Title: Chapter 7

this was yet again a GREEAT chapter! it started so beautiful with Baba showing Joss the beautiful wedding space and then the whole thing  nosedived...!

i feel for Pearl. she must be feeling so hurt after this. i know PJ is going to make a loud ruckus about the whole thing but frankly i dont give a DAMN about her...! i also feel for Eshan. he loves his family but to hear his mother's true attentions must've cut deeply. personally i think Joss should've let Pearl smack Eshan's mother - that woman needs to be taken down...!

i believe in Eshan and Joss! i believe there will be a wedding - hopefully Pearl will be there. dont care if Eshan's mum isnt, lool! :p

thanks for the quick update!! like always - you rock!!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 7

What the hell is wrong with Joss? She's surprised by what that woman did? Why can't she be honest with Eshan? Down playing all the crap she's taken from this woman. It won't get any better. Letting the sisters be the one to tell him the truth? Joss seems totally naive. How old is she again? I was feeling bad for her but all this longsuffering on her part is pissing me off. Grow a pair and take care of business. Did you not get ANY of Pearl's fire? Pearl is pissed and hurt and while it would've been wonderful for her to whup.that.ass, she really couldn't, but damn if I wouldn't pay good money to see it.

Can't wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 12:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I so love this story! It is beautifully written and engaging. Nothing would please me more to have Mama K dealt with by her husband and to have her dreadful niece Sahirah attend the wedding to watch Joss and Eshan exchange vows, to marry for love, while she  rots in a loveless marriage. Regardless, I anxiously await your next installment!!!



Author's Response:

Stay tuned.  You may get exactly what you wish for.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 1

At first, I was hesitant to read this story. Then, I realized that this story very much relates to me. My husband (the correct term would be husband in Iraq, while here it is safe to call him my boyfriend) is Iraqi and is a faithful Muslim. He is very prideful in his religion, just as I am in my religion. Reading this story had me thinking of the differences that we face and are facing. One of them being the religious differences. However, he respects my religion. He studied Christianity for two years and prides himself on it. But he did not study the religion to convert, but to be knowledgeable of it. Which I fully respect. I wanted to touch on something that was mentioned in one of the last chapters, where Eshan is speaking of his religion and her desire to not convert to Islam. My husband and I just had a conversation the other night relating to this, where he believes there is one God, it is just we all go about different ways of practicing it. 

We are not married, legally, but we are however bound by a temporary contract. I was curious to as if you had heard of this in Islam before writing this story? On my part, I have experienced prejudices towards my husband, and only because he is Muslim. Ironically, it is from my mother. Haha. We are southern as well, but she is not as coniving as Mrs. Koroush. She voices her opinion by saying, "Jay, you know how those men are." And those men she are referring to are Muslim men. It is quiet weird, because Mohamed's parents are accepting of different religions and even of my race (I am African-American).  He told me once that he can marry any woman no matter the race, it is just that they HAVE to believe in God. If they do no not, he cannot marry them. 

I enjoy this story thoroughly! It brings to light some situations (I will not call them issues anymore because they are not) that he and I will face, and I like it. Although fiction, it is something I can relate to so please dont stop writing it! 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing some of your personal experiences, and for reading and commenting, LA!  I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I've not heard of a temporary marriage contract, but it's an interesting subject I plan on looking into.  Unfortunately, the prejudice against Muslims is something I've repeatedly witnessed firsthand. 

Just a few days ago, a patient's mother was telling me about her husband's plans to fly here to see his new grandbaby after visiting and leaving a week before when the baby decided he wasn't ready to abandon his cush living quarters when expected.  I commented on the inconvenience of making that sort of trip twice, and she agreed and said it's even more inconvenient when you're wearing one of these, pointing to her hijab.  Apparently, she is "randomly" screened everytime she flies.  Hearing things like that is regrettably not at all surprising, but no less infuriating.  But what can you do but be a representation of God's love and encourage others to do the same? 

The whole "you know how those men are" is a familiar refrain here in the Dirty South.  Everyone says it about everyone that isn't just like them.  Some are more harsh and vehement than others.  It's refreshing to hear that Mohamed's parents are so open to other races and religions.  As for the others, tell him to keep his head up and remember that God is not a respecter of persons, and that in time, the fool always suffers for his ignorance.

Reviewer: LA Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 7

Why is she SO HATEFUL! What a cruel thing for her to do to them on  the eve of their wedding. Well, I bet I know who will NEVER babysit their children. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 02:12 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, I really believe that there are men like Eshan in this world, and the women they love are truely blessed. Difinitely didn't see that coming. 

Reviewer: dounome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 7

I am glad Pearl didn't hit her. The woman deserves the ultimate punishment, being disowned by Eshan. His poor father would be heart broken though. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 7

OMG, his mother is a straight up biyottch!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: monique32 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 03:42 am

Title: Chapter 7

Laaaaaaaaawd Mrs. K is messy! With a capital M! I looooooove it though! I'm probably one of the few that likes Mrs. K. You have written her so deviously well! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 01:24 am

Title: Chapter 7

Oh dat trick... she could not keep her mouth shut long enough.  Then I'm mad at P J for getting pregnant n not keeping her mouth shut.  Then I'm mad at mama Pearl for getting mad at the bride cuz she didn't tell her P J  was pregnant.  Hell I'm mad at everybody.... except for Eshan...I mean who could be mad at him such a noble fiance and he went off on his mother for dissing his woman. I'm sooooooooo wrapped up in this story I love it!

Reviewer: AD Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 7

That lady is so wicked how could she be so evil .I wonder what Eshans father is gonna say & will the love & respect Eshan have for her go can't wait for the next ch.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Oooohhhhh I am at work but had to take a time out and respond or write or you know what I mean about this chapter.  Right now you can call me Florida from good times because I want to scream "damn, damn, damn!!!" At the top of my lungs in dealing with mama Kourosh.  She just took a wonderful day from papa Kourosh and all and turned it into this circus on the eve of her son's wedding.  Little does she know she has lost her children in pursuing this witch hunt or persecution of Joss.  The rest of her family despite the ant of a brother is aware of everything Joss had to endure for her love of Eshan and has proven during all of this that she truly loves Eshan.  His mother cannot get past her religious and ethnic background to provide an unbiased opinion and truly see if she is a benefit or hindrance to Eshan's future.  Now your husband is disappointed in the woman he married.  Not only did you haunt her during the planning of the wedding, you STILL plan to haunt her during her marriage, not giving your son or his wife any peace.  There has to be something in the Quran that will chastise her for this behavior because the only one acting they have lost all sense of right and wrong, religious beliefs is mama Kourosh.  I sooo want to hear what papa Kourosh is going to say.  Plus I want Joss to comfort her mom and PJ's ass needs to grow the hell up.  Part of me believes she said that crap on purpose so it could cause drama in the family.  She is coming off very jealous to me and I am watching her with a side eye.  Just because you throwing your life away doesn't mean you get to crap on my parade.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Joss also needs to stand up and get a backbone with Mama Kourosh because I don't care how much I love you, someone disrespecting my momma needs her behind handed to them.  "Hold my earring and purse". Kiss on the cheek, " I love you, but I'm about to whoop your Mom's ass for disrespecting my momma and calling me out my name more than once.  Be right back"

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 11:05 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Geez!! What a Bitch!!! I can't wait to see what will happen next. I'm really glad the sisters were the ones that told Eshan everything that happened and not Joss. 

I'm also looking forward to Joss and Eshan's wedding night..lol..all that drama and tension added to their waiting will most likely make for an explosive first time haha. 

Thanks for the quick update. Looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 09:51 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I dont know how Joss can react so camly to Mrs.Kourosh!! I would've reacted like Pearl and tried to beat her up lol! 

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Wow!  Drama, drama, drama!  I love it!!!  Eshan's mama deserved a beat down! 😤.  

Loved this update. Now, I'm steady clicking my mouse for the next one. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 7

What a truly evil, hateful creature!  While I didn't expect her to become Joss' best friend, I really thought she would fall in line with her husband and at least keep her disdain and hatred for Joss under control.

Yes, it was a mistake for Joss to approach her and ask her to keep a confidence, knowing how much she hates her, but even I did not expect her to immediately go blab to Joss' mother!  Joss unwittingly gave her ammunition to create more havoc!

I love Eshan's dad...he is so sweet and caring; not sure how he can be joined to such a hateful creature as his wife is proving to be, but I guess, as they say opposites attract.

I'm really glad Asa and Delkash told on their mother, as she really should not get away with being so nasty to Joss and her family.  Hopefully Eshan's dad can get her under control as she is just doing too much right now.

I really feel for Pearl right now; I hope the truth comes out about who let the cat out of the bag about PJ's pregnancy, as we don't want PJ's drama to affect Joss even more.

Gosh, I really can't wait for the next update!  

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Joelle I am on bleeding knees at work begging for an update. My blood pressure and heart cannot take the suspense.....but if you force me to wait then i will......lol.....you are beyond amazeballs!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 05:44 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait for the wedding! I love these characters so much!

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Eshan's momma is evil and now should divorced from that good man and good father Yaghoub! More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 03:52 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Joss should've left well enough alone. Approaching Eshan's mother was a mistake. If she had said nothing, then Eshan's mother would've thought nothing. Aside from that, Joss's plate is too full to be bothered with PJ's crap. 

 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Maybe this will spur Joss to have some backbone where this evil woman is concerned.  I think she should quietly, but firmly rip her apart, marry her manand keep their kids away from her,for their safety.  The woman is just mean, evil and an embarassment to her family.   J can repair her relationship with Pearl, but those two mothers will never, ever get along--she called her daughters hoes, oh hell nah.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Jos, yo people, yo people. Your Aunt is insane. But, wahtever you say, she would stomp anyone in the ground if they came at Joss in a disrespectful way. Looking at you, Mama Kourosh.

This was hilar. The ending was just perfect.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 6

love love love! damn, i'm tearing up over here - that was beautiful! thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I love Joss and Eshan! And her family is crazy! Thanks for updating :)

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 6

I am loving Joss' family

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Date: July 01 2014 03:23 am



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