniqueness. I don't think I've read a IR/Interfaith story featuring a black woman and a Middle Eastern/Muslim man before. And 4.) The characters were fleshed out, and it was easy to cheer Eshan and Joss on. I think it was done wonderfully. Brava! Now, I want to be courted by a handsome and kind Middle Eastern man. A girl can dream, can't she? Thanks for sharing this story with us. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful review, Azzure!  I don't think your reasoning behind not wanting to read their first time is dumb at all.  I hadn't really reflected on why I wasn't comfortable writing it, but what you said makes perfect sense.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story as is, and I thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 10

They got hitched and Pearl showed up and gave Joss some love. I hope that this that Joss will no longer be stuck on stupid and glued to dumb. Eshan is my guy love me some Eshan! Still don't trust Eshan's momma though. It seems that Eshan doesn't either. Thank you Ms. JAX for sharing your creative mind with us.



Author's Response:

No, he does not, and for good reason.  She's not done plotting.  Stay tuned and thanks for reading and reviewing, Pam!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I loved this story!  It is absolutely beautiful!! 💖💖💖💖



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 10

This was beyond beautiful!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so very much for this!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Artamiss!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 07:28 pm

Title: Chapter 10

i agree - just beautiful with the perfect end! i'm so glad that Joss and Eshan finally wed and i have a feeling that their story isnt over quite yet for us *wink,wink,hint,hint* XD LOL!

thank you! thank you! thank you, JJ! this has been a truew pleasure to read - look so so forward to your upcoming stories! YOU ROCK!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the fabu reveiw, Cassius Noir!!!  I so love writing about this couple and have every intention of continuing to tell their story, whether it's through one shots or a full-on sequel.  Stay tuned...

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Just beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thanks Drea!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1

OMG! This story has ruined me. I should be sleeping or working on updating my own story, but I can't. I'm here reading about Joss and Eshan and their epic love for the umpteenth time. Update! Put me out of my misery.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Azzure!!!

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 10:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

He is sooo sweet.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 12:39 am

Title: Chapter 9

So good!!! That mama is terrible, but they will be fine. I know the last chapter is coming, but we need an epilogue with them happy with a child or two. Plus alittle romance to end it all. Love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom2!  I don't plan to write an epilogue, but their story will continue in one form of another, be it one shots or a full-on sequel.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 06:51 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Thanks-a-million for semi-putting me out of my misery:)  Eshan has spoken; let's hope Joss quits trying to be noble and goes to her man!  Eshan is absolutely right in that the only person that can fix his splintered family is the witch that destroyed it; let's hope she can put her son first for once!  Somehow, I don't see this happening in time for the nuptials though.

I really can't wait for the beautiful ceremony now; let's not even mention the wedidng night...phew...Joss is going to be the recipient of years and years of pent up frustration (winks lasciviously)...oops; getting ahead of myself again.

Thanks for the quick updates!  More please:)

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 03:29 pm

Title: Chapter 9

gaaah dammit...! i'm

 

 

Joss better turn up and walk down that aisle or there will be a riot up in here!

 

i wish there was a magic pill that i could take so i could be with Eshan - he's simple woooow!! and i would gladly have his babies because Eshan has me

 

One chapter to goo - gaaah! the suspense is killing me, lol! thanks for the quick update!! :D :D



Author's Response:

LOL @ "Dying. Dying."  I so love your reviews. 

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 11:09 am

Title: Chapter 9

Eshan's words make me swoon and wish for myself to be Joss. Thanks for taking it easy on us and not giving us an extreme cliffhanger :)

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh, and thank you so much for responding to my earlier review and clearing up my own confusion ;)

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yep, you done did it again, JJ. Last chapter I was ready to rake someone over some coals, that person being Mrs. K and now I'm like where's some tissue? 

Eshan is just...can I have one, please? No seriously. The man is perfection and the way he breaks things down is like poetry, but nothing less than the truth. He's very right that the person who has to make things right, make amends is his mother. And that it would hurt him more and make it even harder for him to forgive his mother and for his family as a whole to come back together if he were to allow Joss to walk out of his life. 

Now I just need Joss to catch up to Eshan, and maybe she's getting there. She still only appeared to be looking at things from one perspective and not looking at things across the board. Don't let that cantankerous woman ruin your shot at everlasting happiness, Joss because she's made you believe you're the root cause of the turmoil her intolerance has set in motion. That is not your fault. 

I am TOO ready for this wedding to happen. Joss is better than me because I would just marry Eshan out of spite, lol. But maybe she's forgotten that in the Christian faith it says, that a man leaves his family and clings to his wife. And he who finds a wife finds a good thing. I think it's bout time Joss used some of her faith's teachings on this subject as her ammo. 

Anyways, loved the update as usual and how fast you're cranking these chapters out!!

Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh where can I find my own Eshan?? He was so sweet with Jos and I felt all of her despair through the chapter

Reviewer: PeppermintChocoSwirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 03:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

Eshan:  Now finish getting dressed, so we can get this party started.

Joss:  Ya'll come back in here and finish my nails and hair!  I's getting married!

Yay!! You brought E in to work his magic.  What kind of job does he have?  He needs to be working part-time as a R&B songwriter. lol



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  He's an engineer. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 9

Eshan told Joss right, sacrificing her love foe him will not heal his family. Joss is too stupid to see that!  PJ doesn't deserve her children,  take the baby aa soon NC as he or she is born and sterilize her dumb selfish self. I solove this story and Joss had better say I do!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 9

Eshen certainly has a way with words! Bring on the wedding AND the honeymoon!😍😘💛💙💜💚💗 Love it!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 12:23 am

Title: Chapter 9

Dammit I forgot to put my 10 stars on my last review!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌛🌛🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 9

My heart is so hurt and broken with poor Joss nd Eshan...

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You are too mean! Chapter 9 way too short. May we have the wedding please? 

Reviewer: Sienna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Quick question ... Am I the only one who read Eshan's words and womb clenched... I mean swoon!!



Author's Response:

To quote Cassuis Noir's review, "Dying.  Dying."  Lol!  Thanks RedMoon!

Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I'm so anxious,  you'd think it was my wedding. I hope they get married. Great story. 

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 08:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Omg! I've been reading the first story and now this story all morning. It's too good. I hope they get married. 

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Eshan needs better communication skills. Share your feelings, man!

Reviewer: Carla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 01:29 pm



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